Marve Chapter 2 Storyboards - Opening Scene
Added 2025-02-13 01:12:18 +0000 UTCThe first scene of chapter 2! As you can see, I already felt the need for more drafts than previously. I'm used to doing straight-up vore scenes like chapter 1, but this is where the story really shifts focus. You can see how the script was mostly set in stone, but finding the best way to present said script took some doing.
The infamous pooping scene was actually particularly hard for me to work out, cause I knew I only wanted one page dedicated to it, for fear of making it seem like disposal will be a prevelant theme.
020103 - I planned to do the shading of the first page traditionally, either with ink or markers. I dropped this for fear of ruining the page in the process though, but I'd love to give this a try in the future!
020302/020404 - I really liked this layout of one panel having Marve look at his phone with his belly slightly visible behind it, then moving the phone to reveal the belly, but couldn't quite get it to work. It was important to me that the first time we see Marve's belly - effectively revealing that digestion is a thing in this story, and how fast it works - had to be the first panel of a left-side page.
020303 - This sketch shows most clearly the direction I had originally planned to take this chapter. In short, it was to involve a card game, like a parody of MTG. But, without going too far in to needless detail, I felt like that approach took too much focus away from what was important in the relevant scenes. I'll discuss more of this when we get there though! I also planned to show the back of Espen's head on this page, but decided I didn't want him to be seen until his actual appearence later on.
020305/020405 - Not much of note on these sketches themselves, but you can see the back of the page peeping through! The start of this chapter contains a lot of dialogue between Marve and Espen, and I really didn't want this to drag. So, I tried to see how it'd look to have four rows of panels on one page, since I usually like to use a maximum of three rows, and I needed to see how that'd look at full scale.
