Sue Storm balcony scene Pg1
Added 2018-01-11 19:13:13 +0000 UTCMaybe I should have posted this one before...
I wanted to do a clean up and straightening of lines but I think it's better to not spend so much time in just the build-up pages.
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I wanted to maybe change a bit the topmost panel of the right hand page, so it does not look just like the one in the previous page. Giving her a more noticeably different expression. My original idea was to use the effect of the panel repetition to build up an element of sustained physical tension by emphasizing visually the standoff between the two. Notice how I do not put panels right between them, but just leave the empty space as visual signifier of how they are both confronted and so, so close to each other, creating erotica tension. But that would have worked better if the panels lined up beneath each other, showing a downward flow, not skipping to the next page after going for closeups of their faces. I think that top panel should have been instead a long panel of just the closeup to Sue closing her eyes, sustaining the increased closing in of our viewpoint and focusing on Sue's mental struggle. And we get less ugly-ass Dorrek in our panels that way, too. So should I redraw that?
Ksennin
2018-01-11 22:14:39 +0000 UTC
