One Evening in Tokyo (part 2)
Added 2022-01-29 11:41:58 +0000 UTC+6 new pictures (7-12)
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All the adults went out to celebrate and left Eddie to look after Allen...
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Just sharing my impressions. Seems as the story worked for you better ;) maybe I’m just a bit lost these days.. :)
Shinji
2022-01-29 20:08:47 +0000 UTCI don't think it's too far fetched. Kids fall asleep when they're tired, it doesn't matter where they are or who's also in the room. When I was eight I fell asleep on a ferry during a storm, for example. And a few years ago I watched with slight amusement a boy who fell asleep on the train I was on while the ride was a bit hard. His head rolled around something fierce... I think Alain somewhat played in Eddie's hands with his curiosity and the older boy is strongarming him a bit. But that's just my two cents. I've been proven wrong before ;)
twain04
2022-01-29 19:02:22 +0000 UTCHmm.. nicely done, yes, but I think a bit surreal. No one would still sleep when another is roaming around in his pants.. so I think, Eddie was waiting for the curious Alain to touch him.. but I can’t get, what happened in the end… is Eddie angry? Why is Alain so frightened in the last picture? Well.. some parts seem a bit far fetched, but Alain of course is the star of this series… I would name him second in line for me after Leo.. :) thanks for continuing this story in your typical wonderful manner…
Shinji
2022-01-29 18:14:39 +0000 UTCAbout the tower, yes there is, but its own ahahah https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tokyo_Tower Allen is a little provocateur :)
2022-01-29 12:38:30 +0000 UTCGods, Alain's blue eyes are drowning me every time... Nice to see a sexually curious boy getting into an awkward situation; Eddie doesn't seem to be the least bit amused to wake up with his package in the hands of the younger boy. Or was he waiting for just such an opportunity, secretly lusting after his young ward. Eddie, watch it. Don't turn out to be a creepy perv, that part's already in Connor's job description. Ah well, Alain has something on him that really just begs to be dominated by older, stronger guys... Incredibly well done, Melancholic. The suspense got me hooked and the cliffhanger in the last pic is superb. I have only one question: Does Tokyo have it's own sort of Eiffel Tower? Just curious ;)
twain04
2022-01-29 12:28:30 +0000 UTC
