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Sue Storm balcony scene Pg1 (revised)

Ok, so I just changed the expression in Sue's face in the right top panel,  
closing her eyes, and relocated some captions/dialogue to create a more controlled effect.  I think this  improves the page a tad.
 

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg1 (revised)

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