Torn Decisions - Part 10b
Added 2024-05-22 08:05:23 +0000 UTCSamantha decides to really reward Henry and Alex.
Password - abella
Hey Uncreative Readers,
Here is Part 10b of the story. I really enjoyed making this part and I think you all will enjoy it as well. I am pretty sure I fixed the formatting for pictures so they are more visible and fit screens better. Let me know what you guys think and as always I hope you all enjoy this part!
The Uncreative Writerr
Comments
Great feedback. Another reason I put them in two parts is because I did not feel like they should go in one part but instead two different parts to really excel the story behind it. I don't want to rush or force anything as it affects the story. I am super glad to hear that the formatting is better! I also agree that the escalation part would happen next after that scene between Alex and Katie. It is coming don't worry I have no forgotten about it. I am just trying to get everything to work up to that. Hope you enjoy the next part and I thank you for your feedback!
Uncreative Writer
2024-05-28 21:58:40 +0000 UTCThe formatting and pics are definitely better in my opinion. But 10a and 10b could easily be one part...I don't know why it was split. I have seen ImageChest stories with 200 slides in a single part, so I don't see why there was any need to split these two parts. Also, continuity issues - once the b/s started having oral, the readers would typically expect escalation or at least status quo in their situation. But they seem to have not progressed at all. That's my only critique.
NeoBee99
2024-05-23 03:43:25 +0000 UTC
