Chapter 107 poll
Added 2023-02-26 02:26:45 +0000 UTCas always read the chapter and answer the following question.
Do you like this path? or should this be non cannon?
Comments
the whole whore thing is out of place. Even I think that comment was jarring. It needed to be something more supportive and loving. Also the blackbast arc was explained in the very last Heather chapter. It deep dives into Frank;'s feelings on the matter and establishes that he has been struggling with it for a while now. A brief conversation with Roric makes him seriously consider her. He then takes his feelings to Heather and Breanne who support the idea with a few ground rules. The chapter ends with him and Blackbast having an honest conversation followed by making love.
Omnixius
2023-02-26 06:05:03 +0000 UTCHonestly after how blackbast acted in ch. 101 i had impression she is starting to fall for roric and throwing her back at frank seems too sudden the rest is quite interesting but it feels a little wierd. Well i havent had time to read heather story yet so maybe i dont know. If you draged it out and dropped some hints about frank changing his mind over time i quite like the idea but this feels forced. Especialy how hard he refused that idea before. Especialy if the whore training happens heather will end up with other man one way or the other eventualy . The way collar works it will be hard to resist. Overall i like the idea but not so suddenly out of nowhere.
Peter Kraushuber
2023-02-26 05:26:01 +0000 UTC
