DonSilverStories : Toxic Attraction: Chapter 27

Would seem so but early reviews of 28 seem to point towards the SOS with the three with maybe a slight step in a different direction. With out the input of Darrow breaking it down i,m confused at what that shift may be. So will wait it out.

Earl0849

2025-03-24 01:40:29 +0000 UTC

Since Sarah and Dan last had sex in chapter 21 in Lester’s apartment after the Lester-Vernon-Sarah scene, Sarah has done the following - - Lester fucked Sarah in his bed in the Chicago apartment; she slept in his bed all night, waking in the morning (while Dan slept in his bedroom). - Sarah fucked Byron in his office while Dan stayed at the restaurant. - Lester fucked Sarah on the couch in his Chicago apartment as Dan watched and Sarah told Dan to pull out his pathetic dick; Sarah also rimmed Lester. - Later that night, Lester again fucked Sarah in his bed while Dan slept on couch. - Sarah sucked and fucked Lester in the back seat of her car in the hospital parking lot; Otis jerked off into her face; and she fucked Lester on the hood of her car. - Lester and Jesse fucked Sarah all night in the Chicago hotel room (while Dan was in jail). - Sarah and Lester fucked on the futon in Sarah’s house, including Lester face fucking her, while the kids are asleep upstairs. - Sarah and Lester fuck in Lester’s office, while co-workers were outside his office. - Sarah blows Otis in the boiler room of the hospital. - Sarah and Lester fuck in Lester’s hotel room while watching the video of her and Otis. - Sarah has phone sex with Lester when she is on the couch in her living room while the kids sleep upstairs. Over the course of these encounters, Sarah says to Lester that Dan is weak and pathetic: she tells Lester many times that she loves him; she tells Lester that he is the only person that can give her what she needs; she tells Lester that he has fucked her more times and has cum in her pussy more times than Dan; She agreed that she was Lester’s slut and would do anything he asks: she told Lester that she likes being a good girl. She admitted to Lester that she would rather be his personal slut than a good wife; Lester gives Sarah a diamond ring and proposes to her in a restaurant with people nearby; and at the end of the most recent chapter, she falls asleep in her bed thinking of Lester’s cum and how much she needs it and loves it. I think that Dan is in deep shit.

Rjh200m

2025-03-24 00:19:55 +0000 UTC

Sexually and emotionally Sarah has turned to Lester from Dan….this is not to say that she doesn’t still love Dan, but so much of her emotions and daily life now center around Lester…. If I had to select a single moment where the emotional transition took place for Sarah, I would go back to chapter 25 and the scene where Sarah and Dan are talking in his car about the night before - Sarah getting fucked all night in the hotel room by Lester and Jesse, and Dan spending the night in jail…..here are Sarah’s internal thoughts while in the car with Dan - “…..As angry as she wanted to be with Lester for pitting her against her husband like this, there was a dark thrill inside her that was tickled by the situation he’d put her in. Being fucked all night by more than one man had been frankly amazing… …….Lester had opened up new worlds for her. He was unpredictable and delivered her new experiences that she was beginning to crave…… ……These are experiences that Dan hadn’t come close to giving her in all their years of marriage….. ……Maybe that was why Lester had kept Dan at bay. He knew that Dan would end things and deny Sarah these new adventures…” The last two internal thoughts are “marriage-altering”! Sarah admits that Lester gives her something that Dan never has…..and she actually rationalizes why it was ok for Lester to arrange for Dan to spend the night in jail. It’s one thing to verbally humiliate Dan while having sex with Lester, it’s completely another thing to be ok with having your husband thrown in jail and accepting it because it allowed you to spend a whole night getting fucked….and if you remember, she basically blamed Dan for getting arrested because he had too much to drink. DS is a master at providing conflicting emotions for Sarah and Dan to keep us guessing on what will happen and ultimately what they will do…..but I think this moment in chapter 25 was pivotal. And by the way….although Sarah told Dan that Lester should be held accountable for what he did, she let Lester convince her that the whole episode proved that Dan is weak and pathetic and that Dan was defeated by Lester…..and she just keeps fucking Lester anywhere and anytime, with less and less attention paid to Dan.

Rjh200m

2025-03-23 13:07:14 +0000 UTC

I have always felt Sarah & Lester are living on the edge both at home and at hospital. Never was made clear what if any arrangement Lester might have with Richard & Mary but even if he did many more staff at hospital. I would never put any faith in Otis if anything I would think he would try to expand his influence on Sarah and include some buddies. At home I think it's a done deal that Lester will gain open daily entry to the home. This will probably create a problem when parents fine out. Again, this is why i said when Lester is faced with push back, he will set out to corrupt and compromise the parents. He will seek Sarah's help and loyally to do this. This will be the test of the relationship and determine how far she has fallen. Dan will emerge as a serios player to protect the kids. Everything is at stake here. This could get very dark and bring TA to the end.

Earl0849

2025-03-21 15:17:13 +0000 UTC

Earl - here is something from chapter 13 when Lester was at the hospital helping fix the IT system and he was in Sarah’s office and wanted a blowjob - “Sarah thought about what would happen to her if she was caught doing this. Professionally she would probably be fired, which would ultimately devastate her financial plans with Dan. Personally, she knew how much her coworkers gossiped. Something like this would ruin them if it got out to her friends and family.” A lot has happened since this chapter, including Sarah losing any inhibition about having sex with Lester in the workplace. But many times DS lays the groundwork in an earlier chapter for something to happen in a later chapter, and here he specifically mentions the risk of Sarah being found out by friends and family, something that you have commented about a lot. If this were to happen, it could be the anchor for the ending of the story as it would probably force an end to the status quo as it now exists. And we have seen a public awareness of the Dan and Sarah situation already with the Jesse scene at Dan’s office that is currently unfolding.

Rjh200m

2025-03-21 10:57:52 +0000 UTC

Or….as Lester fucks her, he says “Dan wants you to stop fucking me, tell me to stop and I will right now”….”No Lester, don’t ever stop fucking me”, Sarah responds….

Rjh200m

2025-03-21 02:07:01 +0000 UTC

I think he'll make it a point the next day when he's fucking her to say something like "I thought your pathetic little hubby wanted you to take a pause. But here you are, spreading your legs for me once again. You'll pause when I say pause, you little slut."

Mark Albright

2025-03-20 12:01:56 +0000 UTC

MA - good point, Lester has made it a point of telling Sarah that Dan does not matter, I don’t think she has responded specifically to this, but as you say, I think it is coming…..I still find it amazing that Sarah did not seem upset at all that Dan was in jail….and when she asked Lester that morning in the hotel room where Dan was, that’s when Lester responded along the lines of “it doesn’t matter”. But he has more work to do on this since in the last scene of the current chapter, Sarah tells Lester that Dan wants her to take a “pause” in seeing him. This must have upset Lester a great deal because it indicates to him that in Sarah’s mind, Dan still matters.

Rjh200m

2025-03-20 02:47:35 +0000 UTC

Hey he is and she will get more training as Lester moves in.

FU

2025-03-20 02:16:08 +0000 UTC

Lester is going to show up again while the girls are still up, playing nice and getting the girls to call him Uncle Lester and that he is there to watch out for them while dad is not there, and he will be sleeping in mommies room so she will feel safe.

FU

2025-03-20 02:14:36 +0000 UTC

I think Lester's going to get Sarah to demean Dan more and more as her conditioning continues. He's training her to belittle Dan, at first because it pleases Lester, and then because she gets off on it. He'll say does it matter what Dan thinks. She'll say, "Not at all. He's pathetic."

Mark Albright

2025-03-19 21:49:05 +0000 UTC

I think it is just something she says to Dan to acknowledge somewhat that Lester does not play nice…. But remember that Sarah actually told Dan during their phone call that she gets turned on when Lester messes with him. So, I don’t think she is going to do anything except maybe mention it to Lester…but Lester will probably convince her that Dan deserves what he gets….this will turn Sarah on even more, and she will orgasm even harder…..

Rjh200m

2025-03-19 20:42:35 +0000 UTC

So Sarah said she is not going to let Lester off the hook for the Jesse thing at the hotel. What is she going to do about it that will teach Lester a lesson?

FU

2025-03-19 19:28:27 +0000 UTC

Tim, I would not say that, it is merely a different of opinions. I content it's not about love but rather a strong dislike for someone that someone being Dan. Take Dan out of it and all the fun goes out of it for Lester. He wants to win and winning for Lester is taking away from Dan something he loves. Sarah and the kids. Truly an evil person not capable of love as we all know it. He preys on the weak Sarah and Dan and will use people to achieve his goal. He will lash out at anyone who gets in his way anyone who could prevent him from destroying Dan. Sarah has become addicted to his cock. If Lester was into drugs Sarah by now would be a heavy user like with his cock she would do anything for him for her fix. Sarah will turn on Dan and will fuck and suck anyone in front of Dan to humiliate him. She will give up her kids for him. She will assist him to corrupt and humiliate her family if it comes to that. This is not a love story. If Lester was removed Sarah would fine another no turning back for her, no happy ending. Sarah is rapidly becoming a sexual predator just like Lester she is learning his way and even if Dan and her got back together she would remain a predator and he a cock. She now has the resume for success just has to put it all into motion.

Earl0849

2025-03-19 00:57:46 +0000 UTC

I would say Roy was dropped on his head, but that would imply someone loved him enough to hold him

tim

2025-03-18 22:59:28 +0000 UTC

Tim, I must say you made your point to me. Lester does not love Sarah nor does she love him. They are Two very sick people. I somehow without proof do not think this was met to be a love story. I have noticed that some become thin skinned if one may disagree. I,m in it for the sex and do not pay a fee for a love story. I get all the love I need right here at home. So lets get on with it and see how low those two sick fucks can go. Royston While Lester is loving on Sarah I would still like to see Lester and her loving on her Mother.

Earl0849

2025-03-17 19:36:51 +0000 UTC

Yea like riding Sarah's face while Lester makes a Video.

Earl0849

2025-03-17 17:06:26 +0000 UTC

Well... I think she will make Sarah clean the room and do some other menial tasks for her...

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-17 16:57:16 +0000 UTC

I still think with all this sex going on at Hospital and Sarah's home that they will get caught by parents. I think parents will reject Lester outright and Lester will want to seek revenge. Seems like Don to date wants to dance around this but could they not get caught in small town and small workplace. Would be interesting to see how Lester & Sarah would spin this if caught and what Sarah would do if given a make a choice from Parents and not from Dan, she is deep into her addiction don't see her coming back from it but rather going deeper with little push from Lester.

Earl0849

2025-03-17 16:55:31 +0000 UTC

Was wondering if that maid at Lester's hotel is going to get in on any action? Maybe ride Sarah's face. What do you think Cat?

Earl0849

2025-03-17 16:30:16 +0000 UTC

Ok. Just this once. 😊

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-17 15:41:30 +0000 UTC

I'm sorry, Goddess Cat. Will you forgive me?

Mark Albright

2025-03-17 15:31:41 +0000 UTC

Mark started it!

Terminal Itch

2025-03-17 14:48:17 +0000 UTC

Now you're embarrassing me, guys... ☺️

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-17 14:44:46 +0000 UTC

Those cheeks would definitely turn red if I got hold of them. Oh, you mean her face...

Terminal Itch

2025-03-17 14:37:08 +0000 UTC

I can see Cat's cheeks turning red. Cat rules!!!

Mark Albright

2025-03-17 14:34:03 +0000 UTC

There is no Kayden Kross! There is no Gal Gadot! There is only Cat Kuskie!

Terminal Itch

2025-03-17 14:29:51 +0000 UTC

OMG! I feel myself blushing...! 😳

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-17 14:26:31 +0000 UTC

I'm with Kat I want action at hospital. I want Mary to do her with strap on as she sucks off Richard and Otis.

Earl0849

2025-03-17 14:18:17 +0000 UTC

Yeah. Cat is in charge here

Terminal Itch

2025-03-17 14:11:44 +0000 UTC

Yeah, what Cat says. Whatever she says.

Mark Albright

2025-03-17 14:06:02 +0000 UTC

Prostituting Sarah is merely the extreme of her degradation and submission. Receiving money is just a minor detail; Either way, Sarah will always be a cheap whore and will therefore always have more and more lower-class clients...

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-17 13:54:56 +0000 UTC

I don't think he'll make money off her because he needs it. He'll just do it to show her she's his slut. I can see guys giving him money in front of Sarah as he offers her up to them.

Mark Albright

2025-03-17 12:54:12 +0000 UTC

Byron and Thornhill do nothing for me. I love the idea of getting the D&D group back together. After all, those characters seem to be the closest thing to "friends" Lester has and isn't he "engaged" to Sarah now? I could absolutely see a celebratory get together where they all congratulate Lester and he, in turn, rewards their loyalty to him with a taste of Sarah. I picture Sarah stripped and on her back on the dining room table. Her legs spread with Lester between them. A nerd on each side as she strokes them and another at her head keeping her mouth busy. All the while, Dan sitting in the corner, pinching his nose.

Jon Smith

2025-03-17 12:48:21 +0000 UTC

I don't think Lester needs or wants whatever money his exploits of Sarah might generate. I think the feeling he gets being in control of Sarah and seeing her continuously debase herself for his own pleasure is worth more to him than any amount of money. What makes it even more perfect is Sarah thinks this is her sexual awakening. She actually thinks she has a modicum of control when, in actuality, Lester has pulled every string. I'm absolutely hoping this story gets darker and Sarah continues her fall.

Jon Smith

2025-03-17 12:40:25 +0000 UTC

That's pretty much where I'm hoping it'll go

Terminal Itch

2025-03-17 10:56:51 +0000 UTC

Well... Now that Jesse has exposed Dan's cuckold tendencies in front of his boss and colleagues, the public humiliation of Sarah's husband will deepen and become almost unbearable. What was once a source of pleasure and excitement will gradually turn into a burden that Dan will struggle to carry. He will become the laughingstock of his workplace, and no one will respect him anymore... Meanwhile, Lester will turn Sarah into the slut of the hospital… ruining her professional reputation, letting Otis chase and bully her at work, and making her throw herself at every man in the hospital… By the end I'm sure that Lester will make money from Sarah's new skills… Yeah… I like it rough and harsh... 😉😘

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-17 10:37:27 +0000 UTC

Earl - you may ultimately be right, but I think Dan will do something surprising, but it remains to be seen whether it is too little too late as you say.

Rjh200m

2025-03-16 23:40:54 +0000 UTC

This would be hot! I am definitely in for it. I am in for that, maybe a D&D party where she does a blowbang with them all. I'd love another round of her & Byron because I love how he demanded her. I also really want her to be ordered to suck off Richard Thornhill and Lester every morning to start the work day

TD40

2025-03-16 23:03:49 +0000 UTC

RJ, I do not think we heard the last of Dan, but I feel his response will be too little too late. Kinda like politics for Dan go along with the program or get left behind. The little lady is deep into it now and is only going to dive deeper. So, I think what is best for him is watch the kids and sit in his chair and masturbate when Lester lets him watch him and others degrade Sarah.

Earl0849

2025-03-16 22:46:13 +0000 UTC

Agreed. Lester said in this chapter "I'm going to make you do the nastiest things you've ever done in your life... And you're going to love each and every one of them!" Judging by that statement alone, we should only just have scratched the surface of what Lester has in store for Sarah. Aside from rimming Lester a couple of times and Vernon once, what else has she done that's truly "Nasty"? Blew a janitor in the boiler room? I'm definitely looking for more scenes where Sarah debases herself in the name of pleasing Lester. I would love more scenes of her rimming, not just Lester, and I really want Cash to get his hands on Sarah. Lester alluded to it in the scene at his hotel and, I'm sure it was a "heat of the moment" statement to push Sarah's buttons, but it seemed to have worked and I absolutely want Lester to track Cash down so he can get his hands on Sarah. Sarah being gangbanged by Cash and some of his friends is a scene I want to read most.

Jon Smith

2025-03-16 21:09:09 +0000 UTC

Don's been pretty consistent releasing TA on the last day of each month, lately. As for the "Undercover" story, nothing yet for us plebeians not on the $35 tier.

Jon Smith

2025-03-16 20:54:17 +0000 UTC

Sorry to be boring, but does anyone have any idea when Chapter 28 will be available? And the undercover cop one? I'm on the lowest tier, I guess, if that helps

Terminal Itch

2025-03-16 20:44:32 +0000 UTC

Dan, you know, Sarah’s husband, who is almost finished with his master plan to vanquish Lester and reclaim his wife….he will emerge from the Chicago apartment like Superman and take no prisoners….he will act with speed, divisiveness and purpose…..

Rjh200m

2025-03-16 18:51:44 +0000 UTC

Who's Dan?

Michael Haase

2025-03-16 16:14:23 +0000 UTC

For sure. Even Lester should know he could make money with Sarah as high-end escort. She would love the work.

Earl0849

2025-03-16 15:30:13 +0000 UTC

Team Sarah!

Rjh200m

2025-03-16 14:13:15 +0000 UTC

Does offer a better description of job. However I think Otis should assume duties of bodyguard. Dan needs to remain home and active in child care. I do feel Otis should have a benefit package as well.

Earl0849

2025-03-16 13:04:55 +0000 UTC

See? You have no actual points. You insult people and then act like you're the victim when they insult you back. You literally are incapable of addressing a single point anyone has given you. You just turn around and smuggly "challenge" us. Here's a challenge - actually engage with what I said. Would you characterize a troll like woman breaking into your home to try to have sex with you, and plot to murder your wife and children as love OR think "damn I need to call the cops on this psycho"?

tim

2025-03-16 12:50:46 +0000 UTC

Earl - I think Dan would prefer to be described as Sarah’s appointment organizer and scheduler, as well as videographer and bodyguard!

Rjh200m

2025-03-16 12:36:54 +0000 UTC

Ok , Tim. It seems you can’t conduct a reasonable discussion without going off into a rant full of capitalisation and lols. Not much point in carrying it on.

Royston smith

2025-03-16 12:19:41 +0000 UTC

I didnt say that was MY definition of love. I said that was THE definition of love. You can DESCRIBE love in any way you want. But you cant DEFINE it any way you want. You cant punch your girlfriends face in till its a bloody caved in mess and say "oh god I just loved her so much that this was the only way I could physically express it". You would be sent to prison and given mandatory therapy. Even in your quote, Lester thinks about what shes wearing and then im pretty sure this is when he sneaks back into the house to fuck her in the tub. Regardless you cant even properly defend Lester - you even reiterate MY point. "Lester's perception of love" EXACTLY. I said I definitely think he processes his feelings as love but they are not actual love. They are an unhealthy obsession, and a malicious need for control. He literally copied her key to get into her house and was angry when Dan changed the lock. How would you feel if an ugly ass troll woman copied the key to your house and just let herself in so she could play with your balls whenever she felt like? Your wife home? Troll girl dont give a fuck. Your kids home? Troll girl will pay someone to kill them. Would you want to keep having sex with troll girl if you knew she actively looked for a hitman to kill your wife and children? That she only gave up on the plan cuz no one would take the job. Cuz thats how she expresses her "love" in your opinion lol. You conveniently keep dodging everyones points of Lesters ACTUAL actions and just coping out to "welllllll if you look at other cultures blah blah blah". "Jesse also says hes in love, should we not believe him??" YES. Hes not in love with Sarah either. Hes a psycho stalker. Its pretty clear. You want proof? The title of the story is TOXIC ATTRACTION. Not "Really Reasonable Forms of Love and Affection that are misunderstood because we live in a Western society that has an actual definition of Love that can be distilled down to a pretty simple emotional expression".

tim

2025-03-16 11:57:15 +0000 UTC

So, at least one good thing has come from this exchange, Tim, you have made some serious points and given us your definition of love. It is “a deep affection”. I don’t disagree with most of what you say about Lester, either. But, and here is the rub, I think the following proves my point. From the end of ch 19, we read this:” Lester sat behind the wheel of his car not moving…,He felt marvellous, complete…in his mind, he felt a serene sense of satisfaction. All he wanted was to have her with him all the time. All he knew was that he seemed to be enveloped in .. euphoria and wanted it to last forever. Sarah was a completely different species. There were women, and then there was Sarah Williams. He wanted more of her. Needed more of her. One of the windows upstairs in the Williams' home lit up. She was up there. Doing what, he didn’t know…[she] was moving around, wearing who knows what, doing something just up there. Sarah had wanted him to go back [to his hotel room and jerk off to her [but]everything else paled in comparison to the real live thing, which was upstairs right now”. Now, that may not map to your definition of love, or Earl’s or mine, but it maps to Lester’s perception of love. Read those lines again:”Sarah was a completely different species. There were women, and then there was Sarah Williams. He wanted more of her. Needed more of her”. Obsession? Adoration? Intoxication? Love? Tim, most things in life are relative, not absolute. They depend on context, culture and historical perspective. There can be no absolute definition of love that we all share. As proof let’s bring in Jesse. He professes to love Sarah too. Is his perception of love much different to Lester’s? He can’t get her out of his mind, he adores her, just as Lester seems to in the passage above. But looking on as readers we may make the judgement that he is just a stalker. However, he meets your definition. He has a deep affection for her. Anyway, good to chew the cud with you, Tim.

Royston smith

2025-03-16 09:54:06 +0000 UTC

I would say Lester and Dan get off on it for two different reasons. Dan likes it because he likes seeing his hot wife fck other men, it's a kink. With Lester he is turned on by power & control of Sarah. He doesn't want to just fck her and watch her be f*cked. He wants her to be under his control, to do his bidding regardless of what or who is commanded of her, that is what turns him on. I am personally more attracted to what Lester is (though obviously his character is a scumbag). I think there is nothing Sexier than making beautiful woman do dirty things for you.

TD40

2025-03-16 01:13:27 +0000 UTC

Earl - the difference is huge. Although the story portrays Dan as the initiator of Sarah’s behavior, the reality is that Sarah is driving things and manipulating Dan to get what she needs and wants. Many examples of this. But with Lester, he is controlling Sarah. And he does not get off from seeing Sarah do it with other guys, like Dan does, Lester gets off by controlling Sarah. Making her doing things she never before contemplated.

Rjh200m

2025-03-16 01:07:38 +0000 UTC

TD, I am still wondering what this love affair is that some have for Lester. One could very easily make a case that Lester is not very different then Dan. First, we have Jesse fucking Sarah while Lester watches and second, we have Sarah giving Otis a BJ while Lester watches. So, can someone out there in commentary land explain to me what they see as the difference? Please don't insult me by suggesting that Dan gets off and Lester does not when we know that would not be the case.

Earl0849

2025-03-15 23:55:06 +0000 UTC

"Come back to me when you have serious points to make" Proceeds to say that his point is that if you take away the definition for love then Lester is in love. Lmao. You got us. Yup. If you take away the word's definition then Lester is in fact in love. Because "love" is meaningless. The problem is that love does have an actual definition. And Lester does not qualify for it. It's deep affection. Love is deep affection. Lester does not have a deep affection for Sarah. He flat out LAMENTS every facet of her that is not tied to her sexuality. He has no interest in her life, her hobbies, her thoughts. He pretends to in order to have sex with her. thats not affection. He wants to isolate every facet of her personality and purge it till only her sexuality is left. Do you honestly think that if Lester was given the choice of Sarah being a whole person with thoughts and feelings or a single minded nyphomaniac tied to his bed that he would choose the "whole" Sarah? Stop.

tim

2025-03-15 22:58:14 +0000 UTC

She's a bad girl...

Mark Albright

2025-03-15 22:08:52 +0000 UTC

So, gentlemen, Thank-you for your definitions. Mine is this: love means you would sacrifice everything for that person, even your life. So, here we have 3 different definitions of love: Earl thinks it is companionship and loyalty and sharing ( all good stuff, by the way Earl), Tim thinks it is to do with midgets and urination, and I think it is about putting the other person before yourself. That’s my point, love is different things to different people. Now for Lester it’s about desire, not just for anybody, but for Sarah Williams. He wants to possess her, claim her as his. That is his version of love. And Cat, with an ass like that whatever you say goes. I ain’t arguing.

Royston smith

2025-03-15 20:15:34 +0000 UTC

So, gentlemen, Thank-you for your definitions. Mine is this: love means you would sacrifice everything for that person, even your life. So, here we have 3 different definitions of love: Earl thinks it is companionship and loyalty and sharing ( all good stuff, by the way Earl), Tim thinks it is to do with midgets and urination, and I think it is about putting the other person before yourself. That’s my point, love is different things to different people. Now for Lester it’s about desire, not just for anybody, but for Sarah Williams. He wants to possess her, claim her as his. That is his version of love.

Royston smith

2025-03-15 20:14:15 +0000 UTC

. So, gentlemen, Thank-you for your definitions. Mine is this: love means you would sacrifice everything for that person, even your life. So, here we have 3 different definitions of love: Earl thinks it is companionship and loyalty and sharing ( all good stuff, by the way Earl), Tim thinks it is to do with midgets and urination, and I think it is about putting the other person before yourself. That’s my point, love is different things to different people. Now for Lester it’s about desire, not just for anybody, but for Sarah Williams. He wants to possess her, claim her as his. That is his version of love.

Royston smith

2025-03-15 20:13:42 +0000 UTC

I'm sure that Sarah would...

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-15 20:13:01 +0000 UTC

Like it. You and I are of one mind TD.

Royston smith

2025-03-15 20:02:20 +0000 UTC

Sarah was smart she would dump that crazy Lester and use her talent for more enterprising undertaking. Use Dan as her pimp and babysitter Otis as her driver and make some serious money.

Earl0849

2025-03-15 18:18:43 +0000 UTC

Would you let Lester order you to dress slutty?

Mark Albright

2025-03-15 18:12:14 +0000 UTC

Yeah... I also found it strange that Lester hadn't made a demand about Sarah's attire for the next work day... (perhaps he'll make it by morning...)

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-15 17:48:50 +0000 UTC

No, thank you.

Mark Albright

2025-03-15 16:17:58 +0000 UTC

Thanks Mark and Term!

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-15 16:09:53 +0000 UTC

How long before she's wearing short skirts, no bra and Lester's ring proudly on her left hand? She will want everyone to know she's Lester's slut.

Mark Albright

2025-03-15 16:05:06 +0000 UTC

I agree many directions he could go with this. I think she could improve her employment if she played up to Richard. She may have to let Mary have some of her but should not be problem for Sarah. Otis could past her around down at the tavern after work. I think she would love a Golden shower. Not into Byron or Jesse getting any. Would like to see Lester get a little push for Sarah from someone else as strong as him. Would also like the family reject Lester fully and completely to see what kind of pain Lester would lay on them with the full knowledge of Sarah. So, as you say TD how low will she go?

Earl0849

2025-03-15 15:44:44 +0000 UTC

Agree with you, Cat. Agree with Mark too

Terminal Itch

2025-03-15 15:10:11 +0000 UTC

Nice butt, Cat.

Mark Albright

2025-03-15 14:20:57 +0000 UTC

I see a lot of comments saying TA has run it's course, I personally completely disagree. There are so many more things I would like to have happen to Sarah: -BDSM, some bindage and whips. -getting another night with Byron and making her his bitch all night -her getting fucked and degraded by Richard Thornhill -maybe a dungeon and dragons group blowback and bukkake -Gangbang -hooking up with some fat old random accountant -Golden Shower I could go on and on. We are just getting to the dirtiest parts and I am all here for it. I will admit I don't know how he can continue the Dan & Sarah storyline too much more. Maybe they separate for a few chapters? Maybe Lester figures out how to land Dan in jail for a year, who knows. I am all in for many more chapters of beautiful Sarah getting degraded by men having no possible of ever getting to her without Lester's manipulation and unleashing her true slut.

TD40

2025-03-15 14:11:21 +0000 UTC

It’s amazing and also hilarious seeing Sarah acting like a bullied little girl. Fearful and slinking around, peeking around corners, sneaking up and hiding herself... totally nerve-racking! Her life at the workplace will never be the same again... And with Lester planting the fantasy in her of showing off to all the men at work... OMG... this is going to be priceless! Sarah is going to become the Hospital's slut!

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-15 11:15:52 +0000 UTC

I'm pretty sure that Lester only loves himself!

Cat Kuskie

2025-03-15 11:13:07 +0000 UTC

My definition of love is 5 midgets peeing on a woman. Now tell me how Lester's love is holding an entire hospital ransom, and plotting the murder of children that he finds annoying. That we all need to cut him some slack because he was bullied in High School and Greek men like to fuck each other.

tim

2025-03-15 02:54:21 +0000 UTC

Ok Earl, thanks. Let’s see what Tim cones up with and then we will compare notes.

Royston smith

2025-03-14 21:14:49 +0000 UTC

That would be easy for the last 46 years. Loyal, best friend partner in everything. Enjoying this site together. Sharing our opinions. Love is a fruit salad. Lester and Sarah missing the boat on that.

Earl0849

2025-03-14 21:11:01 +0000 UTC

Gentlemen, you are of course entitled to your opinions. It’s just I don’t agree with you. Let’s keep this civilised shall we? No more point scoring. I didn’t say Lester was the “sultan of love”, I merely suggested he doesn’t love like you two think he should. As a matter of interest guys can you give me a definition of love? Let’s see. I issue a challenge to both of you. Give me a definition. Don’t source it from the internet or a dictionary. Let it flow from your own brains onto your pens. Are you up for the challenge? Or will you resort to point scoring again.

Royston smith

2025-03-14 20:11:04 +0000 UTC

Evidently so Earl lmao. "NO GUYS LESTER IS BEING SINCERE ABOUT HIS LOVE CUZ CUZ HE HAS A HISTORY OF BEING A SUBTLE AND CONNIVING LIAR TO GET WHAT HE WANTS. Gosh why is everyone so dumb and not understanding me.. Dumbasses dont know Ancient Greek men loved each other... Idiots." -Royston Right. Cool. I'm gunna leave you alone now, like every woman in your life clearly has...

tim

2025-03-14 19:21:53 +0000 UTC

Tim would appear that suggesting Royston commentary is rubbish as it pertains to Lester and love and childbirth has stuck a nerve. However, we all as far as I know are still entitled to our opinion some just handle them better.

Earl0849

2025-03-14 18:56:21 +0000 UTC

Remember Dan......? Neither do I. I guess he's in jail, that was the hook Don used to entice us for another chapter.

Michael Haase

2025-03-14 18:52:51 +0000 UTC

Tim, that was a bit like being savaged by a dead sheep, lol. Come back when you have serious points to make. Lol.

Royston smith

2025-03-14 18:46:03 +0000 UTC

Earl, are you sure you are not channeling your inner Finnegan’s wake? JJ has nothing on your stream of consciousness. He’s a amateur compared to you! As Tim, nice but dim would say LOLLL!! I really have no idea what your point is, so I can’t answer it.

Royston smith

2025-03-14 18:42:13 +0000 UTC

I will try and email.

Royston smith

2025-03-14 13:26:48 +0000 UTC

There have been about 2,500 postings of comments since chapter 21, not counting all of the postings in the lounge. I think we have discussed every possible permutation of the story and the characters! So, either the story needs to draw to a conclusion or DS comes up with some plot twist that gets everyone fired up again….

Rjh200m

2025-03-13 00:31:58 +0000 UTC

Royston - I certainly get what you are saying and I understand Lester’s desire to control and possess Sarah….and I understand him “falling for her” for example every time he sees her, he literally stops what he is doing and stares at her and she has obviously captivated him like none of his previous “conquests. But i just can’t equate that he loves her with him trying to destroy her career, destroy someone she loves (Dan), emotionally separate her from her children, and trick her into getting pregnant. It may be a dark love, but it cannot be love in any true sense if he is willing to destroy everything in her life just so that he can possess her.

Rjh200m

2025-03-13 00:23:25 +0000 UTC

I disagree with some on here that Lester’s “I love you” was insincere, a mere ploy. I think your definitions of love are too narrow, influenced by western ideas of romantic love. Love is a concept which can differ across cultures and time. For example, in Ancient Greece the highest form of love was thought of as male on male and today a Chinese person has a different concept of love to an American. It also depends on the person. Lester is different. Some forms of love are dark and destructive, dominated by desire and control. In large part that is how Lester loves. But that’s not the whole story. He is intoxicated by Sarah. He must possess her. He is fascinated by her. She is”like no other woman”. That is the way that Lester “loves”. He has definitely fallen.for her. Go back and read previous chapters and you will see I am correct. But is Sarah’s “I love you” equally sincere. In port I think it was reflexive, but I think it also contains a grain of truth. She does want to please Lester and she is jealous of his attention. She kind of admires his financial savvy and how he can dominate situations. But the crucial thing is she wants to be possessed by him as much as be wants to possess her. She needs to be dominated and possessed. So on that level, then yes she loves him. It’s like I say, love hurts , love scars, love wounds and mars. Come on Don, take us to the dark side of town, I am waiting there for you.

Royston smith

2025-03-12 22:59:44 +0000 UTC

I was thinking the same. My view is that this story has run its course. I initially joined because of TC which sadly also went downhill. Now that’s finished I’m not sure if I’ll continue subscribing.

Ash

2025-03-12 21:56:24 +0000 UTC

Notice how few posts there are this month. That surely tells you something.

Royston smith

2025-03-12 20:41:03 +0000 UTC

You can post non-erotic stuff on there.

Royston smith

2025-03-12 20:37:21 +0000 UTC

O

Ike turner

2025-03-12 00:05:19 +0000 UTC

Not that kind of story.

Mark Albright

2025-03-11 23:34:24 +0000 UTC

So, reading Darrow’s slipping into depravity has crystallised my thoughts on TA and its direction. I wondered what was bothering me about TA. For 17 chapters TA was excellent. Right up until he fucks her in her office. Then the golden goose starts laying her eggs and it’s not organic anymore, it’s forced. Sure there is the odd good chapter, like the restaurant/hotel one, where Dan ends up in the clink, but generally we are treading water, going round in circles, visiting the same old Lester/Sarah tropes. As RJ says we really need DS to make some choices, push the plot on. I am getting very bored tbh. His new short story, Undercover cop, is good, but the reason I am here is TA. Come on Mr Silver, pull your finger out! Where is the darkness we were promised??

Royston smith

2025-03-11 22:00:22 +0000 UTC

Hi Mark. Love to read it, but I don’t do email. Can’t you post it on literotica?

Royston smith

2025-03-11 21:40:51 +0000 UTC

I heard from Darrow. RJ, Royston? Not interested?

Mark Albright

2025-03-11 14:19:12 +0000 UTC

I would be happy to. I'll get my publisher to forward an email.

Darrow

2025-03-10 23:35:42 +0000 UTC

"Yes, Daddy. Thank you Daddy. I'll be a good girl."

Mark Albright

2025-03-10 17:16:33 +0000 UTC

Excellent. See message after next comments.

Mark Albright

2025-03-10 14:52:43 +0000 UTC

RJ, Darrow, Royston, I was wondering if you'd like to read the first chapter of my book. I'd like some feedback. My email is markalbright99@gmail.com

Mark Albright

2025-03-10 14:51:19 +0000 UTC

Possible scene in next chapter…..Dan still in Chicago, kids at Sarah’s parent’s house (she tells them she is visiting Dan)….Lester tells Sarah he is coming to the house Friday night, Sarah relents since she is horny and the kids are not there…. They fuck all night in her bed and finally Sarah can stay in bed with Lester for the whole night without having to go back to Dan and without having to get up the next morning for work…..she loves being next to him, it feels so comfortable and relaxing….when she wakes up the next morning, she realizes it was the best night of sleep she has had in years…. Lester is still sleeping and she wants to surprise him with breakfast. So she gives him a kiss on the cheek and goes downstairs…..she starts cooking and sets the table…..it’s been so stressful and hectic and she is looking forward to having breakfast with Lester and talking with him, like how they did on their first dates, she misses that…..and it sort of reminds her of how her and Dan would have breakfast and chat about life, what they plan to do on the weekend, etc. she also misses that…. While at the stove cooking eggs, Lester surprises her, hugging her from behind…..he is completely naked and she can feel his hard cock pressing against her ass…. “What are you doing Sarah?” “”I’m making us breakfast, baby, I thought I would surprise you and we can spend some time together just talking, relax a bit” Lester then reached over to turn off the stove….he turned Sarah around and placed his hands on her shoulders, gently pushing down….Sarah knew what was happening and immediately got on her knees….”the only thing I need you to do right now Sarah, is to take care of my cock, so stop cooking and start sucking”. “Do what you do best, Sarah”. Sarah complied and quickly took Lester’s cock in her mouth. After about 5 minutes, Lester noticed the dining room table that Sarah set for them….he pulled her up, led her to the table, and bent her over it…..he pulled Sarah’s panties down, spread her legs and rammed his cock into her…..”there’s only one use for this dining room table, Sarah, and that is to fuck you on it”……Sarah held on for dear life as Lester fucked her relentlessly…..she came twice on his cock and Lester groaned as he filled Sarah’s pussy with his cum for the fourth time since he arrived last night…. The table was a mess, with dishes and glasses scattered across the table and on the floor….. He pulled Sarah up and turned her around to face him…..”you need to understand who you are now, Sarah….you are a slut….you need to worry about taking care of my cock, not my stomach….and I’m not here to replace that pathetic wimp husband of yours to spend some quiet time with you on Saturday morning talking over breakfast”. With that, he slapped her hard on the ass….”now get upstairs and get dressed….we are going to McDonalds….and if you are a good girl, I’ll let you blow me in the drive-thru line.”

Rjh200m

2025-03-10 13:25:20 +0000 UTC

Cheetos overdose.

Michael Haase

2025-03-09 14:31:20 +0000 UTC

Thus according to Lester’s plan.

Richardcat

2025-03-09 03:28:43 +0000 UTC

Very good thoughts. Sarah's conversation with Dan reeks of ambiguity and uncertainty. She's in the midst of emotional transition, breaking physical boundaries, and clearly aware she's not in control. She's all over the place in her conversation, and in her attitudes. Having said that, one of the most interesting things in their conversation, is the lack of connection. They almost talk past each other. Each opens up verbal cues, opportunities, that the other misses or refuses. Sarah flirts, she openly invites phone sex. Dan slaps it down. She reveals secrets, but Dan treats it poorly. She almost asks for help, but he doesn't pick up on it. For his part, she's almost non-responsive to his concerns and issues. He's slipping into clinical depression, but he doesn't talk about it. It's not Sarah, it's both of them. They're both disconnecting from the marriage.

Darrow

2025-03-09 02:34:49 +0000 UTC

I agree. It feels like too much has happened and she's too far gone. Things have awakened inside her that she wants to explore. I'm all for it.

Jon Smith

2025-03-08 14:14:34 +0000 UTC

All really thought provoking points. I agree it seems as though Don doesn't want to write himself into a corner. As you've said, even after 27 chapters, there seems to be no more narrow a direction in the plot. Several theories have been posted by many other readers and a good portion of them seem plausible. I truly can't pin down where I think things are going. I'm just enjoying the ride, for the most part and I hope Lester continues to degrade Sarah. I like that Lester has tapped into the exhibitionist inside Sarah and has included other men during their encounters. I'm really hoping that steps up quite a bit in the coming chapters. I'm not necessarily rooting for a "dark" ending, but I don't expect it to be an altogether happy one. I'm not sure I see a scenario where Sarah and Dan return to the life they used to have. I could see it ending with Sarah accepting the dynamic with Lester into her life as her "New normal", with Dan having to choose to either stay and accept it as well, or leave.

Jon Smith

2025-03-08 14:12:08 +0000 UTC

RJ, your post reads like you are hoping for someone to rescue Sarah from her addiction. Clearly at this point it does not appear to be Dan. But if Lester was somehow removed from the equation, I do not feel Sarah could stop. She would fall to the next big cock and the next. No rescue for Sarah. She is in danger of losing it all and when she does the next question is do we have another story on life for Sarah after Lester?

Earl0849

2025-03-08 13:56:54 +0000 UTC

DS is really good at presenting a lot of conflicting information on the characters such that we can see where things are headed, but there is still some doubt as to how things will wind up. Good example of this is the Sarah and Dan phone conversation. In every previous discussion that they have had where Dan raised concerns about what is going on with Lester, Sarah was emphatic that she could handle Lester and that Dan does not have to worry. But not this time. She basically told Dan that she can’t resist Lester and can’t control herself. Some of her words - — “But Lester…well, you know how he is. Being so close to him every day at work has been hard….” — “And things have been getting real tough at work, and I needed a little distraction. Well…maybe a big distraction.” — “That Lester knows exactly how to get me going,” — “I know. But it’s hard to stop Dan,” Sarah said. “Really hard when I’m alone here.” — “Without you here, I’ve been going kind of crazy.” What is she really telling Dan? That his absence is driving her behavior and that she really wants Dan to come rescue her? If this were true, why didn’t she insist that Dan return to Middleton immediately? Why did she rebuff Dan’s request for a pause with Lester? And why did she later that night have phone sex with Lester after concluding to herself that she was not slipping out of control? Or……is she resetting Dan’s expectations, along the lines of “my life is evolving and Lester is a part of it now and I won’t stop seeing him.” If this were true, why would she send such a strong signal to Dan about her loneliness and his absence? I think DS is preserving his options for how the story ends. But after 27 chapters, I am looking for some resolution on what Dan and Sarah really want, pick a course of action and go after it. I think we know Lester’s motivations well enough.

Rjh200m

2025-03-08 12:50:09 +0000 UTC

Dan right now is the fisherman in the boat saying that he may start fishing a little bit later on….while at the same time the fish is surrounded by a shark…..

Rjh200m

2025-03-08 02:52:17 +0000 UTC

Sarah is still wrestling between the angel on her one shoulder and the devil on her other shoulder. She can’t say “no” to Lester but on the other hand other than Ch18 (the birthday gift) and Ch23 (at work in the car) she hasn’t been the aggressor. She’s definitely leaning one way but hasn’t tipped over…yet.

J Lewis

2025-03-07 22:00:34 +0000 UTC

And she's already been swallowed by a hump-cocked whale.

Mark Albright

2025-03-07 21:50:59 +0000 UTC

It's fairly clear that if Dan ever does get Sarah back, it's going to be because of something happening between her and Lester, not because of Dan's amateurish efforts (so far).

MV

2025-03-07 21:47:09 +0000 UTC

If Dan was a fisherman and Sarah a fish…he’s trying to reel her back into the boat while she’s swimming faster and faster into deeper water.

J Lewis

2025-03-07 21:08:28 +0000 UTC

Yea, but what I am saying is she won’t even know that she is a porn star, cause Lester will have complete control of her.

FU

2025-03-07 18:42:08 +0000 UTC

I know he said the shit will start to hit the fan. I'm guessing the Jessie and Dan incident is what he referred to. I expect this incident will lead off the festivities.

Mkm560

2025-03-06 17:55:37 +0000 UTC

Have you paid attention to Onlyfans? Those girls make hundreds of thousands, even millions. If Sarah ends up an Onlyfans pornstar she's probably set for life. As to the call she ignored. Probably Dan calling from jail again.

Darrow

2025-03-06 17:47:20 +0000 UTC

Based on Don's comments in to opening of Chapter 26 about things coming to a head in 27, I had high hopes he would finally deliver and the story would move forward. It didn't move the needle at all. At this point I have to throw in the towel.

Steve

2025-03-06 15:26:52 +0000 UTC

Honestly Sarah should be way beyond being shy about Otis, if anything she could be a bit afraid of herself losing control yet craving to meet Otis in the hallway or her office. I agree with others when it comes to going back to boring same sex scenes, they are good but same. Why not Sarah being more corrupted and calling Otis over or kissing him or something cause she enjoys it?

Cipherz

2025-03-06 03:05:38 +0000 UTC

So whose phone call did Sarah not answer is Dan calling from jail because of his assault on the idiot that came to his work? Or was it Jesse who thinks Sarah is in love with him calling to tell her that he spoke to Dan and Dan is out of the picture now? Sarah is in deep trouble. She is thinking with Lester‘s penis head brain, he is changing the neuron and the connections in her brain so that she only thinks of pleasure coming from being out of control, she is addicted to it and Lester is her trigger and provider for her fix. I’ve told you this is not going to end well for Sarah. She is going to lose everything and end up just being a money making porn star cum dump for Lester. I don’t see a miracle on the horizon for Dan to take back control of his life or his wife. If he sees her performing for him at Lester’s hand, he will follow her down that path no matter the cost.

FU

2025-03-05 21:53:11 +0000 UTC

Fair enough!

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 19:42:12 +0000 UTC

"...some more thoughts on Lester’s motivations!" 🤔😉😋 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BbPiIwFOQtU&t=11s

Arc

2025-03-05 19:38:13 +0000 UTC

Same here, it’s hard to say. If he means it even just a little bit then presumably he would at some point stop trying to destroy her, including her career! But either way, I think it was a huge development for Sarah to respond back to him the way she did. You predicted this a long time ago.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 19:00:30 +0000 UTC

Agree Jake, seems like some are still looking for a love story with a happy ending for Sarah & Lester. For the life of me I do not know why. I guess it's hard for some to in brace the fact that Lester is just a sick fuck. Harder still for some to except the fact that Sarah has no feelings for her husband and very little and fading for her kids and parents. Sarah & Lester are users and will stop at nothing to continue their sick relationship. They use each other very well I might add. So, let's get past this love shit and show everyone what Sarah is. How low she will go how dark she can be and how much she is like her master. Sarah is no longer prey she is a Preator.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 18:37:05 +0000 UTC

It's hard to say with him. Probably just a ploy. I'm just speculating what if a man like Lester did fall in love? Likely idle speculation as I don't think that's where DS is taking us. I just think it would make an interesting and surprising story.

Mark Albright

2025-03-05 16:42:39 +0000 UTC

I think Sarah could use Thornhill to her advantage and somewhat surprised her and Lester have not to this point. I think he may have a cock to rival Lester.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 16:40:01 +0000 UTC

I'll have to give that chapter a re-read. I have been under the impression all the changes were made due to the hacking. It's been a while. Thanks for the feedback.

Mkm560

2025-03-05 16:30:57 +0000 UTC

Mk….you may be right, but I think what really killed her hospital career was the change in management. That sort of happened independent of the hacking, and DS never really provided any background on why it happened and who actually controls the hospital…..but obviously the new CEO Thornhill has it in for her.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 16:18:50 +0000 UTC

MA - do you think Lester’s “I Love You” was spontaneous or just a ploy by him to get Sarah to react? He has posed to her many times as being a sensitive person, all to gain her trust and sympathy.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 16:13:37 +0000 UTC

Excellent points, RJ. The last chapter ended with Lester telling her he loved her and her reflexively saying "I love you, too." Then she wonders afterwards why she said it and whether someone like Lester is capable of love. I think that may be the wild card in all this. How does Lester act if he truly falls in love? He has lived his whole life just trying to achieve his goals without regard for anything else - morals, other people's feelings, long-term repercussions. Could it be in the end it is his own feelings that do him in? As they said at the end of King Kong, "It was Beauty killed the Beast."

Mark Albright

2025-03-05 15:53:35 +0000 UTC

It will be interesting if San can prove Lester hacked the hospital. Does Sarah see Lester as ruining her career? I mean that caused her whole career downfall. I can't see her saying wow he all that to be closer to me. But I also could be wrong.

Mkm560

2025-03-05 15:50:07 +0000 UTC

RJ, I am picking up on more excitement for Sarah but very little regret. Sarah is an addict and trying to paint the picture any other way is an attempt at fraud. She has for the most part sold out Dan and she will sell out her family and kids. She is a puppet a lap dog she will do as told by Lester. Her future is Lester's future.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 15:25:18 +0000 UTC

Lester dating Sarah in public will create some serious problems for both. Her parents, her friends will not except this. The parents will investigate and there finding will not be good news for Dan and for Sarah. Lester will up the stacks and things will get ugly and it will be decision time for Sarah. She will fail as a mother and as a wife. She is hooked with no going back. She is his slut.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 13:53:42 +0000 UTC

MV - great recap. I think right now Sarah has some regret, given her deteriorating professional life, her growing apart from Dan, and the deterioration of her family life (her life with Dan and the kids). She hints at this but has not explicitly acknowledge it. But clearly there is more to come in the story. As we all know in life, many times there are both good and bad aspects to developments in our lives. But I guess the test of what regret really means is “would I do it all over the same way?” We will see where Sarah and Dan come out on this question.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 13:51:45 +0000 UTC

Ok, just what we need, some more thoughts on Lester’s motivations! But here are some thoughts on his plans apart from his overall stated intention of destroying the Williams’ finances and impregnating Sarah - From chapter one, Lester wanted Sarah and he wanted her without anything being in his way, no obstacles. He wanted her available to him at anytime he wanted, and he wanted Sarah to be able to show him affection without any hesitancy or reservations including Dan, her family and her professional life. While Lester enjoys antagonizing Dan, what he realliy wants is for Dan to “know his place”, to accept that Sarah belongs to Lester not him. After 27 chapters, has Lester fully achieved this? Yes and No. Of course, his relationship with Sarah has evolved leaps and bounds as the story aptly demonstrates. Many of her “boundaries” have fallen, she clearly has embraced her new life with Lester, and Dan has been sidelined to a very large extent. But…..even in chapter 27, we see that some obstacles still exist that have to be very annoying to Lester. For example, Sarah still resists when Lester wants to come to the house, have sex and stay the night. This has to be very annoying to Lester because Sarah is reluctant because of the kids, Dan, whatever. Lester does not want her reluctant at all. Second example is when Sarah and Lester were talking on the phone while she was on the couch in her house. She told Lester that Dan wanted her to stop having sex with him. What was interesting is that even before Sarah said this, he knew she was talking with Dan. Having Sarah cite what Dan wants had to upset Lester because once again, Dan was getting between him and Sarah. If we know Lester’s history, we know that he is not going to accept these limitations and he will do something to remove any remaining reluctance or reservations that Sarah has. So….he will keep pushing to have Sarah willingly accept him coming to the house, having sex in her bedroom and staying the night. I think he will be relentless about this. But I don’t know how DS will handle the kids situation. Secondly, he will continue plotting against Dan and Sarah (and indoctrinating Sarah) to further separate the two so that Dan “doesn’t matter” and can no longer influence Sarah. So, Lester has some more work to do to fully achieve his goals that he laid out back in the first couple of chapters. What is key to Lester is “controlling the minds” of Sarah and Dan - have Sarah willingly accept him with no concerns or reservations and have Dan know that he is defeated and Lester is in control. There will be outward manifestations of this as well - —Lester will get Sarah to move his ring from her right hand to her left, replacing Dan’s ring; —Lester will get her to refer to him as her Chicago Husband, or just Husband; —Lester will make it obvious and explicit at work that he and Sarah are “together”; —Lester will get Sarah to tell Dan that she works for Lester and that she will not stop being with him; and —Lester will take Sarah out in public in Middleton, possibly running into Sarah’s friends, Dan’s friends, etc. At this point in the story, it’s not clear what could upend Lester’s plans short of a massive heart attack or Dan emerges from his Chicago apartment and takes drastic measures to separate Lester from his wife.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 13:17:59 +0000 UTC

I agree. As per CH. 1, we know she is destined to feel some sort of regret for meeting Lester. What we're all waiting to find out is why. Is it because she genuinely falls in love with him and he dies? Is it because she moves in with him, gets preganant/gives birth, then is left with nothing? If either of those things happen, does she stop and look back and realise what she's done to Dan? Maybe Dan is able to present to her plenty of evidence of what Lester did? Either way, if she doesn't come to realise how Lester manipulated things and how Dan was done down, even though he was culpable in the early chapters, I'm afraid I will personally regret reading this story in the long run. I don't expect a HEA ending, as such, Grandeman has already said to expect consequences for playing this game, nor do I particularly expect a BTB or RAAC ending, but I really want her to have some remorse towards Dan, and DS to spend more than a couple of sentences on that. Ive always said that I really want TA to be a story I can go back and read again and again. Having said that, I'd love there to be a TA2 one day about the 'further adventures' of Sarah.

MV

2025-03-05 11:21:42 +0000 UTC

🥱

Jake4444

2025-03-05 07:31:57 +0000 UTC

Well seeing that its only a story that I have no control over that would be a good bet for you. Also I noticed Don is somewhat conservative with his writing/vanilla so I will past on your bet. But Sarah is tumbling towards destroying her family and her life as she knows it. I do not see a happy ending unless being Leader's slut or others is a definition of a happy ending.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 04:45:58 +0000 UTC

I don't know much, but I will bet you any amount of money you want that Sarah does not end up on the street.

Mark Albright

2025-03-05 03:15:19 +0000 UTC

So do I

Earl0849

2025-03-05 02:16:07 +0000 UTC

MV,the kids already have been in the story. All I am saying is we have to come to a conclusion. How far has she fallen? Is Lester worth losing family over? I think she is gone. I think she will end up on the street.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 02:14:58 +0000 UTC

And yet, people definitely stated that DS wanted to keep the kids out of the story. So, has he had a change of mind about that, within reason?

MV

2025-03-05 02:03:11 +0000 UTC

Lester has been in the home with the kids present. So clearly Sarah's desire for cock is starting to override her motherly instincts. So, if Lester and Sarah are caught having sex with kids in house this sheds a whole new light on her as a mother. If Lester and Sarah are caught having a gangbang in the home and filming same even though kids are not present this still call's in to question ability to mother safely for her kids. I am not talking about Dan catching them but rather parents, neighbors or even the police. Will a danger of losing her kids her family snap her out of it? I say no it will not. I think she will throw it all away and go with Lester. All indications point to her being hooked a sex junky and Lester if he lives for a few more years will use her till she is all used up.

Earl0849

2025-03-05 01:42:45 +0000 UTC

Interesting perspective….but in the current chapter, Dan seems to be moving more towards wanting Sarah to “pause” her sexual hijinks with Lester….but perhaps Dan will cave again under Sarah’s persuasive powers.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 00:58:27 +0000 UTC

Agree that’s a huge boundary. Remember Lester’s words at the beginning of the phone sex session, along the lines of him telling Sarah to tell the kids that uncle Lester needs some private time with mommy…..she clearly has rebuffed Lester every time he has raised the issue of the kids going back many chapters ago when he wanted to take a look in their room when they were with her parents….but will she continue to hold him off? I think this issue could drive where the ending of the story goes.

Rjh200m

2025-03-05 00:52:51 +0000 UTC

💯

MV

2025-03-04 21:28:23 +0000 UTC

There is only One way to determine how far Sarah has fallen. One way to measure how much control Lester has over her. Lester can have her fuck anyone and everyone he wants. He can make movies with her. He can fuck over Dan forever. But if Don wants to deal with reality put Sarah in danger of losing her kids. Make her make a decision. Sex with Lester or the girls. How far has she fallen?

Earl0849

2025-03-04 19:02:32 +0000 UTC

Totally agreed. Next chapter same as the last… it’s gonzo comedic writing meets groundhog day. The characters are completely vapid now as well… no believability in any of it. Anyway… i said i would give it a chapter or two to turn around, and i have… i will see ya all next year when i just read the last chapter, knowing i haven’t missed a thing by skipping all the previous ones lol. ✌️🫡

Jake4444

2025-03-04 16:32:21 +0000 UTC

When was the last time Dan had any more than a bit role in the chapter? The use of the loving wife who has discovered her husband gets off on denial, control and humiliation and she enjoys giving it to him. Along the way, she also discovers she loves big cocks and can drive Dan crazy with her adventures, she learns how to control Dan and that he loves her control even when it means denial. Do as you're told or no more stories about my boyfriend Lester. Lester tells me you're not keeping the kitchen and bathroom clean, you know you agreed to keep the apartment clean.

Michael Haase

2025-03-04 14:50:24 +0000 UTC

And I agree with you, MV, Chapter 23 is when DS lost his way. Here's hoping he left some bread crumbs so he can find his way back.

Mark Albright

2025-03-04 14:37:21 +0000 UTC

But in 19 of those chapters it's going to crawl along at a snails pace. Then in the 20th chapter, everything will come furiously to an end. It's gone from a slow burn to a slow fizzle.

Mark Albright

2025-03-04 14:34:06 +0000 UTC

Don’t worry MV, there are 20 more chapters to go. No rush to the end.

Richardcat

2025-03-04 14:13:19 +0000 UTC

Yeah that’s a lot of money for grabs! I think he’ll continue to lure people with small treats but won’t deliver the good stuff anytime soon! It’s a shame….greed took over.

Marc

2025-03-04 12:13:41 +0000 UTC

I think the story was going well up to CH. 22, and I was really into it. From CH. 23, it's lost its way a little, imo. As others have said, by sidelining Dan and keeping him out of the picture, the tension of the early chapters is lost. DS has obviously decided that this is the way he wants these chapters to play out, to focus on Sarah giving herself to Lester. That's fair enough, but as others have said, it wouldn't have hurt to have some scenes involving others (or more from Otis) where Sarah's boundaries are pushed whilst we wait for things to move on. For a couple of chapters now, we've been told the confrontations and arguments between Dan and Sarah will be starting, but it hasn't really happened. I was personally hoping that the fighting between Dan and Sarah would stretch out over several chapters (including, if they get back together eventually, a decent amount of space given to the aftermath, the rebuilding a relationship), but it's starting to feel that all of that will be rushed through in the final chapter. Don is a great writer, and for a long time this has been a really great story, I just hope he proves us all wrong and there's a good final few chapters.

MV

2025-03-04 09:05:41 +0000 UTC

Darrow - great analysis and recap of Sarah’s sexual evolution in past chapters. Each time I read past chapters, it surprises me what was done such a long time ago (relatively), including the recording of her and Lester in his bedroom when Dan was in Minnesota. So I agree with your point that story development has slowed down and the sex seems repetitive. But I think that DS may be focused on Sarah’s overall emotional boundary versus her crossing boundaries with specific sexual activities. You have commented very well on her sexual “liberation” and growing resentment of Dan with regard to him limiting her. And this came out very strong in this chapter, including her discussing with Dan that basically it’s her turn to have fun. But as you say, there needs to be some significant progress in the story from any of the many angles that DS has hinted at.

Rjh200m

2025-03-04 07:50:10 +0000 UTC

I just want more perversion, degradation, corruption and multiple cocks in Sarah. Is that too much to ask?

Darrow

2025-03-04 06:01:57 +0000 UTC

To me, one of the key scenes has to be the long awaited honest discussion between Dan and Sarah. This is not sexy, but it’s a fundamental part of the story. In the current chapter, both Dan and Sarah tell themselves that this discussion has to happen. Sarah refers to it as the “elephant in the room”. This discussion could set the stage for the ending of the story. We saw a little bit of the tension between Dan and Sarah in this chapter where Dan wanted a pause in Sarah’s relationship with Lester and she basically said no. And of course later that day she had phone sex with Lester. So there needs to be some showdown between Dan and Sarah in the next chapter.

Rjh200m

2025-03-04 01:30:22 +0000 UTC

Agree Darrow. Lester has had an easy time controlling Dan and manipulating Sarah. He has not had a challenge for Sarah and as you say we are stuck in first gear. Interest seems to be fading. I was hoping that Richard & Mary would become players and mount a challenge for Lester. I suggested that perhaps Lester would receive strong push back from Sarah's parents creating a will for Lester to corrupt them. I mentioned that maybe Dan's parents would step forward and ease some money issues there by creating another problem for Lester. In other words I wanted Lester to have to work a little harder to achieve his goal. Creating darker sex and corruption of Sarah. To date easy for Lester but boring for me. But I wait for 28 and hope.

Earl0849

2025-03-04 01:24:02 +0000 UTC

Wait! Are you suggesting Bert should be a cousin? That there could be an incest angle? Hot!

Darrow

2025-03-04 01:12:59 +0000 UTC

I do have to agree in general that the story is progressing far too slowly. Interesting and potentially effective plot lines are slow walked, Thornhill, Byron, the rest of them. Dan has basically been painted into a corner and lost all credibility. Jesse turned into a joke. The sex scenes are great, but they're slowly losing effectiveness. The dark energy of the story is seduction and corruption. But ten chapters ago Sarah was prostituting herself, fucking Byron, and swearing at Dan in the street below. She tongued Vernon's asshole and deep throated him in front of her men and she flirted all but naked with a black pizza boy to the point where he almost came in his pants. Blowing Otis isn't that huge a thing. She was ready to blow strangers in a public parking lot the first time she and Lester went parking. Twenty episodes ago, she walked into Lester's room in lingerie, told him it was a one time thing, and had him make a series of videos for her husband while he fucked her. Fifteen episodes ago, she was in a restaurant starting to fall for Lester, seeing a man who was looked down on, but who was full of talent and energy. Fifteen episodes ago she was walking in the park with him. She made her claim on his cock, declaring him exclusive. Even the deep relationship problems with Dan matured five episodes ago. More than that? Dan's haplessness, his ineffectuality, his failures at work and at home. There's no real development. This is like Aristotles turtle race. The further we go the more everything slows down. Yes, nice sex scenes. But in terms of the development of the characters, there's nothing really that happened here that was out of place ten chapters ago. Sarah's progress and corruption is proceeding by inches. And yes, I appreciate that Lester is the driving engine of corruption, and the villain. But... it's not really developing. I enjoyed the facetime sex... but geez, how long has she been masturbating to pictures of his dick? Sarah actually got caught by the Hospital Administrator stripping to send him pictures of herself. They could have been facetiming sex for a dozen chapters. Cheetoh sex? That could have happened any time in twenty chapters. I'm not one of these BTB misogynist types. I love the fact that Sarah is uninhibited and transgressive and loves her fucking. But the story development has slowed down to almost nil. And to make it worse, the sex is becoming repetitive and stale. Fucking in his office? Give me a break. How long ago did they fuck in her office, and wreck the place! How long ago did they fuck in public places in the back of an SUV with strangers ACTUALLY watching? Why is every interesting prospect neutralized or abandoned? Jesse had creep potential, now he's infatuated stalker. Byron was oozing with dark energy, a genuine rival for Sarah's body and Dan's soul, there's a hack, Jesse is enlisted as a troll, Lester finds 'Terabytes' of data about really fucked up stuff, the alarm goes off and that plotline.... vanishes? Wtf? WTF!!! Thornhill shows up, does a little sexual harassment and vanishes. Where's the frigging Pizza guy? Lester inserts himself into the hospital for the most boring job on Earth - I know he has this Master Plan for Sarah, but this is seriously fucking ther est of his lifestyle. When was the last time Sarah was actually genuinely pushed towards her boundaries? Or to anything past relatively vanilla sex with some occasional third party flavouring? The worst thing is, it gets alluded to. Lester goes 'how about a bukkake gangbang, I know some midgets.' Sarah goes 'Yes!' Then we're back to vanilla seduction by inces. She had a threesome and didn't get spit roasted? No double penetration? After endless flirting, still no anal? Prospects for bondage abound, but she's never tied up? Lester can print off a list of every sleazy bar in Chicago, but he's never taken her to a wet T-shirt contest, or an amateur stripper night? Never taken her for an education in lap dancing? No woman-on-woman encounters? No big black cock? No shemale cock? No hispanic cock? No Asian cock? No gangbangs? No blowbangs? No strangers at a public men's room? My god, the world is a three ring carnival of transgressive sexual deviance? I'm not saying do it all... Just do.... something? Where are Sarah's boundaries pushed? Where does she run wild, further and deeper than Lester intended? When does Lester lose control? Let's actually do something.

Darrow

2025-03-04 00:28:13 +0000 UTC

I'm assuming one scene is Sarah knowingly being filmed and the other is either her consenting to get pregnant or Lester switching pills and telling her he did it during the conception sex.

Mkm560

2025-03-03 21:45:42 +0000 UTC

@Dick - "Worst chapter ever!! Sex on a bag of Cheetos, while Sucking Cheeto dust off fat fingers?" FWIW -- it's fairly evident that that was intended as a visceral way to highlight how far down she's come, how already deeply she's bonded to Lester now, and to hint that the well she's falling down goes a lot deeper still...

Arc

2025-03-03 20:26:48 +0000 UTC

No argument about the stalling for more $$ -- according to Patreon, he has (today) 893 paying subscribers. At just the minimum tier, that's in the ballpark of a quarter-million dollars per year! ( 893 x ~CA$23 = CA$20,539 / month, x12 = CA$246,468 / year!, which , dep on exchange rates, is probably in the vicinity of US$165,000 / year... That's a lot of incentive to keep posting as many chapters as possible that go nowhere plot-wise!! As for your list, literally the only one I'm interested in seeing advanced is #4, but, after some initial hints in that direction, Don all but dropped it like a hot potato chapters ago... Personally, I'm here to see Sarah's path into depravity and corruption. Watching her gradually turn/fall, under Lester's personal influence and tutelage, towards being as dark and malign as he is, all as she falls ever more hopelessly and genuinely in total thrall with his instrument and what it does to/for her, and leading her into ultimately/incrementally turning-against/betraying everyone and everything that she once held as being dear and/or important in her life, all just to slavishly please her 'Chicago Fiancé' ...

Arc

2025-03-03 20:23:20 +0000 UTC

I think Sarah should move into my home so i can have a piece of her myself

Vlad

2025-03-03 20:19:25 +0000 UTC

Like they say Darrow variety is the spice of life. Lester could over play his hand with too much exposure.

Earl0849

2025-03-03 19:55:11 +0000 UTC

The whole birth-control thing has been clumsily managed; I'd even go so far as to say practically 'botched'. There were soooooo many simple/easy/clean ways to handle it, but what we've seen has been, very nearly, the silliest, most ham-handed and dumb portrayal imaginable... Based on the story, and the reactions posted hereabouts, I'd speculate/wager that a fair number of people in the audience here don't really know/understand much about birth control aside from condoms are a thing, and a vague notion that 'the Pill' exists, and is probably made of magic, or something... 🤦‍♀️🙄😋

Arc

2025-03-03 19:52:39 +0000 UTC

It all seems ok, but I would not want to leave her unattended for any length of time. I think exposure to the more aggressive person could affect her attention span.

Earl0849

2025-03-03 19:48:57 +0000 UTC

I'm assuming one of them centers around Sarah finding out that she's carrying Lester Jr. and the other w/b a gangbang/bukkake + porno-video-making scene w/ Lester et al (I'm guessing it'll be an ensemble cast featuring most/all of the various tertiary characters that she's fooled-around near/with over the earlier chapters of the story).... That's my 2¢ worth of guessing... ymmv! 🤷‍♀️😉😋

Arc

2025-03-03 19:46:47 +0000 UTC

I think Sarah should move to Michigan and spend time with Cousin Bert.

Earl0849

2025-03-03 19:42:43 +0000 UTC

"Just more of the same. Sarah and Lester." LoL! -- seeing as they are the central characters of the story/plot it doesn't seem all that unusual that they'd figure prominently! This seems a lot like complaining that "Gone with the Wind" has too much Rhett and Scarlett, or that the "Pink Panther" has too much Inspector Clouseau! 🤦‍♀️😉😄

Arc

2025-03-03 19:41:33 +0000 UTC

Earl0849 - Sarah's already had that conversation with Lester in the previous chapter, down in her basement. She talked about being shared, and he's made it clear he wants exclusivity. He was honest about telling her that sharing her was a means to an end, opening her up and breaking her down. Actually, thinking about it, I don't know why she isn't paying more attention to that, or thinking about it, when he has her service Otis. I think that she was a little disturbed by the conversation, but has made the decision to trust him. Basically, her thinking is 'he hasn't steered me wrong, given me a bad experience, there's no reason not to keep trusting him.' The experience with Otis was borderline for her. She did it willingly, but before and after, considered him creepy, and ended up regretting it - in part because now she's feeling stalked by Otis. But deliberately or inadvertently, Lester fixed that by making her watch the Otis video over and over while fucking her. It doesn't make her more accepting of Otis right now, and it doesn't make her comfortable with what she sees as stalking behaviour, but it's expanded her comfort and boundaries in several ways. I think he's going to make her much more comfortable with being shared with Otis, as a means of breaking her down. And shared with other men, to the point that she'll fuck anyone he tells her to... or not fuck them (Dan). I think he wants her to the point where he can tell her to cut off Dan, and she will, and where he can tell her to do anything. That's when the fence goes up and breeding season starts.

Darrow

2025-03-03 19:17:46 +0000 UTC

Just more of the same. Sarah and Lester. I think that cow has been milked dry! To me it appears that the conclusion of this story is going along the lines of tainted conception. Abruptly!

Raymond Arnott

2025-03-03 19:08:36 +0000 UTC

Darrow have always enjoyed your comments although not always agreed. But i must say your comment on fencing Sarah off is top of the line. With price of eggs in the US we for sure want to keep the fox out of the hen house and with Sarah's sexual energy I do not think it would be in Lester's best interest to leave Sarah unattended for any length of time in the hen house or at the hospital. Again, great comment.

Earl0849

2025-03-03 18:41:23 +0000 UTC

Anybody else wonder about the "two scenes" Don has been waiting to write? I find it interesting that he has these scenes already to use at the beginning of the story, must be the way authors write, from the end back! One scene could be were Lester finds out that Sarah has had her tubes tied since the birth of her last child. Dan does not even know about this. The other scene is were Lester goes for a helicopter ride with Bayon from the Lincoln Group, he surly must be punished for hacking their computer system! I am hooked on how the story ends so I will stick around for another 3 chapters just to get let down by another Silver non-ending like"I wonder what other lies she has told me" remember that one? Going to see it again maybe not word of word, but variation of it.

ralph

2025-03-03 17:26:05 +0000 UTC

Dan has had a vasectomy, which is the reason why she wasn't initially on birth control and they had Lester wear condoms. You'd assume she went back on birth control when she let Lester ditch the condoms. It wasn't initially mentioned in the story though, hence all the "why isn't she pregnant yet" comments. So Dan likely wouldn't be the father of any future child regardless.

Gabby

2025-03-03 16:49:11 +0000 UTC

Well, he hasn't subverted her birth control pills yet. I think that his process is that while she's on birth control he's going to share her around to break her down, estrange Dan, and increase his control. When he's ready to breed her, he'll fence her off.

Darrow

2025-03-03 15:51:59 +0000 UTC

I don't think Lester is all that concerned about being the father if or when Sarah gets pregnant, why would he exchange birth control pills and still have her fuck other men, even Dan could be the father at that point. Lester will realize that Sarah will not be much use to him when she becomes pregnant so he will start seducing someone else to take Sarah's place and reluctedly move on from his prize concur.

drater

2025-03-03 12:53:05 +0000 UTC

What about Dan eating Lester and even Jessi cream pie . Becoming a total cuck . Or Sarah making him eat his own cum for starting…

Migmig

2025-03-03 11:40:33 +0000 UTC

Dan cannot set up any cameras in his home until he actually gets back to Middleton!

Rjh200m

2025-03-03 02:22:25 +0000 UTC

I seems like Don is just stalling and collecting coins from us all. He must be making a nice income from these monthly chapters. I'm ok with him making a profit, but not when it's blatantly clear that he's stalling. There are quite a few points we are certainly all waiting to read: 1. Sarah's contraception and possible impregnation; 2. Dan's plans to set up surveillance cameras in his home; 3. Dan's discoveries into Lester's secrets; 4. Lester fucking Sarah's asshole....just to name a few!! And yet chapters go by and none of these points are addressed, clearly stalling with lame sex scenes and no advances. I'll give Don another chance, but if TA 28 keeps disappointing, I'm out!

Marc

2025-03-03 02:09:02 +0000 UTC

Not sure I agree since Sarah told Dan three times that she was lonely. She still loves him but he is not there and he is not taking the hint to get his ass back to Middleton if he wants to have some chance to reclaim Sarah and save his marriage. I think Sarah is still interested in the “3 way tug” but Dan is asking for a pause. We will see how this plays out.

Rjh200m

2025-03-02 23:36:26 +0000 UTC

And the editing was shite…. Stick a fork in it. The only video Dan should be suckerd into filming is Sarah riding Lester when she’s fertile and off BC, whilst Otis is anally penetrating her. Perhaps throw in Vernon or Cash getting Oral from Sarah, keeping her airtight. Grande Finale! Then we can all eff off this pointless mound of slag….

Dick

2025-03-02 22:04:22 +0000 UTC

Pretty much my thoughts, story is ruined without the 3 way tug.

Michael Haase

2025-03-02 21:40:02 +0000 UTC

I very much like your take on it. That would go a long way on bringing this story out of the abyss and back to great. One can only hope.

Paul M

2025-03-02 21:33:48 +0000 UTC

Interesting! That could have worked. Especially if she showed some attention to Dan after she was finished with Lester. That would keep Dan on the hook. However, at this point it is clear that she has no respect or love for Dan. That's what has ruined this could have been great story. I would have loved seeing Sarah wanting Dan and still being shared with Lester. Even if Lester continued to be the dominate one. But, it looks like they are too far gone now. That's sad.

Paul M

2025-03-02 21:24:04 +0000 UTC

This story has gone no where for ages, more than a month. The plot advances by a paragraph every month. This story is Don's bank. Nothing more, nothing less.

Elfy

2025-03-02 21:14:09 +0000 UTC

It was originally. This story has lost all its appeal due to Don placing bilking his patrons over quality writing. This story is a disaster.

Elfy

2025-03-02 21:11:50 +0000 UTC

Don thinks a double penetrative with Sarah sandwiched between two disgusting fat pieces of shit is his Juliet on the balcony scene, his masterpiece. This entire story is a farce at this point.

Elfy

2025-03-02 21:08:16 +0000 UTC

Its been awful for a long time. He is just playing to his discord weirdos

Elfy

2025-03-02 21:03:33 +0000 UTC

I think for Lester fucking Sarah is a big deal but if Dan is removed from the equation, it would steal Lester's thunder. So, if Dan would meet a nice wealthy woman who throws her support toward Dan it creates a problem for both Lester & Sarah. It would be interesting to see how Lester could work around this roadblock or if he even could. It would also create a serios problem for Sarah. A professional woman such as an attorney, wealthy loaded with sex appeal and into Dan. Knows his kink and excepts it and wants to help him deal with it. Problems for Lester & Sarah. Lester would have to get the big cock out again and would probably be shut down.

Earl0849

2025-03-02 17:39:05 +0000 UTC

Congrats on Chapter 27! Fantastic! Thanks for your hard work!

Joe

2025-03-02 17:19:43 +0000 UTC

RJ, I think the video will take place in Chicago since Lester mentioned going back there soon. I think the scene DS said he has been wanting to write involves Lester and Sarah arriving at the apartment and immediately going to his bedroom. Dan comes home from work to find them already fucking. He goes to his peephole to watch. He notices Sarah's bag is in Lester's room unpacked. He watches the aftermath of the sex, hearing Lester and Sarah say "I love you" to each other as they snuggle together. After awhile she comes out to the den where Dan is now waiting for her. She apologizes that they got started without him, but the good news is Lester is going to let Dan video them all weekend. She says she and Lester will be acting as husband and wife during the video.

Mark Albright

2025-03-02 16:48:44 +0000 UTC

True, it was worthless chum to fill a chapter.

Michael Haase

2025-03-02 16:34:18 +0000 UTC

I don't think Dan is part of the story anymore, he's done. The three way tug that created the angst the story thrived on is gone. The best part of this chapter was the dialog with Dan when she applied her manipulative ways with Dan. Oh, poor baby, no pussy for little Danny.

Michael Haase

2025-03-02 16:30:39 +0000 UTC

Really too bad RJ that Dan cannot somehow meet a very nice woman and level the playing field. Someone that would cause him to rethink his current Delema. Someone who has money and can support Dan as he works things out. This would screw up Lester in a big way as it would remove the thrill of victory from him and leave him with his pig Sarah but no Dan to go after. Sarah left with Lester and maybe fine herself in danger of losing kids that Lester does not want anyway.

Earl0849

2025-03-02 16:07:10 +0000 UTC

That is the big question, will Dan continue to waffle or go along…or will he rebel.

Rjh200m

2025-03-02 15:55:37 +0000 UTC

Really RJ not much of a lost. Dan has a chance to start a new life. Let the bitch go. This will not happen, but it should she and her boyfriend should have been kicked to the curve a number of chapters ago. Would have made story far more interesting.

Earl0849

2025-03-02 15:44:39 +0000 UTC

Who knows what will transpire, but the trend is definitely in this direction. Sarah is all in with Lester, she trusts him and does not believe he hacked the hospital. She even rationalizes that even if Lester is extremely manipulative, then this allows her not to take responsibility for her behavior. Unless something changes this dynamic, the path for her is not “pausing” with Lester, and not turning against him. This means that Lester will continue to get what he wants from her. This all spells bad news for Dan. He is taking way too long to uncover any dirt on Lester and in the meantime he is losing Sarah.

Rjh200m

2025-03-02 15:20:46 +0000 UTC

Intriguing

Darrow

2025-03-02 14:06:42 +0000 UTC

Clearly Sarah wants a video of her and Lester fucking. It’s the last thing she thought about before she fell asleep after the FaceTime session with Lester on her couch. I think Lester and Sarah will conspire to have Dan be the videographer. Lester will use some type of leverage over Dan and Sarah will tell Dan that this is very important to her and that he owes her since it’s time that he supports her sexual desires. Possible leverage that Lester could use is threatening to stop paying Dan’s share of the rent. Lester can just say that he now gets to fuck Sarah whenever he wants so why should he continue to pay all of the rent. Lester needs leverage over Dan to make sure Dan doesn’t get violent again. Lester and Sarah will come “home” from the hospital one day and act as husband and wife, since Lester has now earned the right to be Sarah’s “Chicago Husband” after their fucking in his hotel room. They will have dinner and Lester will sit in Dan’s chair at the table. They will discuss that it is time to have a baby, a boy. Dan will be recording this. Then they will go up to the bedroom and fuck all night as Lester said they would do. Lester will get Sarah to tell Dan about all the times they have fucked while Dan has been in Chicago, including on the futon in the basement. He will get Sarah to admit to Dan how she now feels about Lester, including the “I love You’s” they exchanged after the FaceTime session. Lester will talk about impregnating her and Sarah will ask him to do this. Dan will record all of this. After they are done fucking, Sarah falls asleep and Lester stays in the bed with her. Dan tells him to leave, but Sarah awakens and asks Dan not to make any trouble and could he please sleep in the guest bedroom just for tonight. Later, after Sarah wakes up to go to the bathroom, she checks on Dan. Dan asks her to tell Lester to leave so that they can sleep together in their bedroom. She says that she can’t do that since Lester wants her back in his bed. “But that is our bed, Sarah”. “Not anymore, Dan. I love both of my men….I want you Dan, but I need Lester….”Go to sleep, baby, we will talk more tomorrow, Sarah says as she gets up to leave and return to Lester’s bed….

Rjh200m

2025-03-02 13:31:45 +0000 UTC

Worst chapter ever!! Sex on a bag of Cheetos, while Sucking Cheeto dust off fat fingers? Just absurd. What a waste….

Dick

2025-03-02 13:25:40 +0000 UTC

In your beginning statement about Don being impatient about writing chapters he's been wanting to write since the beginning, interpretation.. it means just a way for Don to get more of your money and drag the stupid story out further with more incredibly stupid chapters. Don has been saying the same thing for 15 chapters and we're no further along so I'm completely done when it's completely obvious that greed has become a part of this for Don and I won't play into that anymore.

Luster

2025-03-02 11:29:48 +0000 UTC

A good story to start that I have enjoyed. Unfortunately it has turned to ridiculous over the last couple of chapters. This one being the worst. You have made Dan a forgone conclusion. Which makes it easy for Sarah, who has turned selfish & heartless to not love or care about him. Which she has proven many times. They should just start the divorce since they haven't been together in forever. Oh, and no one cares about Jesse. You seem to have an obsession with him. There is no one to like in this mess any longer. It appears that this story is past its due date.

Paul M

2025-03-02 04:26:13 +0000 UTC

So what happens to Sarah in the end what is her future.

Earl0849

2025-03-02 04:25:39 +0000 UTC

To All, What a mess the central characters of this story are in! Dan and Sarah, two otherwise happily married and talented professionals, are now in over their head with seemingly insurmountable problems entirely facilitated by Lester, an evil manipulator. Chapter 26 ended with Lester admitting that his goal is “the deconstruction of Sarah Williams as a professional and the destruction of Dan’s marriage.” Before chapter 27 even began, Mr. Silver wrote: “There are a couple scenes that I am getting very impatient to write. Ones I have been wanting to write since the story began....we are almost there.” What does this all mean? Two clues in chapter 27 that I draw your attention to, i.e., Sarah acknowledges that, “Dan, I know you’re still pissed about the hotel thing with Jesse. And I’m not going to let Lester off the hook for that, but he isn’t some grand master mind here.” and Dan’s realization that, “what the fuck was he (Jesse) doing here? This reeked of Lester. Everywhere he looked, Lester was there pulling this shit with him. When the fuck would he be free of all of this? Free of Lester” My take on all this is that (i) Lester will be entirely successful in the deconstruction of Sarah Williams as a professional. Indeed his awaking in Sarah her primal need to be sexually humiliated will prove to be her professional undoing (ii) Lester will eventually impregnate Sarah, either by subterfuge or by her own free will (iii) Sarah’s continued decent into uncontrollable perversive lust, without including her husband, will ultimately prove to be the catalyst for the destruction of the marriage. Lester, however, even though he continues to win every battle will in the end lose the war against Dan, likely because like all evil doers, he over reached. As we can see by utilizing Jesse to humiliate Dan, he never intended for Jesse to turn into an uncontrollable psychopath. Dan now clearly understands that Lester is behind everything bad that’s happened to him and eventually by marshaling other resources at hand, without any cooperation from Sarah, will bring Lester down. Don’t be surprised if somehow Dan brings the Lincoln Group and Bryson into play, or perhaps Sentinel Securities. Bottom line: Although Dan is agonizingly slow to declare war on Lester, he’s not without resources to fight. He has a particular skill set that both the Lincoln Group and Sentinel Securities need and want. Lester in his arrogance and hubris will be powerless to stand up to what eventually is coming his way. In the end, I suspect Dan will be the last man standing.

Ken Cara

2025-03-02 04:14:14 +0000 UTC

I agree that I'd like to see more men tapping Sarah's ass. Byron and Vernon have turned out to be one offs. Jesse's a creep and a loser. She's seriously turned off by Otis, but she might be re-opening to that, given the experience of the video. One thing that might be really significant is Lester's physical exhaustion in the face of her appetite. He's hit physical limits at least once or twice before, but this time was the harshest. I think he may decide he needs to share her out, just to keep up with her. While they were having sex, he did talk about bringing her back to Chicago and giving her to Cage to use. But I think that's unlikely, he wants control too much. Still, everything screams that she's so ready to be shared and shared regularly.

Darrow

2025-03-01 22:50:28 +0000 UTC

Good reading - I think you've hit it exactly, in terms of what Sarah did and didn't tell Dan, and what that tells us about her feelings. And I think the attempt and failure at sexy talk is really revealing in a lot of ways.

Darrow

2025-03-01 22:45:25 +0000 UTC

Per my earlier post, I think that Sarah told Dan a lot of important stuff during their phone conversation. What else did Sarah reveal to Dan during their discussion - That Lester saved her job and preserved her income; she has cut Lester some slack but he has earned it; that it turns her on when Lester “puts Dan down at times”; and that Dan was trying to prevent her from enjoying her sexual awakening (in so many words). What hasn’t Sarah told Dan? That she fucked Lester in the house (futon scene)….and I don’t think she actually told Dan that she works for Lester. Regarding the house, she seems to see this as a redline with Dan, hence her hesitancy to tell him. Also it was interesting during their phone discussion that she tried her “sexy talk” approach with him, but it did not work, so she turned a little bit aggressive in terms of telling him that basically it is now her turn to get sexual satisfaction. So we have Sarah starting to get more explicit with Dan about her desires and wants, but Dan still being wishy-washy, for example saying there should be a pause with Lester, but not insisting upon it.

Rjh200m

2025-03-01 21:33:43 +0000 UTC

It's kind of like "adamantly", but less so... 😉🙄😄

Arc

2025-03-01 19:28:32 +0000 UTC

Oh, I agree: we saw basically no advancement here, yet again. But then, that's been de rigueur for this story for a year or more now: 3-5 months of us riding the hamster wheel with characters and plot basically going nowhere, then some kind of meagre step forward; rinse and repeat... Don's gotta keep the ole money train rolling somehow! My hope, after Ch 26 actually had Sarah's arc move somewhat forward, was that we'd finally crested the hill and would see the devolution begin apace as she finally started accepting her darkness and embracing it. Joke's on me: she's basically (nearly) back to where she was in Ch 25 again... I'm pretty sure this was it for me on the monthly dole: I've lost enough interest already that I even forgot, for the bulk of the day yesterday, that this release was even coming out! It's def not worth >$20 / month for this! Maybe I'll check back in the fall and see what's happened (if anything)... 🤔🙄🤦‍♀️

Arc

2025-03-01 19:27:36 +0000 UTC

I'll throw in one more for you: She tries to flirt and phone sex with Dan over being bad. He refuses to pick it up, refuses to play, and just gives her the gears.

Darrow

2025-03-01 18:46:11 +0000 UTC

Sorry, also forgot to mention…. i know how Dan can make some nice money….join those amateur MMA/UFC events! He probably can win some fights and earn extra cash. He seems to have a talent based on the quick TKO of Jesse. He can invite Sarah, she might get seriously turned on watching him kick some ass.

Rjh200m

2025-03-01 17:50:46 +0000 UTC

So during their phone discussion, Sarah tells Dan three times that she is lonely, that she misses him, that she cannot resist Lester because they are together all day, that it turns her on to be bad, and that Lester would not be happy if she told him she could not have sex with him (Dan’s request for a pause). And she basically refuses to stop having sex with Lester and others. So what does Dan do? Does he jump in his car and get to Middleton as fast as he can? No, he tells Sarah they need to chat another time!!! Dan is definitely clueless. Especially when he tells Sarah that Lester does not matter, only he and Sarah and their marriage matter. Yikes! Also….Sarah’s thought to herself that she has probably had sex with Lester over the past few weeks more times than with her husband…. Probably!!!!!!! Over the past month (in story time) she has fucked Lester countless times without even one time with Dan.

Rjh200m

2025-03-01 17:46:12 +0000 UTC

Luster - You're making anonymous veiled threats on Patreon? What the fuck is wrong with you? Go to hell.

Darrow

2025-03-01 14:28:07 +0000 UTC

I hate to be that person complaining about the Alpha compared to final but this is an example of what bothers me the most. Final has the girls at home …”going down easy and asleep” but in the final & alpha “…Though, with the girls gone, it wouldn’t be as bad as last time. They could be as loud as they wanted, not needing to use the old futon in the basement. Lester could fuck her on her bed, maybe even tomorrow before work in the morning…” Thus leading to yet another continuity issue from alpha to final. It has been pointed out numerous times in previous chapters. Perhaps an additional editor could be used to help alleviate this problem. The Jesse character, to me, has the worst development of everyone in this story. He has gone from hapless loser sneaking pics from dumbass Dan, to rapey hotel room, to now somehow believing he’s in love with Sarah after one night sharing her with the man she clearly has a better sexual connection with. His actions are so far out of character from where he started, it’s not even realistic. I understand that a certain level of disbelief has to suspended in this story, but his character could have been a great antithesis to both Dan & Lester. His continued success at Dans office despite his ineptitude and of course he could have been Sarah’s lover, rivaling Lester. Not because he’s better, but haplessly finding himself alone with Sarah and her giving in to his advances because it would frustrate Dan even more. These are just some of my thoughts on where the story is. I enjoy it still and am looking forward to the next chapter. If this ever gets put into a book, hopefully the continuity issues will be resolved.

Dodge1109

2025-03-01 14:07:07 +0000 UTC

Loved the first half. Hated the second half. This one was disappointing. Facetime sex? C'mon.

Jon Smith

2025-03-01 14:02:48 +0000 UTC

Yea I must agree. Would seem she is losing her self worth and motherly instinct. Story needs to pick up.

Earl0849

2025-03-01 13:57:29 +0000 UTC

It's just a story Mr wanna be attorney. Watch the maga comments because you could find out what the meaning of a sucker punch really is. Dan's wasn't. Learn before you speak.

Luster

2025-03-01 12:10:17 +0000 UTC

For the first time in a long time of reading porn I was more grossed out than turned on by the Lester/Sarah sex scene. The description of his grotesque eating habits, the dirty unkept room, unmade beds with dirty sheets then Sarah’s laying down sucking his fingers… about the only way to make it more unappealing I would be to introduce in scat play. Anyway as I comment in the lounge earlier this week. That’s me done. Time to concentrate on finishing some of my own lit series rather than paying to read this.

LB

2025-03-01 11:52:29 +0000 UTC

Agree, unless Lester & Sarah get some push back from Dan or parents no place left to go. She is turning off to kids and slipping deeper but sex is boring. Would appear Lester has her under his spell so where do we go from here? Dan's quest to get better Job is boring. Jesse is boring. Otis pushing cart around hospital is boring. Phone sex boring. No serious competition for Lester. Sarah isn't even serious competition for Lester. Story is lost in repetition.

Earl0849

2025-03-01 11:00:56 +0000 UTC

Totally agree that the sexting behind Dan's back is much less hot than Sara and Lester sexting in front of him. Maybe this arc is necessary to give Dan time and space to resist his fetish or vice versa to keep him in the dark and then humiliate him even more. But honestly, even from the perspective of Lester's devious plan, it looks like he's outdone himself. Regularly fucking Sarah in front of Dan, and humiliating him in the process, would have been a much more effective tactic to turn Sarah into an obedient whore and Dan into a gutless cuckold. That way Lester could manage both spouses in a much more predictable and effective way, and with the current situation, creating distance and friction in the couple could lead to much more unpredictable results.

Daniel

2025-03-01 07:57:28 +0000 UTC

For me TA has lost all dramatic tension. Sarah might not want to admit it to herself but the marriage is over. The children seem to be more of an inconvenience than a reason for restraint. Dan has gone from an unfortunate victim of contrived circumstance to the dumbest son of a bitch ever written in fiction. He’s like a middle weight prize fighter in the ring trying to fight a heavy weight with both hands tied behind his back and a blindfold on. So low has he sunk that any attempt to deliver him ‘justice’ would be ridiculous. The relationship with Sarah is like a boat stuck on a reef taking on water. Dan’s down below pumping out water while Sarah’s smashing more holes in the hull. Even the sex is getting dull. So much repetition. You could cut and paste the Lester and Sarah action from the last three chapters and barely notice a difference. I think chapter 22 was probably the high point when Lester reclaimed Sarah and she said she loved him for the first time in Dan’s presence. Without Sarah being pulled between her desire and the immediate threat of Dan’s disapproval the sex falls flat.

LB

2025-03-01 05:14:46 +0000 UTC

Darrow. The irony of that MAGA comment, given your standing here! 👍

Chris K

2025-03-01 04:57:17 +0000 UTC

Vivian White - you're quite correct. Jesse was mouthing off outrageously, and he had twice shoved Dan back. But Dan was not being shoved at that moment. He was not defending himself physically from a shove. He was not, in any way, engaging in self defense or resisting force applied to him, or trying to stop physical harm. He simply punched Jesse. There had already been a moment or moments since the last shove. It was an attack. True, Jesse was saying hateful things and trash talking. Big time. But someone shooting off their mouth is not legitimate provocation for an assault. Not in the eyes of the law. And not morally. People get heated, but there's a huge difference between argument, and violence or threat of violence. Recently, a friend of mine got into a disagreement online. If could have been civil. The other person threatened to rape her in front of her children, cut off her head and burn her house down. There's no excuse for that. In the real world, you're not allowed to go around punching people, even if they shoved you a few minutes before. Even if they're talking shit. Self defence is about using reasonable force to stop a threat - not having a psychotic episode and decking someone because you are flashing on someone else fucking your wife and emasculating you - which is where Dan was. Mostly, out in the real world, people aren't allowed to go punching each other. I can understand Dan's situation, and the cumulative stress he is under, and the horror of someone like Jesse showing up, behaving aggressively and making wild allegations. But it's still a sucker punch.

Darrow

2025-03-01 04:16:14 +0000 UTC

Well, I had a few years doing criminal prosecutions in my younger days, and people did get charged. Particularly public places, lots of witnesses. The sort of stuff that might go on in a back alley can get you charged if it takes place somewhere else. But your jurisdiction may be more tolerant of violence. Dan's already had previous contact with the police, so his name will show up in the system when they run a check.

Darrow

2025-03-01 04:06:12 +0000 UTC

It was better. The phone sex was something good. Looking forward to more

John Lewis

2025-03-01 03:49:29 +0000 UTC

In real life the only way he gets arrested is if Jesse dies.

LB

2025-03-01 03:33:33 +0000 UTC

What I don't like is how the finished product is always the exact same as the what the alpha was lol. Literally nothingggggg gets changed. Cmon man

KB

2025-03-01 03:14:58 +0000 UTC

It wasn't unprovoked. Jesse shoved him and was insulting him and his wife.

Vivian White

2025-03-01 03:11:15 +0000 UTC

On a positive note, you know what I really like about these chapters? The sex. And more than just the sex, there's the whole seduction, the tension back and forth between characters, the surprises, as they desire or anticipate, and it goes back and forth, crossing boundaries. Sarah didn't intend on sex with Lester, or phone sex with him. It happened, but she wasn't raped or forced. Rather, it grows naturally, things happen, there's interest, stimulation, lines are approached and then crossed. The characters get excited, and interested, and then horny. There are often situations where the characters weren't planning on sex, or weren't planning to go as far as they did, or do things they hadn't intended. But there has never been a sexual encounter in TA where the characters involved didn't honestly want what they wanted in a particular moment, didn't intend, and didn't enjoy going and doing what they did. Say what you will about Lester (criminal, sociopath, cheat, tub of lard, hygeine deficient) he delivers for Sarah and for Lizzie every single time. And no matter what Sarah does, she enjoys. I have to say I like that. And I forgive a lot for that. Good sex is its own reason for existing.

Darrow

2025-03-01 02:36:42 +0000 UTC

LB - At a trial, certainly. Particularly in front of a jury, a jury would be sympathetic. Might not keep him from getting arrested by the cops or charged with assault, or ending up in the process. That might be a serious judgment call on the part of the police. Also, Employers love it when Employees dramatic bullshit follows them into the office. I know that with the Employers I worked for, any time we had an Employee whose personal life followed them into the workplace and started screaming, we started looking around for a new employee.

Darrow

2025-03-01 02:28:25 +0000 UTC

While I agree then lets get to it. To many side roads. We saw no advancement to speak of. If so point them out.

Earl0849

2025-03-01 02:03:00 +0000 UTC

"Just tired of Lester being only one who gets any." FWIW, I'm in almost the exact opposite camp: I'm here specifically for the Lester/Sarah dynamics. Seeing him manipulate and control her, perverting and corrupting her, and slowly binding her to him, mind, body and soul as she grows increasingly immoral, corrupt and depraved is what interests me. I have very nearly zero interest in tertiary characters beyond whatever minor role or function they intermittently serve in advancing Sarah's moral decline...

Arc

2025-03-01 01:56:15 +0000 UTC

IKR!? Cripes! -- "you're" is a CONTRACTION ffs! Don: Every time you read "you're", hear "you are" in your head; because that's what it IS! (Just like "it's" ALWAYS means "it is" and NEVER 'belonging to it"!) To wit: * "its" (belonging to it), * "his" (belonging to him), * "hers" (belonging to her) and * "yours" (belonging to you) also NEVER have/use an apostrophe! This's basic grammar! Your "Editor" clearly needs some help!

Arc

2025-03-01 01:48:09 +0000 UTC

I reckon he’d get off with self defence. Jesse pushed him twice while Dan was trying to placate him. Coming into an office you don’t work at screaming like a looney and physically confronting them, Jesse’s the aggressor.

LB

2025-03-01 01:36:15 +0000 UTC

While you're breaking it down how about laying out where this story is heading? One thing that did stick out was when Sarah would not hug her kid that was in her bed. Should I take that as a sign she is slipping deeper would seem so.

Earl0849

2025-03-01 01:11:20 +0000 UTC

I think I'm out after this one. It's been fun, but it hasn't felt like the story is going anywhere for a few chapters now. Cheers all

77kingxx

2025-03-01 01:09:35 +0000 UTC

Dan could clean the Chicago apartment for Lester & Sarah. Sarah could supervise.

Michael Haase

2025-03-01 00:12:18 +0000 UTC

A lot of typos this time around, especially in that last section, but I'm enjoying Dan continuing to ruin his own life while Sarah and Lester get theirs.

Chris

2025-02-28 23:52:56 +0000 UTC

Honestly I hope Jesse goes off the deep end and takes Dan out of the picture.

Sarin 031

2025-02-28 23:21:17 +0000 UTC

We should change this series to "What New Ways Can Dan Fuck it Up." He's just committed a violent assault on someone in the workplace, literally in view of everyone. Plenty of witnesses. Completely unprovoked. Looks like aggravated assault. And this is after or during being publicly accused of domestic abuse. Wow. Just ... wow. Here's a tip for you boys and girls. Don't punch someone out when they accuse you of beating your wife. Makes you look like the sort of violent impulsive asshole that beats his wife. And it turns out that this victim is a former Employee of Walt's and a direct co-worker. One who got fired under a suspicious cloud. Now Walt's got to start wonder if what he thought was going on was really what was going on. Or if maybe the problem was Dan and not Jesse. Walt better not phone up Byron to check up on things. Byron would have a lot to say. The call notification while Sarah was masturbating was probably from Dan. Probably he finally got himself arrested outright and was at the station, or had just been released on Recognisance. She was going to bed, so she's got a ready made excuse for not answering his call. But I got to wonder how she'll take it. Automatic sympathy for her husband, sure. But Jesse? Harmless whiny puppy love Jesse? The same Jesse he manhandled at the nightclub? The same Jesse he got drunk and got arrested over at the hotel? The same Jesse he keeps trying to screw over. I really think that once you get past the automatic loyalty... she's going to have serious questions for Dan. Dan is going to be incredibly lucky if he still has a job after this. The only thing that will allow him to keep his job is Deus ex Machina. Lester and the story need to keep him out of the way... in Chicago. But.... fuck, Dan. Grow up. I haven't even touched on his trainwreck of a conversation with Sarah.

Darrow

2025-02-28 23:10:39 +0000 UTC

4 at best. Just tired of Lester being only one who gets any. What the hell happen to Richard? How can you run a hospital if your not there? Does anyone work in IT department or do they just run off and fuck all the time? Sarah may as well tell Dan to hit the Bricks as he is nothing but a bit player. Jesse still a moron. Why don't Sarah & Lester move to Chicago make and sell porn and end this thing? Very disappointing chapter.

Earl0849

2025-02-28 23:01:50 +0000 UTC

Well, I have no idea what adamnelty means, but that worked for me

Terminal Itch

2025-02-28 22:35:31 +0000 UTC

It's taken you two years to get to particular scenes? Lol okay. Give me a break. Just get on with your double penetration scene. We both know the only reason you write this is for your little scenes. That and you view the story as a bank.

Elfy

2025-02-28 22:22:05 +0000 UTC

Toxic Attraction: Chapter 27

Comments

Would seem so but early reviews of 28 seem to point towards the SOS with the three with maybe a slight step in a different direction. With out the input of Darrow breaking it down i,m confused at what that shift may be. So will wait it out.

Or….as Lester fucks her, he says “Dan wants you to stop fucking me, tell me to stop and I will right now”….”No Lester, don’t ever stop fucking me”, Sarah responds….

I think he'll make it a point the next day when he's fucking her to say something like "I thought your pathetic little hubby wanted you to take a pause. But here you are, spreading your legs for me once again. You'll pause when I say pause, you little slut."

Hey he is and she will get more training as Lester moves in.

Lester is going to show up again while the girls are still up, playing nice and getting the girls to call him Uncle Lester and that he is there to watch out for them while dad is not there, and he will be sleeping in mommies room so she will feel safe.

I think Lester's going to get Sarah to demean Dan more and more as her conditioning continues. He's training her to belittle Dan, at first because it pleases Lester, and then because she gets off on it. He'll say does it matter what Dan thinks. She'll say, "Not at all. He's pathetic."

So Sarah said she is not going to let Lester off the hook for the Jesse thing at the hotel. What is she going to do about it that will teach Lester a lesson?

I would say Roy was dropped on his head, but that would imply someone loved him enough to hold him

Yea like riding Sarah's face while Lester makes a Video.

Well... I think she will make Sarah clean the room and do some other menial tasks for her...

Was wondering if that maid at Lester's hotel is going to get in on any action? Maybe ride Sarah's face. What do you think Cat?

Ok. Just this once. 😊

I'm sorry, Goddess Cat. Will you forgive me?

Mark started it!

Now you're embarrassing me, guys... ☺️

Those cheeks would definitely turn red if I got hold of them. Oh, you mean her face...

I can see Cat's cheeks turning red. Cat rules!!!

There is no Kayden Kross! There is no Gal Gadot! There is only Cat Kuskie!

OMG! I feel myself blushing...! 😳

I'm with Kat I want action at hospital. I want Mary to do her with strap on as she sucks off Richard and Otis.

Yeah. Cat is in charge here

Yeah, what Cat says. Whatever she says.

Prostituting Sarah is merely the extreme of her degradation and submission. Receiving money is just a minor detail; Either way, Sarah will always be a cheap whore and will therefore always have more and more lower-class clients...

I don't think he'll make money off her because he needs it. He'll just do it to show her she's his slut. I can see guys giving him money in front of Sarah as he offers her up to them.

That's pretty much where I'm hoping it'll go

Earl - you may ultimately be right, but I think Dan will do something surprising, but it remains to be seen whether it is too little too late as you say.

Don's been pretty consistent releasing TA on the last day of each month, lately. As for the "Undercover" story, nothing yet for us plebeians not on the $35 tier.

Sorry to be boring, but does anyone have any idea when Chapter 28 will be available? And the undercover cop one? I'm on the lowest tier, I guess, if that helps

Dan, you know, Sarah’s husband, who is almost finished with his master plan to vanquish Lester and reclaim his wife….he will emerge from the Chicago apartment like Superman and take no prisoners….he will act with speed, divisiveness and purpose…..

Who's Dan?

For sure. Even Lester should know he could make money with Sarah as high-end escort. She would love the work.

Team Sarah!

Does offer a better description of job. However I think Otis should assume duties of bodyguard. Dan needs to remain home and active in child care. I do feel Otis should have a benefit package as well.

Earl - I think Dan would prefer to be described as Sarah’s appointment organizer and scheduler, as well as videographer and bodyguard!

Ok , Tim. It seems you can’t conduct a reasonable discussion without going off into a rant full of capitalisation and lols. Not much point in carrying it on.

She's a bad girl...

I'm sure that Sarah would...

Like it. You and I are of one mind TD.

Sarah was smart she would dump that crazy Lester and use her talent for more enterprising undertaking. Use Dan as her pimp and babysitter Otis as her driver and make some serious money.

Would you let Lester order you to dress slutty?

Yeah... I also found it strange that Lester hadn't made a demand about Sarah's attire for the next work day... (perhaps he'll make it by morning...)

No, thank you.

Thanks Mark and Term!

How long before she's wearing short skirts, no bra and Lester's ring proudly on her left hand? She will want everyone to know she's Lester's slut.

Agree with you, Cat. Agree with Mark too

Nice butt, Cat.

I'm pretty sure that Lester only loves himself!

My definition of love is 5 midgets peeing on a woman. Now tell me how Lester's love is holding an entire hospital ransom, and plotting the murder of children that he finds annoying. That we all need to cut him some slack because he was bullied in High School and Greek men like to fuck each other.

Ok Earl, thanks. Let’s see what Tim cones up with and then we will compare notes.

That would be easy for the last 46 years. Loyal, best friend partner in everything. Enjoying this site together. Sharing our opinions. Love is a fruit salad. Lester and Sarah missing the boat on that.

Tim would appear that suggesting Royston commentary is rubbish as it pertains to Lester and love and childbirth has stuck a nerve. However, we all as far as I know are still entitled to our opinion some just handle them better.

Remember Dan......? Neither do I. I guess he's in jail, that was the hook Don used to entice us for another chapter.

Tim, that was a bit like being savaged by a dead sheep, lol. Come back when you have serious points to make. Lol.

Earl, are you sure you are not channeling your inner Finnegan’s wake? JJ has nothing on your stream of consciousness. He’s a amateur compared to you! As Tim, nice but dim would say LOLLL!! I really have no idea what your point is, so I can’t answer it.

I will try and email.

I was thinking the same. My view is that this story has run its course. I initially joined because of TC which sadly also went downhill. Now that’s finished I’m not sure if I’ll continue subscribing.

Notice how few posts there are this month. That surely tells you something.

You can post non-erotic stuff on there.

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Not that kind of story.

Hi Mark. Love to read it, but I don’t do email. Can’t you post it on literotica?

I heard from Darrow. RJ, Royston? Not interested?

I would be happy to. I'll get my publisher to forward an email.

"Yes, Daddy. Thank you Daddy. I'll be a good girl."

Excellent. See message after next comments.

RJ, Darrow, Royston, I was wondering if you'd like to read the first chapter of my book. I'd like some feedback. My email is markalbright99@gmail.com

Cheetos overdose.

Thus according to Lester’s plan.

I agree. It feels like too much has happened and she's too far gone. Things have awakened inside her that she wants to explore. I'm all for it.

Dan right now is the fisherman in the boat saying that he may start fishing a little bit later on….while at the same time the fish is surrounded by a shark…..

And she's already been swallowed by a hump-cocked whale.

It's fairly clear that if Dan ever *does* get Sarah back, it's going to be because of something happening between her and Lester, not because of Dan's amateurish efforts (so far).

If Dan was a fisherman and Sarah a fish…he’s trying to reel her back into the boat while she’s swimming faster and faster into deeper water.

Yea, but what I am saying is she won’t even know that she is a porn star, cause Lester will have complete control of her.

I know he said the shit will start to hit the fan. I'm guessing the Jessie and Dan incident is what he referred to. I expect this incident will lead off the festivities.

Have you paid attention to Onlyfans? Those girls make hundreds of thousands, even millions. If Sarah ends up an Onlyfans pornstar she's probably set for life. As to the call she ignored. Probably Dan calling from jail again.

Based on Don's comments in to opening of Chapter 26 about things coming to a head in 27, I had high hopes he would finally deliver and the story would move forward. It didn't move the needle at all. At this point I have to throw in the towel.

Fair enough!

It's fairly clear that if Dan ever does get Sarah back, it's going to be because of something happening between her and Lester, not because of Dan's amateurish efforts (so far).