Willie and Kat, still the same
Added 2024-01-15 15:25:48 +0000 UTCHere are some more updated pages. The changes are still pretty small, because I'm not looking to change the style of the comic. Even though Kat and Willie both look pretty different from their current appearance in the story, Annie is the one I felt needed most work in the early pages. The new volume is close to finished, and I’m looking forward to showing more in the coming weeks and months!
Comments
I love the rounder shapes, but I kinda miss the death glare of the lower left panel :D
Koda
2024-01-16 22:29:19 +0000 UTCLooks great! :D
Renee - EnsembleofWolves
2024-01-16 16:27:37 +0000 UTCThanks, Tom!
will davison
2024-01-16 06:07:04 +0000 UTCThere was some argument about the boldface when Tom posted the first redone sample. But on this page I'm perfectly happy to see "study hall" in lightface. :)
Brian Harvey
2024-01-15 20:38:38 +0000 UTCOdd that the original images of William in the last panel of the first page and the 2nd panel of the 2nd page look almost identical, yet you only modified the latter, not the former.
Quasitling
2024-01-15 19:46:07 +0000 UTCI'm actually curious about the lettering. Removing all the emphasis--is that meant to let the reader invent our own "sound" for the dialogue?
Carl Fink
2024-01-15 16:40:22 +0000 UTCAgreed
sjlxndr
2024-01-15 15:59:31 +0000 UTCVery agreeable changes!
Calvin Lebowski
2024-01-15 15:30:00 +0000 UTC
