The deal
Added 2022-08-18 02:26:31 +0000 UTCWilliam (teen version)
35 pages + Extras
https://melancholic.fanbox.cc/posts/3753293
Special thanks to twain04 for correcting the text :)
If you like this work, take a few seconds and like it. It really motivates me :)
Comments
Ahaha. Yeah, that looks interesting :)
2022-08-19 10:23:58 +0000 UTCU should do more story like this, hot and fun to watch
Rocketxing
2022-08-19 00:32:51 +0000 UTCGreat! This was a very hot comic 🔥 The night at Will’s house, and a part two with Ralph (and maybe friends?) would be pretty cool!
ラモン
2022-08-18 20:33:53 +0000 UTCGreat, congratulations ..... a second part is necessary !!!!
2022-08-18 14:35:00 +0000 UTCA mighty fine comic you did there, Melancholic. I really love it and I would also love to see Ralphie taking pretty Wills virginity... sigh, one can dream
twain04
2022-08-18 13:32:59 +0000 UTCI understand your view... but that was always what I loved: I could put my emotions and words into your renders :) But as long as you provide the "textless renders", too, I still have that chance :) It's just that I am not the comic guy - but I see (from the amount of comments lately) that more of your supporters seem to like that better, as you do. Well, I'll try to live with that...
Shinji
2022-08-18 11:51:05 +0000 UTCYou had a very short vacation, I hope you had time to rest properly :) I will continue to make simple renders, but not as often. I like creating stories much more, without text it's very difficult to convey the boys' characters and their emotions. And making up stories is much more interesting than just making sets of pictures.
2022-08-18 10:12:27 +0000 UTCHa! Good one here. I'm just back from holidays and now could read a full new story... it is nice, that you always provide us with the full renders, too - because in the comic-style the pictures sometimes are just too small to enjoy them in the comic strip... but somehow I do miss "the old" Melancholic remembering such wonderful scenes without words as Michael the fallen angel or Alain in the moon-rocker...
Shinji
2022-08-18 09:22:43 +0000 UTCThank you. I can't say yet... I have two previous stories to finish.
2022-08-18 06:21:31 +0000 UTCAmazing story, very hot. Will we be seeing a "The Deal 2" soon?
2022-08-18 05:33:52 +0000 UTCNice story!
smoothie
2022-08-18 05:17:37 +0000 UTC
