Pages 620 & 621 early in progress
Added 2021-05-09 22:10:03 +0000 UTC
Someone remind me if I forget, but I'm going to try and write up some stuff this week on my thought process whenever I hit a wall with writing a character, especially Tom. I had to do some work before these pages worked, and I think that process might help some people! I'm hoping I'll have time to write it on Tuesday.
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I've got to say that there is something endearing about the young woman who keeps referring to Tom as "Daddy." I guess it just makes her sound so young! I also find it amusing -though very realistic - that so much of werewolf governance depends on paperwork! Of course, Tom looks like a real neanderthal - someone who would rather settle conflicts by beating and mauling his opponents. This is not going to end well.
PS17
2021-05-11 13:39:21 +0000 UTC
