Who is inside?
Added 2018-02-06 17:18:28 +0000 UTCMy Yummy - work in progress.
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I like the lighting on this. This is why I support you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
David Fontenot
2018-02-07 16:11:59 +0000 UTCThanks! About the fingers: once she presses with her index finger, it's gonna bend if the finger is relaxed. If it's strained, it will not bend, this is how I thought it should be. Eniah strains her finger in order to push her tight, elastic tummy. About the rest static fingers - sorry, here's a scene bug. I can't fix it at this point, but I know where I made a mistake and will keep this in mind for my next projects. Thank you so much for such a detailed comment. As you see, I was attentive to your advices you geve me in "Never Give Up" (about the overlighted belly) ;)
2018-02-07 10:29:17 +0000 UTCThanks for your feedback. This project is near finishing, so, sorry, I will not re-make this scene. But *little spoiler*, for the next project - there will be a bigger prey and bigger bulges :)
2018-02-07 10:00:36 +0000 UTCTwo critiques are about the hand and finger movement. When her hand smacks her belly, the fingers should start curved and straighten as she touches her belly. The fingers should also spread out a bit. Her fingers should spread, widen out as her hand hits her belly. Second, when she pokes her belly, her finger she bend backward. Her finger should start curved. When her finger touches, her finger should bend the other way a little. Those two things might make it look more natural. I hope you like my suggestions. Please let us know if you like the suggestions. I am so proud to support you!
David Fontenot
2018-02-06 18:23:21 +0000 UTCThis is actually my favorite part of these videos! I like that it is a loop. I've been watching it for a half hour LOL! I hope that at the end there is wider shot of her with even bigger struggles. Maybe one small push on one side then another small push on the other. Finishing with a big push like this one.
David Fontenot
2018-02-06 18:09:09 +0000 UTC
