Toxic Attraction: Chapter 24

Specifically: 1. if Sarah was not wearing Lester's engagement ring during the work week, then Lester could ask her to put it on when they start sexting each other on Friday night while Sarah is home with the girls. Then, Lester could ask Sarah to take some selfies that highlight her engagement ring as she poses for the selfies. 2. This could lead to Sarah having an inner monologue about what Lester actually said and what she was thinking when Lester proposed during the dinner in Chicago. As stated by many others, this could include Sarah reflecting on how manly Lester is and how pathetic Dan is for allowing this to happen. (Regardless of where it comes in the chapter, would love to read more about what Lester and Sarah actually said and what they were thinking during the public "proposal" scene). 3. Definitely agree that there should be more "imprinting" of Lester getting Sarah to say "I love you" and to get Sarah to say that she wants Lester to make her pregnant with a baby boy. This could be an additional scene playing out in the morning at the hotel or as an additional scene back in the apartment in lester's bedroom and/or in the final scene on the futon. ... just my own "wish list".

sp

Sarah's not really going to be in a position to be angry about 'betrayal', as the second she let Lester back in the house, let alone with the kids upstairs, she betrayed Dan.

MV

Can't see her refusing to watch the kids as she has them mostly all the time now. But she could be drawn in which could be another chapter. Think this would drive Lester's ego even higher. To have the Two of them crawling after his cock.

Earl0849

More likely than not, she screams in horror and runs out of the house. And she refuses to babysit the kids anymore because she now knows what Sarah is up to. But, perhaps as the saying goes, “the apples doesn’t fall far from the tree”….maybe her mom can’t take her eyes off of all of those cocks…..and it reminds her of all of her exploits when she was younger….

Rjh200m

Despite her admonition, Dan found himself drawn to the peephole. He got there just in time to hear Sarah say, "Thank God you interrupted us, Daddy. I wanted you so bad."

Mark Albright

I think a hot scene in the next chapter is that Lester tells Sarah no more sex with Dan. But he agrees that she can have sex with Dan one last time. So, at the apartment Sarah and Dan are in his bedroom. They have been through so much but recognize that they still love each other and need this intimacy no matter what happens going forward. So they are making love. But Lester opens the door and looks in. He is totally naked and he has his cock in his hand, fully extended and big. “Hey Sarah, this is for you baby if you want it, I’ll be in my room waiting for you. But don’t make me wait long.” Dan yells at Lester to get out and close the door. The whole time, Sarah was just staring at Lester. “I can’t believe him, can you?” Dan says to Sarah. Then he resumes where he left off, kissing Sarah, positioning his dick to enter her. But when he does, she does not pull him in. She is not talking sexy like she did before Lester entered the room. She seems distracted. She seems to be still looking toward the door and not into Dan’s eyes…. “What’s wrong baby? Did that upset you? Lester can be such a jerk” Dan whispered to Sarah. “Don’t worry, it will be ok.” Sarah slides her pussy off of Dan’s rapidly shrinking dick…. “I’m so sorry Dan, but Lester wants me now. And I can’t say no. If he didn’t come in and show me his huge cock, I would have been ok, but now I can’t stop thinking about it inside me. You know Dan, don’t you, how good he fucks me. You have seen how crazy I get when he takes me.” Sarah then got up and walked toward the door. She turned to Dan….. “Wait for me baby, I’ll be back later….and don’t you look through the peephole and jerk off. This is private time for Lester and me.”

Rjh200m

Dan has to see that Lester is going after him, man-to-man. You don’t have to be a genius or psychologist to see this. Lester has been so upfront with Dan about what he is doing. And I think that this is where there is the potential for a real interesting plot twist. It would be very boring if we have chapter after chapter of Lester screwing (figuratively) and outsmarting Dan. I think Dan will strike back hard regardless of the consequences because this is what Dan has done when directly challenged by Lester or Jesse. And yes, it is driven by Dan’s temper and tendency to get violent. I don’t think Dan will forever work to build a legal case against Lester or try to convince Sarah that Lester is evil. He just needs to demonstrate to Lester that he is finished being a door mat and that Lester is in real danger if he does not back off. Lester is smart yes, but I don’t think he is brave or courageous, especially when it comes to physically reacting to Dan. Lester only understands one thing and that is force, whatever form it is in. Do I think this is how the story will evolve? Not necessarily, this is why I say potential plot twist. But I would love to see it!

Rjh200m

I think he's an idiot for letting Lester into his and Sarah's life to begin with and I think he's an idiot for letting it continue the way it has, but I don't think he's an idiot when it comes to Lester. Specifically. Most people are not used to dealing with truly malicious psychopathic people. Even in the last chapter he was asking himself if it was possible that Lester could be this evil. I think it's reasonable not to think someone could be that terrible. Obviously, Lester is being that terrible too him and he's seeing it for what it is now. At least I hope. If not, he is an idiot and that diminishes the story a lot. But I don't think the Don's going to let that happen.

J

I also suspect that Dan's hidden cameras shtick is going to backfire on him disastrously. Sarah will take it as an ultimate betrayal. Trust would be over. But some interesting things - suppose Dan, in process of bugging Lester's apartment with hidden cameras discovers there are already cameras.... Or supposing that Lester, who is clearly experienced with surveillance, notices that Dan's set up hidden cameras, and carefully ferrets them all out. Now he's got an advantage - he knows Dan's watching or recording, but Sarah doesn't know, and Dan doesn't know that Lester knows. Lester could put Sarah into all sorts of situations, extract all sorts of confessions, betrayals, sex talk, claims of love, all of this. He could put on a show for Dan to carefully rip out Dan's heart and emasculate him completely to the point he might harm himself, or disappear, or break or simply give up on or even hate Sarah. What Sarah sees as harmless secret sex talk that Dan doesn't need to know about could end up wrecking Dan. Dan could, for instance, end up watching Sarah service Otis and his friends in their home. Or Lester could put certain information, dangle things in front of Dan, to make Dan act in certain ways. Alternately, even if Lester doesn't have a clue, he's still going to put Sarah through paces and make her say things that will break Dan's heart. Lester does make mistakes, but he's lucky, and he's able to improvise. Still, it's nice to see Dan having an actual plan or idea. Dan's kind of an idiot.

Darrow

Yeah, I agree. The Lincoln Group is eventually going to be on Lester's trail. I guess then we'll see how good Lester really is.

Darrow

Regarding Otis, here's the thing: Otis has unrestricted access to every single bit of the hospital, every office, every storage room, file rooms, to the server room, electrical panel rooms, the security room he's got the keys to everywhere. He probably has access to sections of the hospital that are disused, steam tunnels, even places that aren't even on the blueprints. Actually - not 100% sure of that, I figure a hospital this large would have an entire janitorial staff, not just Otis. But he's likely either connected with the other Janitorial staff on either a buddy basis or as a supervisor. But he can likely get access to anywhere and anything he wants with minimal effort and incovenience. He probably can't get into locked drawers and filing cabinets, but I think that Lester could probably help. And he can't access the computer system, but Lester owns that already. But think of the possibilities - Otis can access anywhere, he can disable or foil security cameras, temporarily disable elevators or wall off areas, he can install cameras and microphones, he can clean up messes so that no one knows anything's happened, etc. etc. For a guy like Lester, playing with the hospital, Otis is an unlimited skeleton key. If Lester wants to do something about Thornhill, Otis would be a convenient accessory. Think of that first sexual encounter where Sarah gets the facial, as a kind of job interview by Lester. Otis got to play, but Lester set boundaries and Otis respected them. Otis divulged information. Otis isn't infatuated like Jesse, uncontrollable like Vernon, he's not some mentally ill street person like Cash. He's someone that Otis can deal with - someone who makes deals, and can be trusted to do his job in return for rewards. Someone who can keep an eye on Sarah and everyone else, especially Thornhill and his little gang in Lester's absence, who can provide spaces, set up space to order, or carry out missions. He can help Lester put Sarah through all sorts of sexual situations, he can even one on one Sarah for Lester, as part of breaking her boundaries (if there are any left). He can also assist Lester in fucking over Dan - sort of a guy in the scene.

Darrow

Also, it takes two to tango doesn’t it…While Sarah has certainly fallen under the influence/control of Lester, she is also maneuvering to get what she wants!

Rjh200m

Thanks Darrow, great insight. Lots of dynamics changing between Sarah and Dan….

Rjh200m

Yep. It was a paradox for Sarah. She expected, or accepted or wanted unprotected sex with Lester. She knew it was going to happen. She couldn't discuss this inevitability with Dan. He'd either unrealistically refused or order it not to happen... and he'd fail. It would be childish and rather silly of him. If they keep playing with Lester, he'll come in her, she knows. So pretending Dan can just order it not to happen is dumb. She's not going to go to him, try and reason with him, and let him do or order her to do something dumb that's going to get her pregnant by Lester in the long run. The other option is just as bad - suppose she laid it out, Dan was convinced, he understood it would happen inevitably, and he decides to do an end run by breaking the whole thing off. No more Lester!!! No more of Lester's big cock!!! No more of Lester's fantastic fun games that are so satisfying!!! She can't let Dan cancel it either. So her best option is that she knows best - she goes on the pill, accepting that sooner or later Lester will come in her, but counting on his not wanting to knock her up too soon, she doesn't tell him. And she doesn't tell Dan. Dan's finding out she's on the pill may be a pivotal moment - it's the moment she has to reveal to Dan that she doesn't trust him or his judgment, and that more than Dan she's really been in control all along.

Darrow

I have a little theory for a few chapters now that Sarah will find out she's pregnant, decide to move to Chicago to be with Lester and when she does the TLG takes its revenge on Lester leaving Sarah crawling back to Dan or someone else.

Mkm560

Well, Sarah knows Dan is fixed, so the birth control was always protection from someone else.

Michael Haase

After reading commentary from a lot of people here, I think there are a few important points people are missing. First off, Marcus at the Lincoln group is going to find Lester. I'm not sure where that part of the story is going, but these guys don't look to be any good and I think Lester is going to be cut down by them pretty badly. I think this is going to tie in with right around the time that Dan gives Sarah the information he finds from the hidden cameras. Next, If Sarah's domination really is complete, it's not going to be Lester finding her birth control and it taking her off of it. She's going to do it willingly. It's going to turn her on even more and then she's going to tell Lester when she is fertile. I have a feeling the work email he saw that he was so interested in was an email about Sarah's healthcare or a checkup with her OB. Obviously, it could be something completely different like having Sarah put under him in the org chart as well. So where does it go? I think that Dan is out of the picture for a week in jail or something like that, Lester figures out the birth control and makes Sarah willingly come off of it, simultaneously while trying to figure out what to do with her kids, the Lincoln group is searching for Lester and finds him, and Dan starts building a case against him. Everything comes falling down for him at the very end, but there's the question about whether or not he's able to impregnate Sarah and if she's actually willing to let him go. There's also the potential that the Lincoln group makes him a deal. They can send him to jail or hire him but makes him stop pursuing Sarah. Overall, fantastic story and great writing. I'm really intrigued to see what happens in the end.

J

I think One thing is clear. No matter where this story goes Sarah is going to sink lower. Perhaps even lower than the perv Lester wanted her to go. If that happens Lester will lose control. Otis could turn her out to his friends. Richard & his assistant could corrupt her and introduce her to Bi sex. Alcohol & drugs could become a factor again though Otis or Richard. All this could come into play. Dan & yes Lester love her but through what they started they may lose her. They may have to work together to reclaim her a task that it may already be to late to succeed at. Sarah does not love Lester she loves his cock and is addicted to his cock and all cocks. Her addiction will take her places Lester nor Dan even expected her to go.

Earl0849

Let's hope so. Sarah is now beginning to realize her true sexual self

Tom

Ahh, ok, i now remember that

Rjh200m

In one of the earlier chapters after Lester stopped using a condom Sarah told Dan not to worry that she was using precautions.

Richardcat

MH - Dan will have to take her to a locksmith to be able to have sex with her!

Rjh200m

Agree and Richard.

Earl0849

Darrow- great post. I sort of missed the extremely key point that you highlight that Sarah has not told Dan that she has gone on birth control. This is a huge development, not the part of her going on birth control, but the part about not telling Dan. And I think your reasoning for this makes total sense. And are you saying that she did not tell Dan because she has made an emotional leap to Lester and having sex with others totally outside of the “agreement” she has had with Dan to be in it together, plan things out, keep in touch, have a safe word, etc?

Rjh200m

Lester has Sarah's pussy lips pierced, he puts rings in each lip then places a lock thru each ring blocking entry without removing the lock. Dan, isn't allowed in without Lester's permission. Oh my, what control Lester now has.

Michael Haase

More Otis is definitely in the cards.

Darrow

One thing I agree with - at some point, Sarah will want Lester to impregnate her.

Darrow

No, I think he's found the key to turning this on its head. Sarah's decision to go on birth control wasn't even discussed with Dan. It was 100% hers, and I think it was her acceptance or wish to have more and more uninhibited sex with Lester. I don't recall whether Lester had cum in her by that time, its vague as to when she went on the pill. But she was definitely ready for him to come in her. As I've said, Lester has figured out how to turn it around and work on her depravity. Now that he's figured it out, and had her confess to being on birth control, that allows the prospect of other men coming in her. It allows him to share her freely with whoever he chooses, and as we've seen... she wants to be shared. She's been 'dirty-talking' being shared since the guy jerked off outside Lester's SUV. She actually french kissed the guy through the window. Well, now the secret is out, and Lester is going to have her put her pussy where her mouth was. Originally, she was loyal to Dan, and just played with Lester for Dan. Now she's switched loyalty to Lester, but she's still nominally with Dan. Once Lester has her fully fucking other men, having other men come in her, and her loving and welcoming each ejaculation, it will move her further from Dan and more completely under Lester's control. His only risk is that she'll start leaving both Lester and Dan behind and fucking on her own. But Lester is control obsessed, and look how upset he was by Byron. He's also deeply manipulative and very aware of Sarah's desires. Dan had her fuck other men to please him (Lester), or support his career (Byron). Lester will have her fuck other men for her pleasure, he'll use her wanton-ness to reinforce and extend control. He wants her at the point where she'll willingly and enthusiastically fuck anyone he tells her too (she's practically there), but only who he tells her too (bad news for Dan... she's getting close to that point). Eventually, when he tires or grows bored, he'll move onto the final frontier - impregnating her. But by that time, Dan will be absolutely and thoroughly crushed, if he's still in the picture, and Sarah will have explored mad levels of wanton debauchery. Unless he's turned her into a female Lester clone in the end.

Darrow

Thanks for info. Think Otis could cause problem for Lester if Sarah gets a taste. With Dan in Chicago and Lester spending time in both places only means more time for Sarah to be exposed to Otis. Lester could have over played his hand.

Earl0849

He's black.

Mark Albright

I thought I read when Sarah first saw Otis he was black. Looking back I cannot fine that passage. So will stand corrected.

Earl0849

A good point. I noticed that all men introduced are inferior to Lester. I wonder if there could be an Alfa male perhaps at hospital that could disrupt Lester's plan? Sarah is already to the point where large cocks are hard to resist.

Earl0849

I think after the weekend his focus will shift from him deceiving Sarah into becoming pregnant to having her willingly give up birth control. So that the next time she says "put a baby in me, Daddy" it will be a conscious choice on her part. She wants to have Lester's baby. For her it will mean her complete surrender to him.

Mark Albright

It’s worth looking back at past chapters to appreciate Lester’s consistency in pursuing his objective with Sarah. Here is an excerpt from Chapter 15 which seems like such a long time ago - “Sarah had finally succumbed and let him cum in her fertile pussy, unprotected, willingly. But he needed to dominate her completely. Dan and her kids might be the things letting her hold on, but he needed to make her let go. He needed to break Dan’s will and teach him his place. He would make her his. Completely.” Clearly he is super focused on separating Sarah from Dan. And by all accounts, he is nearing his goal. Perhaps his strategy for making Sarah “let go” with regard to the kids is to get her pregnant so that part of her life has to shift to her child with Lester…and, therefore, she has to focus on Lester much more on a daily basis (in addition to them now working together). Sarah would now have an even stronger emotional bond with Lester because of their child; a fundamental part of her life is now connected to and involves him. And of course, Lester would keep trying to make it closer and closer until Sarah’s life revolves totally around him. A less sinister strategy than what Lester alluded to in an earlier chapter regarding the kids. But we now know how important it is to Lester to get Sarah pregnant.

Rjh200m

I don’t believe so - fairly certain he is white. There was speculation prior to chapter 23 that he might be. Pretty sure it was somewhat cleared up in that chapter though. I might be mistaken though.

Mr Shuttlesworth

Was it mentioned in the story Otis was black? If so I totally missed it.

Mkm560

I think Lester stepped into the muddy water letting Otis get a taste. Otis like all janitorial staff knows his way around the hospital and is connected. He is not some piece of trash like Lester clearly thinks he is. He is street smart. Otis knows where the drugs are and how to get them. With Lester & Dan spending time in Chicago this opens door for Otis. Sarah already tasted him she will be easy and Lester and Dan may have to work together to keep her. If Otis turns her out he can make money off her. Surely Otis knows some crack heads if he would need to help her along a little but she is a slut so don't think that will be necessary. Lester and Dan up against Black cock and yes black pussy going to be an awesome task to overcome. Sarah could be used and used hard at hospital stoned and well fucked.

Earl0849

If Lester tries to tell Otis what to do with Sarah, Otis should kick his ass and dump him in one of the hospital trash dumpsters! Something Dan should do by the way.

Rjh200m

At the end of TA 23 Lester indicated that he was going to talk to Otis. My guess is he is going to have Otis find a room where they can DP Sarah. I don’t think he will allow, probably by some threat, Otis to have her alone. He feels that with all the effort he has put into corrupting her that no one else deserves her unless it’s under Lester’s direction. I expect soon Lester will take her ass and then give that out to others. When she is off birth control he will watch her very closely.

Richardcat

Thanks for filling the void, RJ.

Mark Albright

Sarah was desperate for Otis to fuck her, her pussy was dripping. “No fucking today baby, all you get is a taste”. “You are used to getting fucked in fancy offices, hotels and your nice big house.” “When I fuck you, it’s going to be in my world not yours….I may bend you over the trash bin and fuck you from behind….maybe I’ll take you to the steam room and fuck you up against the water pipe…..maybe my friends and I will gang bang you in the generator room so no one will hear you screaming…” I’m going to do things to you that your wimp hubby cannot even dream of. Even fat boy, who thinks he owns you, won’t be able to give you the deprived sex you truly crave…”

Rjh200m

Soon, Sarah was sucking on Otis’s rapidly growing dick, she was intoxicated by its smell and how it felt in her mouth, so different but so good. “That’s it baby, take care of your new secret Daddy….” “Look at you now…..no more Mrs. Williams, important hospital executive dressed so fancy…..” “Now you’re on your knees, sucking the janitors cock, and enjoying it…..” “This is your new place baby, my hospital slut, and don’t you forget it….”

Rjh200m

She is to hot for Lester or Dan. Her home may become party city for Otis and friends. Many ways to go with this but this time I think Lester over played his hand. He can't hold her down anymore

Earl0849

I could see her cocking both Dan & Lester. Otis could show her off to the brothers & Sisters. Also think Lester's boss going to get some. This lady is beyond control.

Earl0849

That's quite hot!

MV

He may show up at work one day and give her the stare, this time Sarah won’t look away, she will stare back…. Then he tells her to follow him, and he brings her to a secluded part of the hospital, one that she did not even know about…. It’s a room with a bed where Otis sleeps if he is working extended shifts over several days…. “Now we have some time alone Sarah” Otis says….”In the car, I know you wanted more, baby” and now I can give it to you”… “You don’t have to worry about that guy right now” he added…. “In this room, I tell you what to do, and if you want my cock, you better be a good girl and do what I say….” “Now get on your knees and take my cock out, it’s time to make up for all those times that you ignored me…” Immediately and without one second of thought, Sarah knelt before him….she started to massage the huge bulge that was now only inches from her…..her mouth and pussy were already opening….”

Rjh200m

Earl0849

She didn’t protest. Next he will call her whore-which she technically does fit the description.

Richardcat

Just minutes ago DS posted on Discord he was using Google docs offline and somehow lost thousands of words from 25 BUT “aiming for tomorrow hopefully”.

J Lewis

Are we getting chapter 25 alpha draft tonight??? Does anyone know?

Bob James

I think the darkest outcome for Sarah would be for Lester to remake her in his own image, selfish, predatory, indifferent. Not a pawn but a partner in crime.

Darrow

She accepted being called his slut, so I guess she'll be fine with being Lester's bitch now. The more he degrades her the more she likes it.

Mark Albright

Well he has called her bitch for the first time, so Master can’t be far away.

Royston smith

Are we ever getting chapter 25? Jesus Christ lol

KB

I'm surprised Lester doesn't have Sarah call him Master at this point. Maybe that's next.

Mark Albright

Lester using Sarah to recruit other women is intriguing. Could be a TA2, where we are introduced to Sarah’s friends, neighbors, college roommates, etc., Lester “forces” her to set up meetings and gatherings where Lester is there. Sarah basically gives Lester the information and access he needs to seduce them, to include his devious schemes and coercive techniques if needed. Maybe Sarah just provides the information or maybe she is more proactive and works closely with Lester to snare his targets. What does Sarah gain from this? Lester still fucks her, although he has lost a lot of the enthusiasm for her compared to when he was corrupting her. But now that he owns her totally, he fucks her every now and then because he still enjoys making her cum, including the moans and facial expressions. But Sarah will accept whatever Lester offers at this point. This is a dark scenario!

Rjh200m

Lester has given hints about that over past chapters. He’s well versed in the dark web. He indicated getting rid of the girls and making it so Dan would get blamed. He searched some for a hit man for Dan but thought too many were police traps. He has disdain for the Sarah he first met. His plan has been to bring her down below his level. He loves fucking her and is intoxicated by his dominance over Sarah and Dan. He does not plan to live with her but wants her available to him whenever he decides. He will get tired of her and I wouldn’t be surprised if he used her to recruit other women before he dumps her. His time with Sarah will end when he senses he may be exposed to the authorities. At that point Sarah will probably be sold to someone like Chronos. Dan will be disposed of along the way. That’s my dark side thinking although not necessarily the way I would like it to end.

Richardcat

Great question! I would guess that something very bad happened to Lester sometime in his life that has made him incredibly angry, paranoid, skeptical and really devoid of enthusiasm for life and relationships. Perhaps when he was younger. He is obviously antagonistic toward women, maybe his mother abused him? Maybe his father abused him? Maybe he had no one in his childhood that cared about him. We seem to focus on him doing bad things but if there is a genesis for his behavior and Don Silver visits this in the story, I think it will be Lester as a victim sometime in his life, something very bad. How else to explain his utter distain for other humans?

Rjh200m

“So just who is Lester Marshall”? Says Dan at the end of 24. It is a question that has been posed several times now in this series. It’s fascinating me, as it must have significance or why repeat it? Ch 22: “The two of them thought they were just playing a game. That they could use him for their own fantasies and cast him aside when they were done, but they didn’t know anything. They didn’t know who Lester truly was or what he was capable of”. Ch 24: “All these fucking rubes think they got it all with their little houses and white picket fences. They don’t know what life is really like. How dangerous the world really is”. Lester clearly implying he knows how dangerous life can be. That he has experienced its darker side. That he has “walked on the wild side”, as Lou Reed would say. In ch 23 he says the same thing to Jesse. So, does Lester have a secret which Don hasn’t revealed yet? Is there more to him than just a sexual predator, an IT hacker, a purveyor of internet porn?I think there is. But it’s a secret, a mystery, I cannot yet fathom.

Royston smith

In Sarah and Lester's bedroom - "How am I ever gonna get knocked up when you keep fucking me in the butt?"

Mark Albright

Underneath Lester's desk at work - "Gluck, Gluck, Gluck, I wuv woo, Daddy."

Mark Albright

Things we will no longer hear Sarah say when Lester wants to fuck her (he kisses her shoulders, feels her ass, caresses her nipples, whispers in her ear)…. “I have to text Dan” “We have to wait for Dan” “Not here Lester, it’s where I work, I can get into trouble” “Not in my house, Lester, you know Dan’s rule” Things we will hear her say…. In his SUV - “Do you want me to get into the back seat now” In the apartment - “After we fuck, I want to sleep in your bed all night” At work - “Whatever you want, Boss” In her house - “What Dan doesn’t know, won’t hurt him”

Rjh200m

I believe if Lester gets Sarah to agree to fuck him in her daughter’s room, it will be when Lester has disposed of Sarah’s pills, she is fertile and ready to be impregnated and become Lester’s breeding bitch!!!

Gee

Agree!

Rjh200m

Yes fuzzy, good guess. Definitely could be.

Royston smith

Life isn’t fair & Truth is darker than fiction

Gee

Yes, she has moved out of the hot wife category into the cheating slut wife category. I also wonder when Dan and Sarah talk about the kids as well as when is Lester going to fuck her in the kids bedroom. That would really blow Dan’s mind as probably the marriage too.

Richardcat

Yes I think you are right Nike. Later on she cuts Lester off when he is about to reveal she agreed tio fuck a stranger.

Royston smith

I think Sarah might be lying based on the conversation they had walking up to the apartment, ““Has he bothered you at all? I mean, since the car incident,” Dan asked. “The car incident?” Sarah raised an eyebrow at him as they walked down the hall. “You know when you fooled around with Lester in our car without my permission?” Dan said. Sarah looked straight ahead. There might be something there that she wasn’t telling him.” It’s the last part that has me wondering.

Nike-Victory

Also doubt she told him the janitor was involved, didn't she say that she and Lester just fooled around in the car at the parking lot and cut the convo short to keep Dan from inquiring more?

Fuzzy Shark

Maybe setting up remote work location at home for Sara

Fuzzy Shark

Someone speculated that it was an email telling him he had been approved to transfer Sarah to his department. While that would make him happy, I don't know how that relates to him getting in their house. I am flummoxed as well. Even bumfuzzled.

Mark Albright

It's also telling that he says the next time, meaning there will be a next time Sarah wants to fuck Lester. And a next time. And a next time...

Mark Albright

You very well could be right, Mark. The phone conversation between Sarah and Dan at the beginning of the chapter is telling. Dan is concerned about Lester and Sarah working together in Middleton. Sarah says “are you worried about what might happen?” Dan says “ after what you told me happened in the car, yeah, obviously.” I doubt she told Dan about Lester fucking her over the hood of her car and that she initiated that action. He tells her next time she has to wait until he responds to her text. She says “Yes, Dad, God” and laughs. That’s not what a loving wife or partner would say. She is definitely detached from him. He is more like a brother than husband to her.

Richardcat

So the work email Lester receives: “He stopped on one that made him raise an eyebrow. Then a wicked grin crept onto his face.It looks like an opportunity to get past the William’s locked doors just presented itself. The universe truly was on his side”. Who is it from and how can it help Lester get past S&D’s locked doors? I think it must be from another head of department at the hospital addressed to Lester as head of IT. It must be from Sarah’s current line manager asking Lester to deal with an issue concerning Sarah. But what? And how will it help him gain access to their home. I confess I am flummoxed. Anyone have any ideas??

Royston smith

RJ, I considered whether both those lines of defence would work for Sarah at this point in the story, and I don’t think they will. Remember when Dan discovered them together in their BR at Middleton and threw Lester out? They had quite a knockdown row then before they both calmed down and decided to forgive. This time we are further down the road, Sarah is obviously even more under Lester’s spell. She has spent the night with him, gets lost in his kiss, is eager to go on a a-date. All things Dan has noticed. Then, she fucks Jesse, the guy who tricked Sarah onto Lesters cock, who is a malingering, incompetent no good. Someone who Dan loathes even more than Lester. Then she allows him to come in her. And don’t forget she took Byron’s cock too. It will be a step too far for Dan. He will explode in anger and she will defend herself. A lethal marital cocktail. This also makes sense from the point of view of the internal logic and rhythm of the story. A breach is long overdue. It will give the story a dramatic twist and leave it open for Don to plot Sarah’s further corruption in the next few chapters, as she comes completely under Lester’s control. This will be the climatic chapter, mark my words.

Royston smith

Royston- perhaps Sarah’s first line of defense is a tactic that has proven successful with Dan every time she has used it - the sexy stare along with a sensual touch, “you know baby that this turns you on, when I fuck someone you don’t like….” But Dan needs to not give in to this again and push back. At this point, Sarah will go to her second successful line of defense “I’m sorry baby, things got out of control, happened so fast that before I knew it, Jesse’s cock was inside me….you should have been there to protect me like we agreed to protect each other when one of us was getting lost in the moment…” She turns it back on Dan and tries to make him feel guilty. If Dan still resists and starts criticizing Sarah, then she goes with the heavy stuff you describe above! I agree that if she brings up drinking, drugs, and Dan’s inability to financially support his family, their relationship could take a nasty turn.

Rjh200m

So here's another possibility, another monkey wrench, as it were. What if Chapter 25 reveals Sarah has been lying to Dan more than we knew? She and Lester have been hooking up regularly back in Middleton. Remember Lester tells Dan it's been awhile since he and Sarah have gone on a real date. Trysts at the hospital don't count, he says. Trysts, plural. This would actually make more sense than Lester ignoring her at work. Some have said he ignored her at work to make her want him more for their engagement weekend. Actually, the more she fucks Lester the more she wants. That's what Lester is counting on by getting Dan out of the picture. Sarah simply won't be able to say no any more, regardless of Dan. Remember she said she was glad Lester didn't follow her to the bathroom, she wouldn't have been able to say no. I think he already had her well-prepped for the weekend at the hotel.

Mark Albright

Now there is that law about revenge porn. Mutual destruction…Sarah loses her reputation…Lester loses his freedom. It will be interesting to see how DS writes the conclusion…eventually.

J Lewis

My only issue with this take is her kids. She has kids and her parents. This is going to cause issues.

Roleplay Literate

So, I think I have given a pretty detailed account of what I think will happen in 25, in various recent posts. However, one thing I haven’t covered is the Dan/Sarah conversation, post the wild sex weekend when Dan gets out of Jail. Presumably he will be bailed by Sarah and stories will be compared. I think it wont go well. Dan will pursue the Jesse line, being convinced,quite rightly, that he knows Lester and Jesse are in cahoots and their target was Sarah. Sarah, will have no choice but to tell him the truth. That Jesse has come inside her unprotected. She will plead innocent by means of the blindfold, but Dan can counter that with “why didn’t you stop when you knew it was him”. This will be the last straw for Dan. He is used to Lester railing his Wife, but Jesse is a no go area. At least Dan respects both Lester and Byron as “men” in a weird kind of way, but the ineffectual, hapless Jesse? This will strike at his manhood in a way that will ignite the blue touch paper. Sarah will fight back, with her usual tropes and excuses. “Lester said you were in the room”! It’s your fantasy that got us here” etc. She may even hit back with the”loser” trope that Lester has been cultivating with her. Drunk/druggie/cant support your Wife and kids financially. At least Lester is successful and has a financial future! You don’t. Ouch! It will get messy. Their relationship will break down for the immediate future. Whether they ever get back together depends on whether Dan can prove his suspicions about Lester to Sarah. Whether he can become a strategic planner or not, and match Lester’s machinations. However, if Lester gets her pregnant then all bets are off. That will be the end.

Royston smith

I assume he will share her or their videos on the dark web of some kind? Destroy her personal life. He has blackmail against her

KB

No, I see Lester wanting that to happen. I don't see that as actually happening.

Mark Albright

I don’t see any scenario where Dan agrees to raise Lester’s child; just too much to ask of him. Sarah getting pregnant by Lester? sure. Sarah wanting to keep the baby? sure. Her and Dan remaining married and raise the child as their own? Don’t see this happening.

Rjh200m

Very good points Royston I look at Lester’s sexual habits and history. We know what turns him on, as I mentioned above. Lester up till this point has included Jesse, Cash, Otis, stranger in the car park, the D&D group in Sarah’s sexual hazing (reluctance). This all while wooing Sarah! I don’t imagine Lester falling back to any normal monogamy type of relationship. Other than to ensure Sarah is impregnated by him and no other competitor for her fertility. What are your thoughts ?

Gee

I hope we will. Sometimes DS leaves these key convos out, but hopefully not this one.

Mark Albright

Oh to be a fly on the wall the next time Dan and Sarah talk…oh damn we will be!

J Lewis

Another factor to consider Royston and Mark, is How long will Dan be willing to put up with raising Lester’s child or children. As a cuckold, Dan may or may not find this situation appealing for any stretch of time. We won’t have long till Chapter 25 hits our screens

Gee

I also want Dan to fight back because him just rolling over provides no real suspense, no confrontation. But I think for Dan to have a chance for winning Sarah back he has to do some strategic thinking, something he has done little to none of thus far. He should start by pretending to roll over for Lester, acknowledging to him that he can give Sarah things he can't. He has to act like he is supportive of Sarah belonging to Lester now and telling her he loves her and just wants her to be happy. Then as Lester and Sarah carpool back to Middleton where Sarah will now be working for Lester, Dan gets busy finding out all he can about Lester, past and present. There's a lot there to find out. But he doesn't present his evidence half-ass and piecemeal, but waits until he has his ducks all in a row and ready to fall. In the meantime he has to play the role of Dan Decuck to the hilt, a role he should be good at. That's enough for now.

Mark Albright

I think he's finally realising that this is not just a pushy 'bull', but someone who is very devious, and is trying to destroy his marriage. It's just amazing that it's taken this long for him to see it.

MV

MV - I hope you are right, I too would like to see Dan get much more aggressive, but this would be based on him realizing the dire threat Lester poses to Sarah, him and their marriage. Hopefully the weekend in jail spurs him to action. As you indicate, he may face resistance from Sarah at least at first.

Rjh200m

I take on board what you've said, Rjh, but I keep being reminded of Don's words before 24 came out, "The next chapter should show some of my cards". Now, for the people who are on Team Lester, they might take that to mean that him getting Dan stuck in jail, and probably having Sarah to himself all weekend, shows his final assault on making her his forever. I take a different view (of course). I take Don's words of 'showing his cards' as a reference to the penny dropping for Dan, of him planning to hide cameras, etc. I take it to mean that it's absolutely not going to all go Lester's way. Maybe in the short-term. Maybe Sarah does, indeed, fall further under Lester's spell and stand up to Dan in Lester's defence, causing a split. But I take Don's words to mean we're going to see a resurgent Dan.

MV

Royston, I agree that chapter 25 will be key. Couple of thoughts - To the best of my recollection, every time Sarah and Lester have sex, Sarah goes back to Dan, or Sarah has to go back to work or she leaves to do something else. Lester always wanted more and while Sarah would capitulate (sex in shower before work, sex the morning after in apartment), he always wanted her to stay. I think for this hotel date, after Lester fucks her all night, she will stay with him for the next day or so (assuming he figures out a way to keep Dan out of the picture). And perhaps even longer. This is key to Lester’s plan. Lester will literally fuck her to exhaustion at the hotel. He wants to completely overwhelm her sexually, both physically and emotionally. To include total obedience to him when it comes to her body and sexual satisfaction. This means Dan is off limits for her in terms of sex. Throughout the story, we have seen Lester create an alternative reality for Sarah - on the first date it was their wedding anniversary, on another date he made Sarah get up from her chair and bend over and kiss him to show people they were together, now he proposes to her in public, gives her a ring and she enthusiastically accepts. He will continue this theme, doing everything to upend her sense of reality. Hammer into her that they are now together and her marriage to Dan is essentially over (emotionally, not legally). All of the above is Lester’s plan and intentions. What could stop this? Not sure but it would have to be a radical response by Sarah or Dan, and this seems unlikely at least based on the current trend.

Rjh200m

Hi Mark. Yes, that is a good question. I don’t think Lester has thought too far past making her his by achieving her complete sexual and psychological submission. He wants to make her pregnant, to seal the deal as it were. Does he really want to marry her? I think he does, but only to make her his in a full stop, end of sentence kind of way. He gives the impression he doesn’t care about societal norms, but I think he does in the sense of wanting to have a beautiful woman on his arm, who is willingly his, not coerced. Who has willingly taken his ring and has feelings for him. He feels it his validation against the rubes and jocks he so hates. Lester is a long term strategic planner. He told us he had a plan early on and I think, in his mind, he is near the end of part 2 of his plan. Part 1 was to fuck her part 2 was to make her his bitch. Note how he used that word in the last chapter for the first time. Whether he has a part 3 in mind I honestly don’t know. Don hasn’t revealed too much of Lester’s thinking beyond the complete corruption of Sarah trope. If I had to speculate I would say he will get her pregnant in order to force a breach between Sarah and Dan so they divorce. It also makes her “his”. He will then offer to marry her and long term I think he will continue her corruption by getting her to do sex videos with him and openly telling her he is going to sell them. Perhaps set up her own channel where he can showcase her.

Royston smith

Dan is toast, he's no longer even a minor player in the story. No one cares if he's in jail, no one cares if Sarah denies him, no one cares if Sarah uses a cage on him, no one cares if Sarah lies to him, no one cares that he's lost. He's out of the story and the story is dead.

Michael Haase

The question then is, if he is successful, what does he intend to do with Sarah after she is his? Some, if not most, on here have speculated he will use her for profit and pleasure and then discard her. I think that the prospect of having a beautiful woman like Sarah at his beck and call will be something he doesn't want to get rid of. While marriage and day-to-day parenting seem like a stretch for him, I think he would be quite content to have Sarah remain married to Dan and for both of them to raise his kids. And Sarah would be his whenever he wanted, however he wanted. I think that would be his ultimate goal. But it's not possible for me to know how a mind like his actually works. So who knows?

Mark Albright

So, my fellow silverites, what do we make of the following passage? “there were still some wrinkles that needed to be ironed out. Sarah was still far more willful than Lester’s other conquests. Which made her fall all the more sweet. She had disobeyed him the night in the apartment with Vernon, sucking his cock even though Lester had told her not to. And then she had gone rogue in Minnesota with Byron, thinking she was the one in control of her body. That wasn’t the case any longer. She needed a reminder of that fact. And tonight was her punishment. In a way, she would only receive pleasure, but Lester had found that pain was never a good motivator. Sure, people would become compliant in the short run, but he was after deeper, lasting change. And that was more easily achieved through pleasure, something Sarah would be longing to experience again rather than simply avoiding pain. She would be a moth to his flame. Lester also wouldn’t have considered this route a few weeks ago. But since Sarah had kept her use of contraceptives secret, it did open up a new avenue for him. He didn’t need to worry about Jesse taking away his ultimate prize, at least not for the time being. Soon, Lester would eliminate Sarah’s pills, and then her precious fertility would be his to claim. Tonight being fucked by someone so beneath her would be her punishment. She had already debased herself with Vernon and Byron. She set herself on this path. The knowledge that she orgasmed with someone like him and took his seed would unlock new discoveries about herself that Lester would exploit. He just hoped that Jesse was up to the task”. So, to me this next ch 25, will be the climactic one. It will set the tone for the rest of this dark arc. The language Lester uses here lays bare his intentions: A”moth to his flame”. “Unlock new discoveries about herself”. It’s punishment for straying away from Lester, (his girl shouldn’t stray) but also pleasure (like she has never experienced before (2 cocks/constant, mind blowing comes). He is closing the circle/administering the final blows to Sarah and Dan’s relationship. After this weekend he intends that she will be truly his.

Royston smith

So, one of my favourite characters from fiction is Emperor Palpatine. It’s interesting , therefore, that in 24 Lester is listening as “the imperial march blared out from the center console of Lester’s SUV”. Is Don telling us something here? Well let’s run a few EP quotes past you all: “Everything That Has Transpired Has Done So According To My Design.' Yes,that’s Lester, alright. “Power! Unlimited Power!' Again, definitely Lester. “Your Feeble Skills Are No Match For The Power Of The Dark Side.' Sounds familiar/Lester to Dan? I rest my case.

Royston smith

Gee, I agree with all of what you are saying apart from the Jesse bit. I cant see Lester sharing her all night. He wants to work on her both sexually and romantically, so having Jesse there will get in his way. Much as I would like a dp scene! As to the dark side of Lester, I see his crusade to possess Sarah as his ultimate conquest. Remember his constant refrain has been: “Sarah was not like other girls. What a piece of work is Sarah Williams”. He wants to show the “Rubes” that life is much more dangerous than they realise, once they step out of their safe zone into barbarian territory. To him, Sarah is a denizen of rubeville gone rogue under his tutelage. It is his ultimate victory, to make a loving wife and mother submit to him. After all the suffering of his adolescent years he finally has a beautiful woman on his arm who hasn’t been drugged or blackmailed. Who willingly submits to him. And what a woman! Every man would give their right arm for her. Just to be in her company would stiffen the organ of any man. I think his business venture with Sarah may ultimately be selling videos of their love making with her knowledge and cutting her in with the profits. I don’t think it would take much persuasion to persuade her to do that a few chapters down the line.

Royston smith

Hi Royston smith and fellow readers! Your thoughts please I believe you all have some correct scenarios that possibly will play out. Keep in mind that Lester is a spider that is immersed in a dark underworld. His soul is tainted by narcissism, sociopathic tendencies, computer hacking, theft, scams, power, corruption, sex, manipulation, black mail, drugging, filming and selling those videos to clients. Ever since he found or suspected that Sarah was on birth control, he has guided Dan and Sarah to this most important cross road in their marriage. If Lester succeeds, Dan will be an unwilling but helpless cuckold. Sarah will fall willingly into sexual perversion and depravity. Lester orchestrated the date night so that Dan would be out of the picture for the whole week end after his arrest. Lester intended to take Sarah for the whole week end from the start. Even Lester has to rest between dumping his massive cum loads in Sarah. This is where Jesse comes in. Round 2 has Lester ready to fuck Sarah till she passes out. I believe this is when Lester and Jesse will spit roast and DP Sarah. While she is in a sexually catatonic state, she will be helpless and give in completely. Lester is going to make the most of this opportunity to addict Sarah to sex with him & strangers because it turns him on! Sarah May resent Lester for it but the intensity of her bodies responses to Lester’s ministrations, will override her rational mind from this point in time, moving forward. Even after finding out about Dan’s where abouts! Lester uses the trappings of wealth to spoil Sarah because he understands that it will appeal to her deepest evolutionary physiology when choosing a mate. -Lester fucks her the best. -Lester creates sexual encounters that explode Sarah’s sexual expectations by fucking her in numerous locations, introduced strangers, made her fuck while talking to her father on the phone etc -Lester can provide a more lavish life style. -Lester plans his dates better. -Lester buys her lingerie, outfits & evening wear that fit her to a tee! -Lester buys her a more expensive, larger and higher quality engagement ring. Etc Lester not only wants to win Sarah from Dan. He wants to own her completely. To do this he will muddy her so badly, that she will be broken in as his submissive sex slave. Engaged - yes! Shared around and turned out like a common whore -yes! Impregnated - yes Filmed and sold to the highest bidders - possibly I have always believed Lester gets off on breaking strong, beautiful, intelligent women down because of his youthful resentment and humiliation he feels suffered from them. He may wish to marry Sarah on some level but his baser side of his persona will win out. He has spent years resenting, targeting, hurting, blackmailing, sexing impregnating, filming, selling & manipulating them. This is what turns Lester on. There is no way Lester has turned a corner all of a sudden. This is my take on chapter 25 moving forward

Gee

I think one of the lessons Sarah has learned from Lester is that lying and deceit are ok when used to achieve something you want. She will see Lester's actions as proof of how much he wants her. And she will decide it's easier just to lie to Dan than hear him whine.

Mark Albright

Say Dan uncovers all of this and has the opportunity to share the information with Sarah in a normal environment, i.e., outside of the sexual haze that Lester envelops her in. How will she react? Will she be revolted by his behavior? Or will she see it as an immense effort by Lester to win her over no matter what it takes? This could really turn her on, as we know she likes the intense focus of men on her and their desire for her. It might turn her on enough to overlook what Lester has done to Dan. It might even turn her on enough to negate her supposed demand for transparency and truth, especially since she has been recently lacking in these attributes with Dan.

Rjh200m

Royston, MA, J Lewis, Gee - all excellent points! Royston - I really like your psychological analysis of Lester, I agree 100% with your reasoning as to why he wants to conquer Sarah.

Rjh200m

2) Dan’s eureka moment. So he has tumbled to the hacks and Lester’s monitoring of his internet usage and his emails. Even the fake job application. But he still hasn’t worked out that Lester is video recording and listening in to all Dan and Sarah’s movements in the flat. But he will. Consider this passage from 24: “Dan had ordered the hidden cameras that would come in soon. He’d put them in the house to be able to see everything that happened. They got them sent to his office, not wanting Lester to see them. He didn’t want Lester to know about them. They would trick anybody; the cameras disguised as outlets looked exactly the same as the regular outlets in the apartment. No one would be able to tell the difference”. Exactly, Dan. You haven’t been able to tell the difference but now you will, as you realise Lester has installed those same cameras you have ordered for your home in the apartment. When Dan realises this he will be even more determined to break Lester’s power over them. But will he be able to convince Sarah?

Royston smith

So, there are still some interesting loose ends from the last chapter. How will they be resolved? 1) Sarah now knows that Dan wasn’t there in the room. She also knows that Jesse knows Lester. When Lester stops fucking her, what will she make of all that?How will Lester explain it? Will he confess he has deceived her? Or, will he spin her another yarn? I think he will admit he knows Jesse, but spin it so it looks like he was competing with Dan. He knows the competition between the two men for her affections turns her on. Will she be angry with him? Possibly. But Lester can be very persuasive and is good at acting the part. I think he will get over that bump without too much trouble.

Royston smith

Gee, I agree with all of what you are saying apart from the Jesse bit. I cant see Lester sharing her all night. He wants to work on her both sexually and romantically, so having Jesse there will get in his way. Much as I would like a dp scene! As to the dark side of Lester, I see his crusade to possess Sarah as his ultimate conquest. Remember his constant refrain has been: “Sarah was not like other girls. What a piece of work is Sarah Williams”. He wants to show the “Rubes” that life is much more dangerous than they realise, once they step out of their safe zone into barbarian territory. To him, Sarah is a denizen of rubeville gone rogue under his tutelage. It is his ultimate victory, to make a loving wife and mother submit to him. After all the suffering of his adolescent years he finally has a beautiful woman on his arm who hasn’t been drugged or blackmailed. Who willingly submits to him. And what a woman! Every man would give their right arm for her. Just to be in her company would stiffen the organ of any man. I think his business venture with Sarah may ultimately be selling videos of their love making with her knowledge and cutting her in with the profits. I don’t think it would take much persuasion to persuade her to do that a few chapters down the line.

Royston smith

I like your general point Mark. I think Lester will definitely wine, dine and flash his money about with Sarah. It is definitely an aphrodisiac for her. She loves expensive, classy clothes and jewellery. I like the tying up scenario, too, but not sure it will happen so soon. You know how Don likes to drip feed different sexual scenarios.

Royston smith

Rj, as usual, good points well made. Point 1: the email. Yes, I had puzzled over that. After much head scratching I think it will be an email from another head of department, to Lester as head of IT. It will be Sarah’s new HoD boss passing on a request from Sarah to homework on a certain day. Lester, as her new boss, will have it in his power to grant her this. He will use it as an excuse to check up on her at her home. Point2: yes, I agree it seems a stretch for Sarah to capitulate emotionally and admit she feels romantically attracted to Lester as the story stands now. But I am sure Lester has thought about that. He will play into her obvious love of her new diamond ring, new dresses, romantic meals and I think he will use his ace, which is to suggest a collaboration of some sort to oust Richard from his position in the hospital. Remember he said he was going to dig up dirt on him? Well I am sure he has. Sarah will jump at the chance to get her own back and win back her position of influence at the hospital. But this will make her not just emotionally but financially dependent on Lester.

Royston smith

I like your scenario, RJ, but agree with J Lewis it's probably gone too far for that. What if the next morning Sarah sees Dan has called, but decides she doesn't want to hear him whining like after the hospital parking lot fun.. So she décides to listen to his message later. Besides, she thinks, she's still on her date with Lester and she wants to see what he has planned for her next. Lester keeps her busy doing some of what we've all suggested, and before she realizes it, the date has extended to the second night. She remembers Lester said he had other plans for the next night, but she's glad he chose her instead.

Mark Albright

Only problem with this scenario is another rinse and repeat reconciliation of Dan and Sarah ie status quo. DS in his writings in 24 acknowledges that the current status quo is finished. So Dan’s and Sarah’s “traditional” relationship is likely over now or at the end of the upcoming chapter. I am anxiously waiting Dan’s and Sarah’s next conversation after Sarah leaves the hotel. FYI based on monthly release dates of TA chapters Chapter 25 draft has 88% probability of being released NLT Saturday 21st with most likely date of the 20th but maybe DS gives everyone a early XMAS gift and pushes out earlier this week so final can go out prior to 25th.

J Lewis

Here is a variation of the Lester wins scenario - let’s say that Sarah survives the onslaught by Lester this weekend and comes to her senses. She is very upset at him for getting Dan thrown in jail, she takes his ring off and places it on the table. She realizes how out of control she has been. Her and Dan realize they need to reengage and focus on them and their kids. Lester being very strategic, does not push the issue. He stays away from Sarah at work and does not text or talk to her. But he knows that Sarah gets hornier and hornier when they don’t have sex. We have seen this in the story many times. Dan and Sarah are doing great. They look forward to a hospital charity event. They show up looking fabulous and are mingling with the crowd. But then they see Lester, who is in his badly fitting, rented tuxedo. Now Lester turns his full attention to Sarah, does all the things he knows turns her on. Including getting close when she is not next to anyone to whisper things in here ear, does she miss him? Has she thought about him? Is Dan giving her what she needs? Of course this drives Sarah into a hyper state of horniness. She starts glancing at Lester’s crotch area, she sees the bulge. Then Lester sets it up so that Dan is talking with some folks about a business opportunity. Lester gets Sarah alone somewhere in the building and fucks her senseless. In and out of her very classy charity event-type dress. Lester is a little rough with her, almost punishing her for wanting to go back to Dan. At the end, Sarah is slumped in a chair totally exhausted, Lester’s cum is all over her. She does her best to look presentable and rejoins the party. She sees Dan and Dan sees her. Both know immediately what happened…..and it occurs to both that she cannot go long without getting fucked by Lester, that their plan to go back to their “traditional” relationship is just not happening. And then Dan notices that Sarah has Lester’s ring on again,….

Rjh200m

I also think Lester should open a joint checking account with Sarah with some large amount of money in it. Knowing she doesn't have to worry about money any more could be a real aphrodesiac for her.

Mark Albright

Sounds like it’s going to be a very busy next few days for Sarah! Will be interesting to see how long it goes before she learns about Dan.

Rjh200m

I believe you all have some correct scenarios that will play out. Keep in mind that Lester is a spider that is immersed in a dark underworld. His soul is tainted by narcissism, sociopathic tendencies, computer hacking, theft, scams, power, corruption, sex, manipulation, black mail, drugging, filming and selling those videos to clients. Ever since he found or suspected that Sarah was on birth control, he has guided Dan and Sarah to this most important cross road in their marriage. If Lester succeeds, Dan will be an unwilling but helpless cuckold. Sarah will fall willingly into sexual perversion and depravity. Lester orchestrated the date night so that Dan would be out of the picture for the whole week end after his arrest. Lester intended to take Sarah for the whole week end from the start. Even Lester has to rest between dumping his massive cum loads in Sarah. This is where Jesse comes in. Round 2 has Lester ready to fuck Sarah till she passes out. I believe this is when Lester and Jesse will spit roast and DP Sarah. While she is in a sexually catatonic state, she will be helpless and give in completely. Lester is going to make the most of this opportunity to addict Sarah to sex with him & strangers because it turns him on! Sarah May resent Lester for it but the intensity of her bodies responses to Lester’s ministrations, will override her rational mind from this point in time, moving forward. Even after finding out about Dan’s where abouts! Lester uses the trappings of wealth to spoil Sarah because he understands that it will appeal to her deepest evolutionary physiology when choosing a mate. -Lester fucks her the best. -Lester creates sexual encounters that explode Sarah’s sexual expectations by fucking her in numerous locations, introduced strangers, made her fuck while talking to her father on the phone etc -Lester can provide a more lavish life style. -Lester plans his dates better. -Lester buys her lingerie, outfits & evening wear that fit her to a tee! -Lester buys her a more expensive, larger and higher quality engagement ring. Etc Lester not only wants to win Sarah from Dan. He wants to own her completely. To do this he will muddy her so badly, that she will be broken in as his submissive sex slave. Engaged - yes! Shared around and turned out like a common whore -yes! Impregnated - yes Filmed and sold to the highest bidders - possibly I have always believed Lester gets off on breaking strong, beautiful, intelligent women down because of his youthful resentment and humiliation he feels suffered from them. He may wish to marry Sarah on some level but his baser side of his persona will win out. He has spent years resenting, targeting, hurting, blackmailing, sexing impregnating, filming, selling & manipulating them. This is what turns Lester on. There is no way Lester has turned a corner all of a sudden. This is my take on chapter 25 moving forward Your thoughts readers?

Gee

In conjunction with what you both conjecture I think Lester will focus most of the rest of the weekend on romancing and spoiling Sarah. He will treat her to a massage at the hotel, maybe a couple's massage, take her shopping, buy her extravagant gifts and jewelry, take her to a fancy restaurant. Of course, at every place they go to he will introduce her as his fiancee. Any lingering resistance to that reference that she had will fade away. Eventually she will start referring to him as her fiancee and showing off the ring to people. There will be numerous public displays of affection to the point where it seems quite natural to her. Then at night he will take her back to the hotel to reinforce his physical control over her, maybe even tying her up to have her thoroughly submit to him. Meanwhile Dan has figured out lots of avenues to pursue to expose Lester once he gets out of jail. The problem being that by the time he gathers enough evidence, it will likely be too late. Sarah will have gotten used to the feeling of belonging to Lester and liking that feeling.

Mark Albright

Royston - great stuff. I can’t argue against Lester being successful based on what has happened to date. But based on your scenarios, Sarah would have to see Lester as a viable partner outside of the bedroom. This is certainly possible, but it won’t be sex-induced, it would be the result of Sarah looking at Lester from a much wider perspective. Again this is reasonable based on what she knows about him and the time they have spent together not fucking. But a question for you. What possible work email could Lester see that would make him think that he has a viable path to switch Sarah’s birth control pills? As for predictions….what could turn the tide for Lester so that Sarah sees him as a viable partner and alternative to Dan? It won’t be the sex (she already has that). It will be the realization that Lester can provide her and the girls with a solid financial foundation and security. No more living day to day. Plus, Sarah likes getting the fancy stuff, clothes, jewelry, etc. She already said to Dan the possibility of her going into business with Lester, I think she will revisit this and seriously consider it, especially since she will be working with Lester at the hospital. And remember how impressed she was with Lester’s $200,000 feet for rescuing the hospital’s IT system, and her thought of how such an amount could change her (their - her and Dan) life.

Rjh200m

So, my fellow members of the Silververse, how will things go down in 25? Shall we game it? This is a long one (as Sarah always says to Lester), so pin back your lug holes and listen carefully. Let’s focus initially on what we know is going to happen. We know Lester is going to fuck Sarah for the rest of the night, as in 23, Lester says:” I’m booking us a hotel room, and you’re going to fuck someone else in front of me. And then I’m going to fuck you all night.” Also, at the end of 24 we have Lester saying:”Time for round two. You’re going to be busy all night.” In the quote from 23 Lester says: “I’m going to fuck you all night”, not we. So, It seems that Jesse’s involvement will be terminated by Lester. However”round 2” could imply Jesse will join in. My take on this is Lester will not want Jesse there all night. He will want to work on Sarah on his own. So, Jesse will be dismissed. I don’t think it will just be all night, however, he will want to work on her the whole weekend whilst Dan lingers in jail. He tells us that he knew Dan was getting too close to figuring out the Jesse angle, so he decides to come out in the open and use his “pawn” Jesse to control the new normal/status quo going forward. That implies to me he will want as much time with Sarah as possible so he can make his play for her. To convince her that Lester is her man and she is his girl. It also implies that he will want to keep Dan in jail as long as possible and prevent Sarah finding out about his predicament. In order to achieve this he will have Ned make a statement that amounts to implicating Dan in “disorderly conduct”, which can carry a maximum jail term of 30 days. However, it would more usually be settled with a fine, probation or a supervision order. If the latter no criminal record would ensue, but if the former two, then it would. This may be complicated by the “dark drink” which I think was spiked with a drug such as ghb or rohypnol. Both are odourless, colourless and tasteless. Dan gets drunk on one beer and becomes uncoordinated, dizzy, dry mouthed and has slurred speech. All symptoms of such drugs, mimicking drunkenness, but acting quicker than alcohol. If the police do a urine or sweat test this may be revealed, although these drugs leave the body pretty quickly. Whatever the outcome Dan may face the loss of his job if he is convicted of a criminal offence. Lester is certain to either want him out of the way in jail or, at the very least, to ruin his financial standing through job loss and a criminal record. He will thus turn the screw as much as he can through Ned,as his proxy, pressing charges. This will give Lester time to work on Sarah. Sarah is on the edge. She pretends to herself she isn’t, but she is. She didn’t want Lester to reveal all that had happened to Dan, cutting him off when he was going to tell him she promised to fuck a stranger. She unconsciously offers herself to Lester as soon as she gets to the apartment:”You know, that sounds nice,” Sarah stretched her hands over her head, still stiff from the car. Her t-shirt rode up and exposed her midsection. Dan caught Lester’s eyes as they roamed over her exposed skin. “It was a long ride, I could use a little wine.” Then she gets lost in the kiss with Lester and is flustered when Dan notices. When she goes into his room “she couldn’t help but feel like Julia Roberts in pretty woman, being showered in gifts and taken care of. It was an odd feeling that she didn’t quite know how to categorize in her mind. The only clear thing to her was that she attributed the feeling towards Lester. Despite his numerous flaws and abrasive attitude, she couldn’t help but feel a certain fondness for him. And there was a physical longing that she couldn’t deny either”.So she is near to the point where she will be making decisions solely with her pussy. This will be Lester’s pitch to Sarah: Only I can satisfy your physical and emotional needs. You are mine now. This was the clear implication of his speech to Sarah about the ring:”That’s a real diamond baby. Nothing but the best for my woman. You should wear it to work.” “I’m not sure about that. People will notice.” “That’s what makes it so hot. People will see it, and you’ll know that I own you.” “That's not what wedding rings symbolize, Lester.” “Sure they do. Maybe not in this PG bullshit era we live in now where everything is Disneyfied. But back in the day, yeah, it was. It meant you’re my property.” She doesn’t answer because she knows it is true. Notice she doesn’t outright say she wont wear it, just people will notice. She stares at him over her wine glass, and deep down she knows it is now what she wants. It just remains for Lester to prove it to her over the weekend. This I think he will do. I am not sure exactly how, but it will happen. Lester can be very persuasive, as we know. He will also poison her against Dan by painting him as a drunken ne’er do well. A loser who can’t provide for her or satisfy her sexual needs. A guy with a secret drug problem he has kept from her. At the end of the weekend he will persuade her to carpool. At the hospital he will make her wear his ring and install her in his office. He will switch her birth control pills for dud ones using the intelligence provided by an email he has received from work:”He stopped on one that made him raise an eyebrow. Then a wicked grin crept onto his face.It looks like an opportunity to get past the William’s locked doors just presented itself. The universe truly was on his side”. It may not happen in 25, but Sarah will be impregnated by Lester soon, once he has neutralised her birth control measures. Here endeth my prediction for what it’s worth. Let’s hear yours.

Royston smith

Exactly.

Mark Albright

The story at times is like one of those Russian nested dolls. You unscrew the top of one doll and inside is another and then another and so forth.

J Lewis

I feel like we've been trying to see inside of the vault for four or five chapters now. In fact, it feels like he opens one vault only to find a smaller safe inside the vault. Enough of the slow burn, Don. Light the damn 🔥.

Mark Albright

For the final corruption of Sarah to take place, there has to be a Sarah - Dan rupture such that she no longer considers his wishes, requests or preferences when it comes to her relationship with Lester. This goes back to what Lester wants…he wants Sarah when he wants her…and he wants Sarah to show him affection whenever she wants without her feeling any guilt or restraints, basically without her worrying at all about Dan or even considering Dan. I don’t think it’s enough for Lester to have Dan withdraw from Sarah. What Lester really wants is for Sarah to withdraw from Dan in favor of Lester and Sarah to freely and openly acknowledge that and fully embrace it. It looks like Lester’s goal is getting closer and closer, but he is not there yet. But there will need to be some surprising developments from Dan and Sarah to reverse the current course.

Rjh200m

My last view on the current progress of TA until 25 is published is 24 (and perhaps 25) was Lester’s final assault in completing Sarah’s corruption. He acknowledged that the current status quo is over. Makes you wonder if Dan is kicked out of the apartment or if Dan even entertains the idea of still living there. Every person has their limits. Hopefully 25 will be one of the all timers in this story. Just pray it isn’t DS version of Al Capone’s vault.

J Lewis

Yes….and as you have been alluding to for a while, next stop after the honeymoon is the maternity ward!

Rjh200m

I guess they can skip straight to the honeymoon.

Mark Albright

One passage that stood out to me that no one else has commented on comes from Sarah's thought process. As she is sucking on Lester's cock, it says "she knew what her man wanted." If she is now thinking of Lester as "her man" he may have already succeeded in making her his. Earlier she had thought of Dan and Lester as "her men." Sounds like Dan may be on the outside looking in now.

Mark Albright

Oh and by the way, I think there is a flaw in Lester’s strategic planning and logic. In Chapter 14, Lester shows up in his tuxedo and fucks Sarah to numerous orgasms in her wedding dress on her bed…. In Chapter 24, he gives her an engagement ring and proposes to her…. Shouldn’t this be in the reverse order!? Or perhaps there is a method to his madness!

Rjh200m

Agree, I was just having a little fun!

Rjh200m

In the next chapter, we will see in what condition Sarah leaves the hotel room and what her emotional state is. Lester is clearly ramping up the intensity of his efforts to control her and neutralize Dan. But here are a few signs that Sarah is crossing the threshold to complete control by Lester (I am excluding radical stuff like Sarah showing up at the jail and saying to Dan that “Daddy says that you need to stay in jail a few more days to learn your lesson”!). We will know that this is happening if - - She is not completely devastated to learn that Dan is in jail and does not immediately insist on going to see him, no matter what Lester says. - She, in any way, tries to claim that Dan winding up in jail was an innocent mistake, was because he got drunk, or that Lester had nothing to do with it. - The next time Sarah sees Dan, she still has Lester’s ring on. - She tells Dan that her enthusiastic response in the restaurant to Lester’s ring and proposal was not to embarrass Lester and that she was actually touched by what he did. - She says to Dan that Jesse is not a bad guy and that she really liked getting fucked by him. - She reverses course and agrees to carpool with Lester between Middleton and Chicago. - She accepts working for Lester at the hospital without any push back or deciding to immediately look for another job.

Rjh200m

Kudos. You called it. I thought Jesse was too obvious, and too centered on Dan, but you got it right. Lester's revenge may continue to unfold, and it may well involve Sarah fucking someone she hates. Now that he's opened her up to strange cocks and completely popped that cherry, I wouldn't be surprised if he uses her, even convinces her to be used, in a blackmail scheme to compromise Thornhill. Or Otis may be getting lucky. As for Dan... we can count on further humiliations.

Darrow

Maybe you're the Silver Whisperer, Royston. If so, cook something good up for the next chapter, please. I think it's time for Sarah and Lester to have a much more open relationship, both in Chicago and Middleton. Dan needs to be plotting his next move home alone in the apartment while Lester and Sarah carry on unabashed at the hospital, Lester's hotel room, even in the house, where Dan catches them with his new cameras.

Mark Albright

And, of course, if she tries to lie to Dan, initially, about Jesse being the one, it's another nail in the coffin, for now, of them still being a team.

MV

Kudos to you Royston! We will expect the same level of accuracy for your Chapter 25 predictions! The “knocking down Dan a few pegs” is interesting. Getting him thrown in jail might have exceeded what you thought Lester would do, but I would bet that Lester recorded the session with Jesse and will send it to Dan to basically rub salt in the wound!

Rjh200m

I can't see him agreeing to conditions, tbh.

MV

Perhaps when Lester and Sarah are finished with their incredible sex hotel room weekend, they visit Dan in jail. She still has Lester’s ring on and while she is fine with bailing Dan out, her and Lester have some conditions that Dan needs to agree to. While talking, Dan notices how Sarah is discretely rubbing Lester’s cock with her new ring shining brightly.

Rjh200m

Evening gentlemen. You know sometimes I surprise myself. I know this is a little self indulgent but Permit me to re-issue what I consider now to be an uncannily accurate prediction of 24. Then I will predict the action in 25 in future posts (although it would be beyond uncanny if I did it again). On 9th November I posted the below, well before the release of alpha 24. My prediction of Jesse being the “Stranger” was spot on. So, ch 24 offers up some intriguing possibilities. In order to game them let us assemble the evidence from previous chapters. In the following I am assuming that Lester will be the prime mover of events. This may be a false assumption, but as it has proved correct throughout most of the series, I think not. So, what do we know? 1. Lester has said he may ask Sarah to agree on a dare while they are out. 2. Lester has said he will make her fuck someone she hates. 3. Lester has said the next time she comes to Chicago , he is going to book a hotel room and have Sarah fuck another man in front of him and then fuck her himself all night 4. He has also said, at the end of 23 that he was going to “knock Dan down a few pegs. It felt fitting to do that next”. He could combine 1,2,3,4 in some way, but 3 and 4 have to be the focus in my opinion, as Lester never forgets and never forgives. He is going to pay Dan back for humiliating him by throwing him out of his house a couple of chapters back. Its for this reason I think Jesse will be Lester’s mystery man who fucks Sarah. I think when Jesse feels the heat over the Lincoln group hack he will run to Lester and apologise and try to get back in his good books so he can get another crack at Sarah and ask for protection from the LG. He may also have to spill the beans on what type of project the LG are working-on and give Lester the lowdown on Byron in return for Lester’s cooperation. I know Lester is pissed at Jesse but he was his go to man in 22 precisely because he thought he was a controllable variable. Now he is in play again he would be the ideal pawn to exploit. Also, Lester knows Dan loathes Jesse, so using him fits with his desire to knock Dan down a peg or two. Not only will he have made Sarah fuck another man without Dan being present it will be Dan’s nemesis Jesse. Touche! It also makes sense viewed from the internal logic of the story and Sarah’s perspective. Jesse has figured throughout the series in important ways. He has driven the plot forward on 2 occasions so far, so why not one more time. Sarah seems intrigued by him too and the size of his cock, and knows it will piss Dan off, so she will want to lean into the bad girl trope and do it. Remember how she taunted Dan in 22 about Jesse having a better job than him. I can imagine Lester ringing Dan and have him listen in to Sarah and Jesse going to it, just to punish Dan or something similar.

Royston smith

*This* is what makes it a 'toxic attraction'! Sarah"s already discovering that humiliating Dan turns her on; things will finally turn the corner in this NTR story when she willingly starts conspiring with Lester and participating in sabotaging and demeaning Dan. It seems like a lot of old school romantics here have forgotten that a major aspect of the NTR genre is that the cuck invariably loses the girl to the antagonist! Sarah's already falling for Lester, now we need to see her start leaning into it, and putting Dan in his place as 2nd-fiddle (at best!)

Arc

I think a combination of all three, as you suggest. However, as I've said elsewhere, I expect things to change going forwards. Now that pennies are dropping for Dan, he must start speaking up, not just being a paralysed hard-on. She may not stop what she's doing, initially, but it will be on the clear understanding that she's defying Dan. When that happens, and it becomes crystal clear to Dan that he could lose her, then the whole situation must surely change.

MV

While she tried to calm things down between Lester and Dan in the apartment, she did give in pretty quickly to Lester’s request for a hello kiss. Dan was clearly agitated by Lester asking and tensed up. But Sarah quickly gave Dan the stare to tell him to back off. And the kiss with Lester seemed excessive. At least Dan thought so. But again, the question is did Sarah do it to excite Dan, or did she do it to please Lester, or did she do it because she genuinely wanted to. Maybe a combination of all three. But it seemed that Dan was taken aback by it.

Rjh200m

I'm not suggesting that Sarah ends up with Jesse, rather just postulating the irony that he becomes the father of her child. Unlike Lester who has malicious intent, Jesse appears to have genuine affection for her... and she seems to know it. In times of extreme duress, women tend to bond with men who show them affection, and it appears that Dan (at least in the short term) will be in no mood for tenderness. I suspect that Dan’s time going forward will be a mission to undermine/destroy Lester. He’s much too wounded now to consider Sarah’s feelings. Lester will likely plant the notion in Sarah’s mind that Dan is jealous and irrational, but in his arrogance undoubtably will underestimate Dan’s abilities much to his detriment. Sarah in the meanwhile will be caught in a tangled web of having to deal with a pissed off hubby and a boyfriend, Lester, who compromises her position in everything (i.e., marriage, work, family and self image). As much as she loves the sex… her life is falling apart. What I’m suggesting is that while Dan and Lester are battling for control, it’s Jesse whom everyone underestimated that ultimately wins the prize of Sarah's heart and womb because he becomes her emotional rock. Lester in the end will fall because evil usually over extends itself and Dan will likely prevail… but at great cost. His wife is now pregnant and in love with a guy, Jesse, everyone underestimated. Sarah and Dan will stay married… but Dan will have to live with Sarah and Jesse being an out of wedlock couple with a child - an unsettling ironic consequence of his unbridled cuckold behavior.

Ken Cara

Definitely. All along, I've wanted Don to keep the characters true to who they've been throughput the story for them to be believable. Yes, there have been some changes in her because of everything that's happened, but she showed in the apartment ("Play nice, Lester") that sensible Sarah is still in there, and she didn't want to hurt Dan. I feel the restaurant scene didn't fit well with that, because the Sarah in the apartment wouldn't want to belittle Dan like that, imo. Others may think it's nothing, but it just doesn't sit well with me, how DS is writing the changes in her. It's just my opinion, but it's what I've been worried about for a while, because when the real confrontations start, I feel she'll act out of character for the 'real' Sarah.

MV

I agree that the timing is a little bumpy and a lot happened in Chapter 24. But to be fair to DS, we saw indications of it in previous chapters, Sarah enjoying the dates with Lester (talking during meals), how unpredictable Lester is, how he surprises her with the intimacy and massage and cooking dinner, how aggressive he was with her former boss., as well as her basically turning to Lester every time she felt stressed with work, her and Dan’s financial condition, and the working and taking care of the kids during the week. And there was numerous times when Sarah said to herself that she was becoming drawn to Lester despite his rough edges. So, it’s not unreasonable to see that Sarah’s feelings for Lester are growing. But not having more of Sarah’s internal thoughts is frustrating because we are constantly struggling with what you mention - how much of it is sex-induced and how much of it is her true feelings when she is not horny. I still find the restaurant scene in chapter 24 hard to believe - Sarah enthusiastically saying yes to Lester’s marriage proposal (as portrayed from Dan’s perspective). I’m not saying it was genuine, but even that fact that she “played the part” was somewhat strange.

Rjh200m

Sarah has gradually seen her authority and responsibilities stripped from her by the current CEO and new HR Head. Sarah Ihas lost her office and is relegated to a cubicle. She most definitely needs her job as she knows she needs to keep her daughters lives as normal as possible. Regardless of her and Dan’s adult personal and professional lives falling off a cliff. Sarah has even hinted at going into business with Lester with a new side hustle, that potentially could be a great earner. Dan completely shut that down. I think that Lester has already created a side plan for Sarah. One that may shock her! One that she may have no choice , other than to participate in! I believe Lester will introduce Sarah to this side hustle, due to a desperate financial need. Lester would use this persuasion before blackmail. This is why I believe Lester is introducing so many male partners into his and Sarah’s sex dates. Lester is turned on by degrading Sarah. The muddier she gets, the less chance she will be able to recover! Lester will televise Sarah’s debauchery to his clients, make a shit load of money, Sarah will love the sexually intense stimulus and the money that comes from it. Then Lester can impregnate Sarah as a finale to his complete domination of Sarah and Dan.

Gee

Agreed. I'm still not happy with the speed of Sarah's apparent transformation in 24, though, but we'll have to see how she acts in the confrontations in 25 (unless Lester keeps Sarah and himself out of Dan's reach, so there aren't any). In 23, although she said all the 'I love you' stuff, it was always in the throws of sex, as usual. We still had zero proof that she felt real affection for him. Suddenly, in 24, she's catching real feelings for him. Life doesn't happen like that, and this is exactly what I was concerned about Don doing. If we are seriously to believe that she is really falling for Lester, Don should have started to write her thoughts on that 2 or 3 chapters ago, and started to build them up.

MV

I just don’t see Sarah accepting working for Lester, especially if she is relegated to an “assistant” role. This would strip Sarah of any professional pride she has and would demean her in the workplace in front of colleagues that she has known for a long time. But this view may be based on the Sarah we have seen in earlier chapters who wanted to be successful in the workplace and really wanted the CEO job and was very upset when she was not even considered for it. But the Sarah of chapter 24 - who accepts a ring and proposal from Lester in public and agrees to getting blindfold and fucked throughout the night - might very well accept being Lester’s sex toy at work. Plus she can’t afford to be unemployed!

Rjh200m

I just want to see more of Sarah’s personal life to be brought down with her.

KB

Agreeing with Gee.

Richardcat

I totally agree. Although she may like having sex with Jesse he is not capable of dominating her like Lester does. That domination which goes with his submissive desires and his big dick will keep her under Lester’s control unless something happens to Lester.

Richardcat

Absolutely.

MV

She'll get excited bringing him coke and cheetos every morning, wearing sexy outfits for him, calling him Boss or Mr. Marshall.

Mark Albright

MV, That makes a lot of sense, but I think that if Sarah wants to have any freedom, Lester needs to be out of the picture.

Rjh200m

Hey readers Remember when Lester tried to enter Dan and Sarah’s home and could not gain access, due to Dan changing the locks. Remember Lester received a work email and that at first annoyed him. Lester hates reading these trivial emails but this email made him smile with delight. Perhaps Sarah is now Lester’s administrative assistant, courtesy of the new CEO!!! Sarah will be certainly working under Lester’s direction moving forward. Her time will be spent on her knees sucking Lester’s huge cock or over his desk being ridden and sired. I think Lester will have Sarah worshipping him even more. As Sarah’s responsibilities and authority are stripped away from her, she will begin to feel even smaller and worthless than she already does. Sarah will seek out Lester’s sexing of her to cope with the stress!

Gee

But......every married woman would know that the initial lust at the start of a relationship dies off. I'm sure she's intelligent enough to know that Jesse's Urges wouldn't stay the same forever. I'm sure Dan was a thrusting stud for her at the start? I'd expect her to prefer to have Dan as Dad at home, but to have freedom to date Jesse and others.

MV

I think a Sarah and Jesse relationship is possible. Jesse is wealthy, he is young, and he is attractive and in shape. All things Sarah likes. Plus she loves his dick, another key attribute., and she knows that he really likes her and that she can manipulate him. But this assumes that Sarah’s marriage to Dan fails (this is certainly possible) and that Sarah finally sees the evil side of Lester. It also assumes that Lester stops pursuing Sarah, which is very unlikely. Lester will not give up Sarah unless he is forced to do so.

Rjh200m

That's the kind of outside-the-box thinking this story could use. Lester could get Jesse a job at the hospital to annoy Dan. Then Dan finds out stuff to take Lester out. Dan moves back to Middleton, thinking all is well now. Except Sarah has to work late quite often with her new co-worker, Jesse. And she likes to call Dan "Jesse" when they role play.

Mark Albright

On another another level of irony, it would be fitting for Dan to grow enough "stones" and smarts to outwit Lester and bring about his eventual downfall only to lose his wife to a lesser man, Jesse, whom he has utter distain. Truly the stuff of the great paperback love story novels that used to grace the grocery store checkout isles.

Ken Cara

Anyone consider the possibility of Sarah carrying Jesse's baby instead of Lester's? It would make for delicious irony if that were to happen. After all of Lester's devious planning and machinations to restore Sarah's fertility, only to have a lesser man (in both Lester and Dan's eyes) claim Lester's ultimate prize would be quite upsetting for both men. It would, however, be poetic justice for Jesse to be the one to impregnate her because as shown in chapter 24 there appears to be a real romantic attraction between the two. Jesse appears to be in love with Sarah and should be the father of her child.

Ken Cara

Not to sure about this chapter , it seemed to lack something , But. Dan finally twigging about hacking of company’s and his pc , what else will twig, that was good. But also some of the story is getting a-bit repetitive, maybe it’s time to wrap it up me thinks

Thomas matchett

Remember how easily Lizzie was manipulated by Lester before. He lured her back with the promise of videos, then when she woke up and he was fucking her she made no attempt to stop him. And then went along with telling Sarah what Lester wanted her to because he said there might be more videos. So I could see Lester using her again to make Sarah jealous. A really hot scene in the hotel, where Lizzie and Sarah compete for Lester's cock. Sarah will agree to say and do anything Lester tells her to. Including having his baby. There are many unknowns to how this story ends, but it seems apparent that Sarah will be carrying Lester's baby at some point, and not accidentally.

Mark Albright

Lester would tell Sarah that Lizzie wants him back and he is considering it. That they have agreed to have a baby and be exclusive. Sarah does not want to lose Lester so she may agree to get pregnant.

Rjh200m

Agreed. I don't care at all about Jesse, but Lizzie coming back could add a very interesting competitive dynamic and it doesn't hurt that Lizzie's chapter was one of the hottest in the story.

Chris

Would love to see Lizzie involved soon to push Sarah into have Lester’s baby. Could be arranged easily by Lester. The temptation of being rid of Lester forever and the deletion of the remaining videos would outweigh any self doubts or guilty conscience she may have in assisting Lester this one last time.

Charlie_Chuckles

Chapter 24 - whilst Jessie is fucking her, Lester gets her to admit it. There was also a time where she alluded to it when discussing things with Dan. This was only a few chapters ago,

Mr Shuttlesworth

I think Lester is going to start selectively telling her some of the things he's done. It might not necessarily be the whole truth, but his version of it.

Mark Albright

Also. Anyone know when we found out Sarah was still on birth control?

Roleplay Literate

Im begging. Please give Dan some slack. Let him stand up to Lester and take back some dignity and agency. Take Lester down a peg because that man is horrible and wants to literally get Sarah and Dan's kids kidnapped to get rid of them! We need more balance! (But of course this is your story so do what you want. Just venting my frustrations as a reader.)

Roleplay Literate

It’s very interesting to read earlier chapters to see Sarah’s thoughts “way back when” and how they basically set the stage for her behavior in later chapters. Here are two examples - First is when Lester and Sarah were in his SUV in Chapter 12 with the stranger watching; the stranger says “Girl, why are you wasting your time on a fat man like that? Why don't you hop your ass on out and join me in my car? I'll show you a real good time. We can go right now" Sarah grabbed a condom package and, reached up and undid the clasp on her skirt, letting it fall to her ankles. She turned and ripped open the condom package and rolled the condom down Lester's large cock.. “Tempting...but Lester just gets me off so well. I'm not going to give that up. He may be big but he knows exactly how to please a woman." If she did not want to give up Lester’s cock back then, she certainly will not want to give it up now! The second is a quote from Sarah back in Chapter 9 that does not augur well for Dan right now….the quote is Sarah responding to Dan after he tells her how he got Jesse fired in retaliation for Jesse tricking Sarah into going into Lester’s room to get fucked…. 'Dan, I...," Sarah hesitated, trying to find her thoughts. "Is it wrong that I'm kind of turned on by how diabolical you are? Can you imagine how she will feel when she learns of all of Lester’s machinations including getting Dan thrown in jail. She may orgasm right on the spot after hearing about it!

Rjh200m

🤣🤣😉 We’ll all be gone from getting to many shots away

Gee

I'm afraid we'll all be gone before this story is done, RC.

Mark Albright

Richardcat - hold on a few more months, the end is near!

Rjh200m

And hopefully the end is near. I’m 82 and may not live until the end of this story. 😊

Richardcat

Hi RJH, At this time she doesn’t know. If Lester has her phone, he will delete those messages from Dan. I believe Dan cry for help will go unheard, until Lester has broken Sarah down completely. (2 days of non stop illicit and intense sex for Sarah. Nothing that the young married mother will ever be able to walk back) Sarah will find out when Lester allows. She will feel guilty and yes she will go and bail him out, with Lester’s permission of course. As to how the couple reconcile their marriage, family, friends and professional lives after all that has and will continue to happen, time will tell! I believe Sarah will be putty in Lester’s hands. She will continue to fall to her knees with just a domineering look from Lester. She will obey Lester because she can’t get enough

Gee

How about this? Sarah insists on going to see Dan in jail, so Lester goes with her and offers to put up bail. He insists he had nothing to do with Dan ending up in jail and she believes him. The police tell them Dan can't be released until Monday. The let Lester and Sarah see Dan for a few minutes. During the entire visit, Lester and Sarah are holding hands, as Sarah is now conditioned to not even think about it. Dan notices she is still wearing the engagement ring, but doesn't say anything about it. Sarah makes Dan thank Lester for bailing him out. Sarah and Lester go back to the hotel, leaving Dan with the image of them kissing as they walk away.

Mark Albright

Gee - I agree with you in terms of Sarah’s thinking and what turns her on, but how does she reconcile this with her husband sitting in jail? If she lets Lester rationalize this away, then she is done, Lester has won.

Rjh200m

Well a lot of people are thinking it! And someone might as well come out and say what garbage the story has turned into. It's literally the same thing every month with a little bone throne in here and there adding just enough of the same only in a different angle

Luster

He will tell her he told Dan the wrong room number because he didn't know how Dan would have reacted watching Jesse fuck her. "Besides, I'm tired of that little cuck always wanting to hang around, watching us."

Mark Albright

I believe Sarah is turned on by Dan And Lester competing for her. Sarah May be pissed at Lester for lying and manipulating her and Dan but Lester will remind her that he owns her, that she belongs to him. This will make Sarah’s arousal peak and she will drip between her thighs for him. Sarah not knowing what Lester will do with her next, to cement his hold on her! This is what gives Lester all the control. In the end, Lester’s lies won’t matter. Sarah will lay back and spread her thighs wide open for him.

Gee

Sarah has been comfortable with Lester out in public for awhile now. Remember how at first she was kind of embarrassed to be seen with him, wondering what other people thought. Now she enjoys other people seeing her with him. To the point where she doesn't hesitate to accept the ring and intimately kiss him in a room full of people. It turns her on that other people might think she's too good for him. Of course, at this point, what doesn't turn her on?

Mark Albright

I was hoping you were, so you could tell me how to be one.

Mark Albright

DS might have non-paying members but trust me I ain’t one of ‘em.

J Lewis

Keep up the good work, DL. I was wondering who the non-paying members DS has. Now I know one of them. Might not want to be so obvious, though.

Mark Albright

This has been Lester’s method all along, constantly putting him and Sarah into a situation where they are a couple in public. It goes back to the first date where he told the waiter that it was their anniversary, and the DnD night where she posed as his girlfriend, etc. In all instances, Sarah goes along with it. It’s still very interesting to see that Sarah actually enthusiastically accepted Lester’s ring and proposal in the hotel restaurant. Why would she do this? All of these public displays orchestrated by Lester are designed to condition Sarah to accept him and to be comfortable with him out of the bedroom. A logical next step (from Lester’s perspective!) is for them to act as engaged with the ring on her and, of course, to be an exclusive coupe. Which means that Sarah does not have sex with Dan. Somewhat hard to believe that this could happen, but when you look back at what Sarah has agreed to, anything is possible. Dan has to do something drastic to counter the path that Lester and Sarah are on.

Rjh200m

Aside from whatever else Lester does to Sarah in bed, including light bondage, he will parade her around the hotel in skimpy outfits. Holding hands, tender kisses, introducing her as his fiancee, having her show off the ring. Conditioning her to accept her new role as belonging to him. She pushed back at first when he told her the ring meant she was his property, then didn't argue when he said it again. He will keep saying it until she agrees, then make her say it. Every time they go back to their room, he becomes more and more dominant with her.

Mark Albright

I believe that this chapter was the beginning of Lester’s final assault in fracturing Sarah’s and Dan’s marriage. Ch25 will tell the reader if he is successful. If he fails he will be play his “ace in the hole” which of course will have the reader anxiously waiting on Ch26. DS is a genius.

J Lewis

If not mistaken DS said Arc3 started with Ch22

J Lewis

DS is masterful in keeping the reader curious about the next chapter. The proof there is probably in his checking account. I’m really interested in the Jesse angle. The only ones who know that Jessie took that selfie in front of room 326 are Jesse, Lester and Dan. Sarah isn’t aware of the selfie. So when Sarah and Dan have their next conversation does Dan hold back on his Jesse info to see if Sarah offers it up or does he confront her about it and what will be her explanation? Secondly how does Sarah respond to Lester knowing he told her two whoppers…1) the room number which she relayed to Dan and 2) Lester telling her Dan was in the room. I hope Ch25 doesn’t disappoint.

J Lewis

Don said that the story is divided into three arcs. Could this be the end of the second arc? Dan has finally started to realize what he’s up against. If he doesn’t take dramatic action now he realizes that he will lose Sarah now.

Todd

Your analysis of this chapter is spot on. One thing you didn’t mention was her immediate acquiescence to not wearing her wedding rings, cutting Dan’s objection off immediately. Then came the proposal from Lester and her reaction to the ring shock and surprise at first, but then her thoughts went to how gorgeous a ring it was and was it really real. I think she’ll take it to a jeweler to find out, when she discovers the real value of the ring, she will be pulled farther into Lester’s orbit, seeing financial security, and that is the third leg of the tripod. But the other thing about it that was telling was when Lester said he wanted her to wear it at work and her only real argument was that people will see and notice something was different about the ring she was wearing, or the rings she wasn’t wearing anymore. Then her thoughts went to well could I wear it, is it real? There is absolutely no consideration of Dan in her thought processes anymore. I think at some point Lester is going to arrange a wedding that Sarah will go along with, whether Dan is there or not it will not matter, then on the honeymoon he will turn her into his personal money making cash cow.

FU

A later scene has Dan in the apartment alone wondering what Lester and Sarah are up to in Middleton. She seems very distant with him on the phone, when she bothers to answer. She is working for Lester now and seems quite happy about it, saying he's a "great boss." When he asks her what happened at the hotel, she is dismissive of him, simply saying Lester didn't make her do anything she didn't want to do. Dan has found out some of Lester's underhanded stuff, but Sarah cuts him off when he tries to talk about it. When he asks her if she and Lester are getting together outside of work, she laughs and says "what do you think?" He wants to ask her is she still wearing the engagement ring, but he's afraid he knows the answer. He managed to get the cameras installed at their house in secret and this is the first day he will be able to see what is happening there. He turns on his monitor and he sees Lester there alone in his house sitting on the sofa with his feet propped up on the table, wearing only what appear to be new bikini briefs. He wonders if he's broken in and is thinking of calling the police. Then he sees Sarah come in. She kisses Lester very familiarly and then immediately drops to her knees and starts sucking on Lester's cock like someone starving finally getting a meal. His dick starts to stiffen as he watches.

Mark Albright

All - here is a possible opening scene of the next chapter. Lester continues to have sex with Sarah and condition her in the hotel room over the weekend while Dan is stuck in jail. He continually emphasizes to her that they are now engaged and a formal couple and that her relationship with Dan no longer matters. He gives her prescription medication to keep her sedated and compliant, and to prevent her from thinking coherently and reaching out to Dan. He takes her in the ass. He gets her a tattoo and piercings, marking her as his. Then on Monday morning, he makes her clean up and het dressed in a very expensive outfit he bought for her. They kiss goodbye, and then he slaps her on the ass, telling her that she needs to go bail hubby out of jail. He tells her he will see her in Middleton. Sarah walks out of the hotel in a sex and drug induced daze. Dan doesn’t believe the state she is in when she gets to the detention center. She does not seem too concerned about what happened to Dan or how it happened. She just wants to get Dan out of jail and then go home. Dan is in shock and says to her “Sarah, I don’t even recognize the person you are right now”. She puts a finger on his lips…”Just get in the car Dan and be quiet.” It’s at this point that Dan realizes that Sarah still has Lester’s ring on.

Rjh200m

Maybe he blindfolds her when they leave and he takes her for an encounter with Cash. Although he would need to be limited due to STD risk.

Richardcat

Maybe he blindfolds her when she leaves. She seemed to like it. Maybe a trip to the sauna for a massage, wearing only a robe.

Mark Albright

True

Fuzzy Shark

Except that she texted him room #326, and she won't be wearing the blindfold when she leaves the room (on the 6th floor) eventually

Chris K

What are you even talking about? Its a porn story. Not Shakespear. People are having a good time. If you're not then just dont subscribe lol

tim

I hope you're right and I'm wrong. It just seems to me he takes us in one direction, only to pull back. Lester dominates Sarah, she bends to his will, insults Dan, and then she and Dan have one of their talks, and everything's hunky-dory. But you make some excellent points about how Sarah's feelings toward Lester intensified in the last chapter. And you left out the part about her thinking of Lester as "my man." Anyway, two things should force the issue in the next chapter - how does Sarah react to wearing the engagement ring and how does she react to Dan being in jail.

Mark Albright

I am going to go out on a limb and say that the story will end after a few more chapters. Why do I say this? First….because Don Silver has invested so much time in essentially portraying Lester’s plan from day 1 to break Sarah, capture Sarah - whatever terms you want to use - and to separate her from Dan. This can be summarized in Lester’s words from Chapter 5 - “I am going to take her from you, dumbass. You won't recognize Sarah by the time I'm done with her.” Based on Chapter 24, he is very close to his goal. He has already won in the bedroom and now he is closing the deal by working on Sarah completely accepting him outside of the bedroom, exemplified by the engagement ring, wedding proposal scene, and the ongoing sex and conditioning of Sarah in the room while Dan languishes in jail. A few examples from Chapter 24 of Sarah’s rapid acceptance of Lester and how close she has gotten to him - - “The size of the diamond was at least a carat larger than the one Dan had given her. She desperately wished her blindfold was off so she could look at it again. The clarity was immaculate when she gazed at it at the dinner table. Had Lester really brought her a real diamond ring….” - “Lester and her husband had been jabbing at each other in the apartment, competing over her, and now it looked like the other guy won. Just how taboo of an idea that was….” - “She was just lucky Lester hadn’t followed her to the bathroom because she wasn’t sure she could say no to him anymore.” - “In the hallway….His hand on her lower back guided her out of the elevator and onto the carpeted floor of the hallway. Her buzzed brain was worried about walking into something, but Lester expertly guided her, holding her close to him.” - “Being blindfolded and paraded around in such a sexual way was a thrilling new experience. It was like a new kink had been unlocked or at least upgraded. Who knew what else Lester would help her discover about herself?” - “In the hotel room…..She appreciated his closeness and felt protected by him. She knew he wouldn’t let her walk into something.” - Also in the hotel room…”Good girl,” Lester said, his voice backing away from her. He was somewhere in front of her. She desperately wanted him back. Closer to her.” Second….I believe that Don Silver realizes that his longer term success is based on writing compelling stories, not turning out endless chapters to appeal to subsets of readers and generate subscription fees. I think he sees that many readers are anxiously awaiting an outcome. I’m not saying how the story will end or who wins or loses, Lester, Dan or Sarah or some combination. I do think, however that we are getting to the end of the saga based on what has happened, especially the events in this chapter. The status quo doesn’t work anymore, there has to be some resolution either way. Of course, I could be completely wrong!

Rjh200m

Yeah well this reader is one more month and then I'm out! I've had enough of this crap story just dragging it out like you say for the money. The story could have been an all-time great so many options but he's just dragging it all through the mud repeating all the same crap every month. Hell I'm rooting for Otis, and Lester's group of Dungeon & Dragons hoodlums but look how long we had to wait for Jesse to actually f*** Sarah. Was a great story but I'm not devoting year three to this thing. Enough is enough Don! These last two chapters simply we're a serious and utter let down to I'm guessing, 95% of us out here. Give us a good Christmas present that's all I can say for all of us who have put two years of Our Lives into this

Luster

Interesting don't think Lester will have any problems explaining the room issue. He will say Dan was so drunk he got lost and made a scene on the wrong floor and got arrested. Remember , Sara had on her blindfold in the elevator and did not see what floor they got off on. As far as Dan not being present, again he got drunk and lost. Not sure how he explains Jesse's involvement, other than hoping she is so corrupted now she won't care as long as she keeps getting her mind blowing sex. Poor Dan has a rough road ahead of him to change the status quo!

Fuzzy Shark

How many more chapters? I'm reminded of Dornbusch's Law: The crisis takes a much longer time coming than you think, and then it happens much faster than you would have thought."

Sigma

Imagine what Sarah and Dan could have accomplished together if they actually worked together instead of getting involved with all this Lester crap! She's a competent professional woman. Look how good Dan is at his job, how he's managed to snag some great contracts for his own business. Imagine if she helped him with marketing, or admin tasks, or billings/collections or even client visits?! In no time he could move back home, have enough income to help support the family and pay all the bills. Sarah could help out even when at work. She could use weekends with Dan traveling to meet clients/prospects rather than stay in the apartment or having dates with Lester. At one time they were a great team. Now its hard to see this team ever working together again. Too much has happened.

Sigma

I think Dan is fourth not third since Byron also satisfied her more than Dan

Chris Casey

Also, for that amount of money, he should be able to hire an editor.

Mark Albright

So instead of wrapping things up toward his own conclusion, he is throwing things in there to appeal to everybody. This does not lead to creative, artistic writing, but to writing by committee. And the end result will not be good.

Mark Albright

So I'll attempt to summarize the wishes of the readers, although I'll undoubtedly leave someone out. Some want Lester to win, even though he's a diabolical sociopath. Some want Dan to win, even though he's a wishy-washy, wimpy wuss. Some want Sarah to win, even though she wants to have her cock and eat it, too. Others want everyone to lose, with Sarah fucking every man mentioned in the story and all the readers (Yes!) Others don't really know what they want, they're just along for the ride. The problem is the author is motivated to string everybody along because he has over 900 members paying at least $15 a month (over $14,000 a month). So inste

Mark Albright

Darrow - you have it right. Lester let Jesse cum inside her because he is conditioning Sarah to have the cum of multiple men in her at the same time. Next step could be a gang bang where Lester watches. Lester wants to impregnate Sarah himself because that would be the ultimate step of him “breaking her” and having her fully submit to him. It would also be the ultimate blow to Dan. Lester will do this very strategically for maximum impact!

Rjh200m

I believe that his thinking process was more along the lines of: "Well, if she's on the pill, then I guess it's fine if Jesse comes in her. It doesn't threaten my ultimate plan for her." "It will corrupt her further and lower her inhibitions that much further if she has other men come in her. So I will allow Jesse to come in her, and get her to allow and enjoy it. Possibly, I will have other men come in her, to the point where she is even more morally depraved and corrupted." "When she is ready, I will have her go off birth control, and be solo to me."

Darrow

Exactly!

Gee

Could be but I think he has a plan for her and when that is complete he won’t care what happens to her.

Richardcat

Watching from the bench the most unlikely starting quarterback in the history of football - Lester!

Mark Albright

Hi Richardcat In chapter 24, Remember Lester’s thoughts about being the first to claim Sarah’s fertility and then as a passing thought, he hinted that Jesse could perhaps be next after him to have her fertility, “Lester also wouldn’t have considered this route a few weeks ago. But since Sarah had kept her use of contraceptives secret, it did open up a new avenue for him. He didn’t need to worry about Jesse taking away his ultimate prize, at least not for the time being. Soon, Lester would eliminate Sarah’s pills, and then her precious fertility would be his to claim.” “At least not for the time being” Lester thoughts

Gee

I agree that Lester is a psychopath incapable of love or most any human emotion. But he is obsessed with Sarah, so he might want long term ownership.

Darrow

Actually, you're completely correct. Dan was trading his wife's company for a break on rent. That's what the arrangement for 'dates' were, and everyone accepted it was going to be sex. Sure, Lester lured and manipulated them both into it. But they went along. Particularly, Dan went along. He was the one getting the benefit of the arrangement - the discount or holiday on rent. Sarah wasn't getting any advantage for herself, except whatever Lester gave her in the form or clothes or lingerie or restaurant experience. That Sarah went along with it, even enjoyed it, didn't change what Dan was doing. They may have stumbled into it, and it was manipulated and occluded and fuzzy, but it was what it was. Anyone could stand back and see it, and call it out. And he certainly traded his wife to Byron. Byron had no doubts about the arrangement. Neither did Jesse. And both Dan and Sarah verbally went along, even if they had their own scheme. Everyone knew what it was, with no doubts. Dan willingly made Sarah a prostitute. But you know what? I think if he'd thought of it in those terms, it would have excited him. Much as he loves Sarah, he enjoyed degrading her. Their sex was all about her serving him, and his fantasy was to have her used by men who were inferior to her, and inferior to him.

Darrow

Absolutely! Benched every game, anxious & nervous for a start

Gee

She will put Dan’s ring back on and move Lester’s much bigger and more beautiful ring to her other hand. When people ask about it, she will say that her boyfriend gave it to her!

Rjh200m

There are some co-workers still at the hospital that will ask her what happened to Dan! What does she say?

Rjh200m

By the time Lester gets done, Dan will be like a football player who never gets a chance to play (with Sarah), relegated to the bench while everyone else gets their chance.

Rjh200m

Excellent post. Agree with much of it.

MV

I do as well I want Lester to break Sarah down to a lowest common denominator and actually make promises to Lester that she will keep and he will enforce. I’m just not sure Lester can get the job done and truly make Sarah a slut that will fuck anybody on command.

FU

Let’s not forget Lester start his chats with future prospect accomplices, by showing a photo of stunning Sarah. Lester gives his accomplices instructions, so that he maintains his control and goals set for Sarah. Lester we can assume vets his accomplices cock size. To ensure they are not a threat to the pleasure his size can give Sarah But! Bigger than Dan, to weaken Sarah’s resolve to other men due to the pleasure they can bring her. Lester takes great joy in getting Dan to accept his new cuck status, because Dan realises he can’t bring Sarah the same amount of pleasure. Lester is deliberate in his planning with the couple, so that he individually conditions each to submit to his will and perform his bidding. Lester is fluid. As the couple plan their counter move against Lester’s latest sexual conquest, he is able to blow past their counter move due to his surveillance and planning . This is what makes this Story a hot read. The what if’s & what will happen.

Gee

Well, once more Dan silver I have to say great writing. I wonder if Dan and Sarah realize that Dan is actually been her pimp all this time and she is a working prostitute and a hospital administrator in her other life. Damn there’s pimped her out for rent and she has willingly done it like some kind of young naïve girl that just stepped off a bus in New York City. I am hoping in the next chapter that list it finally take Sarah‘s ass with Jesse‘s cock in her pussy and she gets so addicted to the feeling of two cocks that she’s never gonna go back to Dan and her ordinary life, and she will willingly let Lester sell her to the highest bidder, maybe even selling Sarah‘s virgin asshole to someone that will pay tens of thousands of dollars for the privilege of being the first to fuck her in the ass. Then again, maybe Lester fucks her all night long without letting her come until she swears that she’ll never fuck anyone else again but him, and then he finally lets her come and it breaks her. Then it’s too late for Dan no matter what he’s figured out he’d have a hell of a time proving it, and Jesse is too stupid to know how to do anything to help Dan. I know Lester is kind of antihero, but Dan is a piece of shit. He turned his wife out and let another man fuck her for his own sick perversion and then for rent, he deserves everything he gets.

FU

Forgot to mention Jesse. He is infatuated with Sarah. Lester will degrade her to such an extent in front of Jesse that he may no longer interested except for a fuck.

Richardcat

Several thoughts on this series. First we can get rid of any notion that Sarah and Lester will become a loving couple. Lester is incapable of love. In addition he despises Sarah and Dan. They represent the studs and cool people from high school who made his school life miserable and who look down on him. In one of the earlier chapters he asked Sarah if she ever thought she’d be fucking him when she first saw him and she said no she didn’t think she’d be fucking a loser. He became very angry at that. Here he is talking about dragging her into the mud, covering her with it and she’d never get clean again. He plans to cleave her completely from Dan and destroy both although he will use her as long as he can. Dan appears to be figuring things out. The question is whether he will try to confront Lester impulsively as he has been prone to do or get more information and get the authorities involved. If Lester suspects Dan is getting close to figuring things out I would guess that Lester will resort to blackmail of the couple. He has plenty of video material on them. If Lester impregnates Sarah he will be done with her except maybe fuck her fora bit. He will go after another victim if he has not been taken down.

Richardcat

As was Verne and Byron.

Darrow

Sarah like the curve of his dick, hits her G spot. He's better that Dan.

Michael Haase

Please get rid of Jesse. It's beyond time to get that particular pawn off the board.

Jon Smith

I think she will wear his ring at work since he's already told her to. Lester will tell the people at the hospital they're engaged, and she'll go along with it. She becomes more and more comfortable with Lester being her fiancee to the point where she starts showing the ring off. The fantasy blends into reality.

Mark Albright

I love Sarah with her new sex partners, May I suggest her next step into depravity: a) Lester arranges for the sleazy CEO to fuck her, b) Sarah does the janitor often and does not tell Lester about the affair c) Sarah finds the cameras, erupts in disbelief and tosses Dan out of the house. Lester moves in and arranges a couple gang bangs, d) Dan is forced to get Sarah's father involved to restore some order in the marriage and finally, e) Byrons company determines Lester was involved in the hack of secret documents and eliminate him

Tom

Posted this in the general comments section as well...I am on the side of this chapter left me wanting a bit more for our sexy Sarah. Fucking Jesse was not debasing enough for her punishment from Lester IMO. Although someone else cumming in her was good, I just wish it was someone even less appealing. She has been fucking bareback disgusting Lester forever. She let homeless dirty Cash cum all over her perky tanned tits. She ate a D&D nerds old semen. She got felt up, rimmed and sucked disgusting Vernon. She rimmed Lester, got her perfect featured face glazed by an old overweight janitor. Plus so many other degrading acts. So fucking young, eager, in shape and relatively well hung Jesse was not a step in the right direction. Wish it was even Ned. Hopefully the next chapter swings back to the darker side of her degradation, hopefully this was a holiday place holder. I still would love to see more of the disgusting characters above come back for more use of her body, or add new ones if needed. I especially would like to see her groped and used willingly by the D&D crew. So many hot scenarios could be used to humiliate her and give her the degrading feelings she so desires.

whiterhino

Lester will want her to wear his ring at work…or she could wear both! This would generate a lot of questions from family, friends and co-workers….

Rjh200m

I think she'll try to appease Ðan by wearing his ring when she's around him and please Lester by wearing his ring the rest of the time. This works well unto Dan sees on his hidden cameras at home Sarah put the wedding ring away and the engagement ring on. Uh-oh.

Mark Albright

Lots of differing opinions on Chapter 24, but I think Lester giving Sarah the engagement ring was a great twist to the story. It simplifies all the drama about what Sarah will do, what she won’t do, what is she thinking, etc. into one simple decision/act. Once she leaves the hotel and returns to everyday life including going back to Middleton, does she: - leave Lester’s engagement ring on her left ring finger? - or does she take it off? We know what Lester will want her to do. And we know what Dan will want her to do.

Rjh200m

i really expected the person to be her boss and i was a bit hesitant about jesse but, i came to really enjoy it and i wish or hope that we get to see what the rest of the night looks like

Ana

Disappointing. felt short. Hopefully Jesse is out the way for good

James

So there were two potential advancements in this chapter. One, the way she readily discarded her wedding ring and joyfully accepted the engagement ring. At first she referred to the ring from Dan as the real ring. The second time she referred to it as her old ring. And Lester is pushing her to wear it to work. That has some potential. The second thing is at one point Sarah thinks to herself she knows what "her man" likes referring to Lester. This is an advancement in her thinking, but it may take seven chapters to acknowledge it out loud.

Mark Albright

Dan has no best friends because every time he met someone they realized that they would rather be best friends with Sarah…..only joking!

Rjh200m

Then what are you doing here?

Rjh200m

Once you change your mindset and realize Don is mocking fans of this, it becomes immensely entertaining. Frankly, I don't care if he believes this is a serious effort. It's so hilarious, I have to give it props

Elfy

That anyone would actually analyze this story is hilarious. It's total wank garbage. Don is writing an epic to make money off of dumb asses and people who are laughing at all the people who are so engaged in this stupidity. This story is over 2 years old. No publisher ever would green light this nonsense. It's laughably bad.

Elfy

Another dose of reality. We never hear about Dan having a best friend. At this time of need why not reach out to him to bail you out if Sarah doesn’t answer. Hell my best friend knows a lot of embarrassing things about me but if I need advice or helping hand he is there for me. No questions ask. Dan might not like the advice he may receive but a best friend definitely has your best interests at heart not Sarah. It does tell you a lot about the couple who doesn’t have one single friend. A lot of trouble could have been avoided.

Charlie_Chuckles

As to this last chapter, it could have been improved greatly with one brief addition. After Dan and Sarah have their phone conversation to start the chapter, Sarah ends the phone call and rolls over into Lester's arms. "Did I do good, Daddy?" "Yeah, your husband's such a dumbass. He doesn't even suspect I'm laying in his bed with his naked wife all over me." "Don't be mean. He just trusts me is all." "Well, he's a fool then to think you and I would be in the same city and not fucking every day." "That's true. Are you complaining?" Followed by a quick, for them, sex scene with lots of kissing and "I love yous."

Mark Albright

I had kind of glazed over the bulk of her reaction to Jesses love/obsession talk, but even with that factored in, I still think her stronger addiction to Lester and his magical wonder cock should at least have led to her telling him something along the lines of, "Your dick is pretty good, but nothing like Daddy Lester, and you're only getting me because he said so. If it were up to me, you wouldn't even be here, and I'd be taking him and only him all night long. Him and his huge daddy loads, that is."

Allan Harrison

Thanks for the kind comments, Royston. And yes, he does need an editor.

Mark Albright

Final thought for now - Sarah's career at the hospital is definitely nose diving. She's lost her office, been moved to cubicles, has lost a lot of her responsibilities and authorities. It's definitely a major demotion. I suspect Thornhill is deliberately trying to push her out. She was a rival for his position. First thing you do when you take power is get rid of the competition. But from the disclosures, Thornhill's approach seems to be widespread - massive replacements, cost cutting, half assing. I think it's not just IT that will have massive problems. The whole hospital is heading for a crash.

Darrow

Darrow - all very thoughtful and perceptive points. Even outside of the sex, she wants more attention from Dan. Remember how she liked that Lester cooked dinner for her (or so she thought), and she made the comparison to Dan always focusing on his work? How she liked Lester’s massage because he was focused on her. And throughout the story she has argued with Dan about the sacrifices her and the children are making to support Dan, and she feels that he has to support her more, like when she was mad at him for not asking about her big meeting that day which resulted in her not getting promoted. Their relationship is complicated and there probably is no right or wrong…..but, they certainly need to figure things out in terms of moving forward (or not). Too much has now happened for them to maintain the status quo.

Rjh200m

Random Thought about the Hospital: As the new IT Manager there, Lester is 1000% uninterested in doing the job at all, he's literally blowing off duties. But things actually need to get done, there's work to do. He's not doing it. That's bad news long term. Also, Sarah remarks that he's letting people go from Hospital IT, including very senior people who were there longer than she was - including people she considered friends, or very friendly with. Long term people are the institutional and corporate memory. That counts. Thornhill and his cronies are thrilled. Tons of cost savings and new 'efficiency' in the IT department. Except that Lester's not working, and he's firing people who would be otherwise doing work. So work is not getting done. The Hospital's IT department is moving slowly to a catastrophic collapse and crisis. It'll start slow, bills not getting paid on time, then not getting paid at all, payroll problems, invoices not going out, medical records going astray or getting mixed up, not entering the system. Given the calls that Lester is ignoring, we're already seeing that. Eventually, the whole thing goes boom. Normally, Thornhill would just blame an underling, like his IT Manager. But Lester doesn't care, he'll walk away.

Darrow

Honestly, I'd love that. But I'd be happy enough to see Sarah back in Middleton at the hospital, in a new position under Otis.

Darrow

Afterthought - none of this alters the fact that Lester himself is a career criminal and a genuinely dangerous, destructive and toxic psychopath.

Darrow

"Something about the way he was fucking her like she meant everything in the world to him. Like a starving man sitting down in front of a Thanksgiving dinner or someone suffering from dehydration getting a glass of water. Like Sarah was nourishing Jesse’s very soul. Like she was the only thing in the world that could quench his thirst." Sarah experiencing Jesse fucking her. That sense of worship and adulation. Jesse's breathless at the sight of her. Sarah seems to respond really really strongly to this, and it made me think of her sexual relationship with Dan. The relationship with Dan is about her pleasing him, teasing him, catering to his fantasies and getting him off. And what does Dan get off on? Degrading her. His fantasy is to see her with inferiors - that's why Lester was such a hit for Dan. Lester was such a loser. Dan's sex is about him being catered to, without him having to do anything or give anything, and to have Sarah serving, including being degraded. Deep down, underneath the loving relationship, there's something one sided, and maybe ugly about Dan's sexuality. Not just cucking, but a need to degrade, to impose inferiority and subservience. He wants Sarah to be beneath him, wallowing in the gutter for him. Their relationship is not about her being desired. She's an object. It's about her serving his desire. I'm flashing back to the scene where they go out parking, they get an observer, Sarah performs but doesn't come - the whole thing is about pleasing Dan. The reason it comes back to me now, is that Sarah really seems to get off on Jesse's worship. And he flat out worships her. He's the most beautiful woman he's ever seen, he's in heaven. It's all about her, and she's the one drinking it in. Looking back, this is a running theme with Sarah. She really enjoyed dirty dancing, because a stranger was crazily into her. She enjoyed being watched by strangers as she plays with Lester or Dan, it's affirmation and adulation. Even Otis, she gets off on his response. Part of Lester's power over her is just his crazy lust for her, his desire for her, demonstrated over and over. Even Byron's desire for her excites her. Byron as creepy as he is makes no secret, crude remarks - she's not offended, she enjoys his desire. She loves teasing the Pizza Guy. Some of her remarks and conversation allude to this - "Im hot! I'm great!" When Lester sleeps over she brags about how she could get any man. When Lester fucks her, it's all about her. When Jesse fucks her, it's all about her. Even Byron, although for Byron it's also about fucking over Dan. The strangers who watch, it's about her. Sarah loves being wanted, she loves being desired, she loves being looked at. It's about her, an affirmation of her. She drinks that in, and she responds to it. It's a major motivation for her. We dwell on the sex and the orgasms, Sarah herself dwells on the sex. But I think there's an emotional side where she's getting major charging up and loving it. Whereas with Dan, she's an object, serving his fantasies, and being beneath him. The best sex that Dan has with Sarah is when Dan kicks Lester out of the house and just goes and takes her. For Dan, the excitement is in conquering and claiming her. But for Sarah, with Dan that night, she gets something else - it's finally about her. It's about Dan wanting her. She enjoys getting taken and claimed, there's definitely a sub streak. But for once, it's not about catering to Dan, or his fantasies or excitement, it's about her. In this sense, maybe Dan is the toxic one. Throughout the series, he's always been about himself. It's Dan's world, and everyone is there to entertain him, or to be an adversary, an obstacle, a prize... even his wife. Maybe that's what made it so easy - the fact that Dan wanted to degrade his wife and have her wallow, so he threw her at Lester. But Lester really wanted her, and Sarah likes being wanted. And maybe this is the key - Sarah's ego is starved by her marriage with Dan, and as long as Lester and others feed that ego, she'll just keep on the path she's on.

Darrow

What’s interesting about the Jesse character is that he is probably the right partner for Sarah if the marriage with Dan fails and she sees the doom she is facing with Lester. Jesse is young, good looking, physically appealing to her, he seems to genuinely like/love Sarah, his desire for her turns Sarah on….and he is rich (from his dad/family) which gives Sarah and the girls a solid financial foundation. Oh…..and Sarah knows that she can handle and manipulate him!

Rjh200m

Arc - good one.

Darrow

Not a good sign for Dan!

Rjh200m

Arc - that's profoundly insightful. I've known drug addicts and alcoholics, and yes, you're exactly right. Sarah in addiction mode.

Darrow

Michael Haase - Jesus Christ. Do Chastity devices like that exist? Cripes.

Darrow

It wouldn't be a good idea for Dan to take his personal problems to Sentinel. They don't need bullshit, they hire Dan to eliminate bullshit.

Darrow

Totally agree with you. This chapter has moved many things forward while also providing some pretty hot scenes. I'm one who happened to really enjoy the Jesse scene, especially the wording of Sarah's thoughts. However, while if it was me and I got dropped in jail like that then I'd also come out swinging. I'd be pissed as hell and strategic as hell. My great concern for the next chapter is, however, than Dan starts pinching his nose again. Its now time for Dan to start his way back and not in a small way. Yeah, cameras in the house, etc. But how about some 'strategery' on his part? How about talking with Sentinel Systems about his situation and his suspicions. Wouldn't it be better to go to them first before they find out he got dropped in jail? What about ransacking (neatly) his apartment while Lester's in Chicago to see what he can find? Anyone who's been in jail, or even handcuffed and 'detained' by a cop (unfairly or not) gets sudden clarity. I'm pretty disappointed Dan got a hard-on while in jail and thinking about Sarah getting nailed, well, maybe it was the alcohol. But dude, grow a pair. Its time.

Sigma

Halfway through the hotel night, Lester makes a phone call and 3 minutes later Otis shows up to fuck her while Lester and Jesse take a break.

Chescojoe

Arc - if Lester has two full days with Sarah in the hotel without her leaving his control, he is going to do everything to complete her corruption, physically and mentally, including turning her against Dan as you describe. His goal will be to have Sarah walk out of the hotel as his, both in the bedroom and openly. With Dan totally removed as an obstacle. The trend suggests that this will happen….at least initially, but it will be interesting to see how Dan responds. I know that there are a lot of negative reactions to this chapter….but it will be interesting to see what happens….Lester’s engagement proposal to Sarah including the ring was very audacious and I think he will push this as hard as he can to instill in Sarah’s mind that she is now his, including no sex with Dan. Lester has basically used the hotel weekend to make a fundamental leap in his control of Sarah and removal of Dan….from this perspective, I think the story has moved forward.

Rjh200m

If Dan's not charged, he can simply be held for up to 24hrs, at which point he must either be officially charged, or released. If he's charged with an actual crime he may have to stand in front of a judge and request bail (or ROR), but if it's only a misdemeanor, he'll likely only have to post a prescribed, fixed-bond, and get a court date, then be released. It's unlikely there's enough to charge him with an actual criminal offense (assuming we have all the info, maybe he punched a cop or something while being arrested?) so he'll probably be out on Monday. There are no laws against having illegal drugs *in your bloodstream*, so even if they suspect he's high on something illicit, they won't test for it because that's not an offense and they won't care. They would only test for such drugs if he credibly claimed to have been assaulted/poisoned, and opened an investigation into *that*...

Arc

I do think this chapter was way too brief. Loved the content, just not the length.

Chescojoe

She definitely wants Lester in the driving seat so she tells Dan what will pacify him.

Chescojoe

Sigma. Good point. I'll do shorter but mroe posts.

Darrow

Correct on all points. BUT third place is not bad. Dan is still ahead of Verne... maybe. She did things eagerly for Verne that she would never do for Dan. So, maybe fourth? But Dan is definitely ahead of Byron. Sarah found him creepy. But was still willing and wet, and easily dominated. Fifth? Otis? She found him creepy too, but took a facial. But I think Sarah would definitely place Dan ahead of Otis... for now. And Thornhill. And Cash. And other strangers watching. .... Dan's ahead of all of them them. Basically, Sarah prioritizes sex with Dan over random strangers watching and coming on her...

Darrow

But not where it counts... 😉😋😄

Arc

Or self deceiving.

Darrow

I think a normal person would click on that idea immediately. Dan? Fifty fifty if he ever gets there.

Darrow

As I proposed elsewhere, Dan's going to be held till he can see a Judge, potentially as late as Monday. Hopefully this leaves Lester the weekend to freely fuck Sarah senseless, and become so emotionally compromised, while secretly coming to revel in the fantasy of being his fiancee, that, when she finally does get Dan's message(s), she's more annoyed about having to stop being fucked silly to go fetch her loser, absentee husband out of jail, and so, when that confrontation finally occurs, she actually comes out in full throated support of her Chicago Boyfriend, while leaning into belittling and demeaning Dan out of annoyance, and, in so-doing, genuinely discovering just how much the combination of siding with Lester (whose cum is literally running down her legs at that moment) while verbally berating Dan, actually turns her on. If it turned out that the free drinks Dan was being served had been spiked with something akin to Rohypnol, the beers he drank in combination could easily result in an induced-short-term amnesia, actually depriving him of clear memories of the night, and even of the revelatory connections that he'd arrived-at while languishing in the tank... Of course, it's just about as likely that, as with the missing bathroom scene between 23 and 24, Don time-jumps us several-days/weeks ahead in 25 and completely glosses ALL of this over...

Arc

Dan is sitting in jail while Sarah is fucking Lester. And she will be all night and probably into the next day before Lester even lets her know about Dan (Lester won’t let her access her cell). Once Dan gets out, it’s gotta be a huge part of the story in terms of the Dan-Sarah relationship dynamics. There has to be a reckoning between the two, no matter what results. There just cannot be another discussion of “don’t know how things got out of control”. It’s time for Sarah to say what she thinks/wants and it’s time for Dan to take a stance with both Sarah and Lester. If he continues his wimpy back and forth conflicted feelings, it will be very disappointing. He has to stop encouraging Sarah and crying about it later. If I’m Dan, I’m coming out of jail swinging, at both Lester (literally) and Sarah, figuratively, but certainly not buying her “sexy stare”, “I can handle Lester”, or “I’m doing this for both of us” lame excuses and rationalizations.

Rjh200m

There a LOT of these. It kinda surprised me to learn that actual editors review these things; given how commonplace such errors are (and continue to be) in each chapter...

Arc

Dan's thought: "They would trick anybody; the cameras disguised as outlets looked exactly the same as the regular outlets in the apartment. No one would be able to tell the difference." I bet something will click in his mind to check the "regular outlets in the apartment" and realize what Lester's been doing. Also, since Lester is going to be in Chicago so much, could Dan either disable the cameras in the apartment and also explore Lester's computer?

Sigma

TBH, while I don't expect it, It'd still be freaking hilarious if the 'dark' drinks had been spiked with something akin to Rohypnol, and, when mixed with the beers Dan himself bought, both exacerbated his inebriated condition AND inflicted induced-amnesia such that he couldn't actually remember any of the important details/revelations when he awakens the next day... 🤔😄

Arc

Darrow said, "Sarah as a cock hungry slut. Nothing wrong with that." Except that it then becomes just another trite, cliché, old, and boring, re-expression of content for which there are literally *thousands* of examples available for free on Literotica. Nobody here is paying for boring, unoriginal, commonplace content, and housewife-turns-slut is so entirely overdone and blasé at this juncture as to be pornographically indistinguishable from pablum.

Arc

Understood. I have considered doing the same. The story is getting lost and too drug out.

Volkfly

A reality that draws ever nearer when wasted, half-effort entries like ch24 take my money but give me practically nothing in exchange.

Arc

@Rjh200m - addicts have genuinely-astonishing capacities to rationalize/justify the irrational/unjustifiable when doing so facilitates them servicing their addiction...

Arc

Yeah, let's agree to disagree on this one. The interplay between Dan, Sarah and Lester and the gradual diminishing of Dan's role to be the key aspects of the overall story. His role in the story and what happens to him is a key aspect of the 'toxic' nature of the plotline.

Bob James

There's also not subscribing...at all...

Volkfly

Couldn't agree more. This chapter made me feel like we the readers were all just like Dan, being manipulated and strung along by Lester, milking us along for a few more dollars. Tell you what, Mr. Silver, I'll write you a check for $500 right now just to get somewhere with this story. Have Dan figure it out, have Sarah get pregnant, have Lester get run over by a train. Do some fucking thing.

Mark Albright

Wow! -- if *this* half-effort 'chapter' is a "marked improvement" over the alpha, I have to thank-you for wholly alleviating any contemplations I may have ever entertained about upgrading my subscription! 🤔🤦‍♀️😝

Arc

Dan needs to take the backseat, supporting-character role that is where he belongs in this story. As I said elsewhere, even if he once *was* the main character, he's definitely NOT the protagonist of this tale now (Sarah is), while Lester has been the antagonist all along. Focussing on secondary characters as overwhelmingly hard as this chapter did only detracts from the overall tenor of the story, barely (as others have concurred) moved the plot, gave us almost zero information about what's going on in Sarah's head, and basically wasted our time and money this month. DAN doesn't need a win: he's a secondary character in a story that *definitely* isn't about him any longer, if it ever was. Secondary characters don't have needs, they solely exist to support and flesh-out the main characters' arc.

Arc

*IF* it does, then congratulations on being happy being made to pay double for one chapter's worth of content being split across two months... Half the work, double the pay...

Arc

Arc

Another lie that Sarah is telling Dan - earlier in the chapter she said to Dan not to worry, she can control Lester. I can’t believe that she is this clueless, especially given what she tells Lester (“I can’t say no to you”). Each time that Dan raises the issue of whether things are going too far and that Lester is pushing too hard, Sarah tells Dan not to worry, she can handle him. Seems to me that she is purposely misleading Dan. We can no longer think that she is just being naive.

Rjh200m

Remember when Sarah said that Lester never lies to her when she was upset that Dan didn’t tell her about letting Ned (?) use the peephole instead of him? How important honesty is for Sarah! So this should impact her, but we will see, she seems to be all over the place right now. Perhaps Lester will rationalize it to her and she will accept it.

Rjh200m

Darrow, always insightful comments. May I make a small suggestion please? You include so much in one post that its difficult to reply to anything specifically, which makes the reply conversation challenging.

Sigma

I hope the next chapter includes the rest of the night fucking and dirty talk.

Chescojoe

Literally nothing was added or changed. Huge let down. Yet again

KB

I was struck by Sarah’s thoughts on how she felt about Jesse being so enamored of her, how “genuine” he was in his feelings for her (not to mention she loved his dick). We all know that Sarah gets super turned on by men desiring her. First it was Dan, then certainly Lester and now Jesse (others as well). It turns her on so much and she will probably want to see Jesse again. Lester may allow this only because it’s another way for him to condition Sarah (he gives her approval to do so and directs her), but also because he knows it will further hurt and humiliate Dan. It’s also a big test of Sarah’s corruption. After she gets over her very brief period of guilt (say by the middle of the next day!), will she continue to see Jesse even though Dan is likely to be very upset?

Rjh200m

Top grade analysis RJH. Agree with all of that.

Royston smith

Gee - I agree! Lester planned this out and he will try to keep Dan in jail for the weekend so he can continue to indoctrinate Sarah, with the theme being that her marriage to Dan is over, that she now belongs to Lester and she needs to start acting this way. He certainly was upset when Sarah referenced the competition between Lester and Dan for her before they left the apartment. Lester does not want any competition, he wants Sarah to realize and openly acknowledge that she belongs to Lester . This includes her telling Dan. In fact, they are now engaged! So they have to be exclusive, meaning no sex with Dan. I don’t know how exactly he will get Sarah to agree, but the way this chapter went, it’s plausible she does. But as I think we can all see, perhaps he doesn’t have to do anything as the sex between Sarah and Dan is fast disappearing. Lester certainly keeps her busy and I actually think Lester may keep Jesse around. He saw that Sarah was turned on by him and having both Lester and Jesse fucking her, along with other “one offs”, she will literally have no time or desire to have sex with Dan.

Rjh200m

I think that Sarah did quite a lot to humiliate Dan and manipulate him in this chapter - - She lied about the car scene, not telling Dan that she fucked Lester on the hood of the car and the involvement of Otis. And in the apartment she quickly stopped Lester from talking about it, by acknowledging that Lester mentioned the hotel date night,….this was to prevent Dan from knowing all that happened in and on their car. - She didn’t pursue Lester at work so that she could be in a state of hyper horniness for the hotel weekend. Presumably she didn’t have sex with Dan either. Lester also stayed away from Sarah at work because he wanted her horny for the hotel night. - Sarah discarded Dan for the weekend before she even entered the apartment, setting the stage for her to spend time with Lester. Dan was an obstacle that she wanted to neutralize (sound familiar?) - Sarah openly kissed Lester by using her “sexy stare” to stop Dan from saying or doing anything. Then she rubbed Dan’s nose in it by such an intimate kiss with Lester. Sarah did nothing even to try to talk Lester out of the kiss. - She jumped at the chance to wear the sexy dress, pretending to Dan that it was important to her that he approved/liked it. She was wearing it no matter what. It was for Lester and other men, not Dan. And it was amazing that Dan thought the dress looked so hot on her when the reality was that there was no way he was even going to touch Sarah that night. - Sarah openly thought that the competition between Dan and Lester turned her on and she basically got so horny thinking about Lester winning and Dan losing. She likes humiliating Dan because it turns her on, it’s not about turning Dan on anymore. - She readily agreed to take her rings off at Lester’s request….and then she accepted the ring from Lester and went through with the proposal scene in the restaurant. All she could say to Dan was that she didn’t know about it. And by the way, she loves the ring and said how much better it was that the ring Dan gave her. Will she even take it off? - She did not really care when she learned that Dan was not in the room, she obviously was more interested in getting fucked and she again professed to Lester in front of Jesse that she basically now belonged to him. She now seems to have moved Dan to third in the pecking order of sexual satisfaction based on her reaction to Jesse - how much she likes his dick and how genuine he seemed in his desire for Sarah. In contrast to previous chapters, it seems that Sarah in this chapter was co-conspirator with Lester to make the hotel night happen. She very obviously manipulated Dan every step of the way. In this chapter her level of humiliation of Dan increased and it seemed that she saw Dan as just a prop to support her hot night with Lester. With the ring, the proposal scene and what followed in the hotel room, Lester is clearly saying to Sarah that she now belongs to him, and it’s more tangible and out in the open now. Sarah did nothing to counter this.

Rjh200m

Lester wants Dan in jail for the night so he can further fuck and indoctrinate Sarah. Lester told her a few weeks ago he would fuck her all night. Plus he won’t let her check her cell phone until probably after they leave the hotel the next morning.

Rjh200m

MA - I think Lester stayed away from her at work so that she was super horny for him on the hotel weekend. Sarah was dying for it even before she entered the apartment.

Rjh200m

Less intensity than previous one... although enjoyed the suffering of Dan from Lester's hand. Lester is a sociopath and so is Sarah ,she just pretend to love Dan and it will be proven when she will take Lester's side when dan will realise about Lester's plan and he will reveal them to Sarah.Lester is the real alpha in Sarah's eyes and she is now more intimate with him than dan not only physically but emotionally. Overall I expected more from this chapter....I thought Sarah will more actively humiliate dan and participate in his suffering more openly but that didn't happen. she should realise that higher the Dan's suffering,harder the Lester's dick and higher the sexual pleasure. Now Sarah should stop pretending about Dan's feeling.

Curiouser69

Dan has pretty much exited the story. He's around only to demonstrate Lester's conniving to sleep with another man's wife. Sarah barely teases him anymore, there is little talk of denying Dan sex, no interest in controlling Dan's masturbation issues while Sarah is away or with Lester. Sarah has lost interest in Dan so, he no longer creates the cuckhold premise the story relied on. I wonder, maybe Sarah needs Lester's financial help to bail Dan out of jail. Lester makes Sarah promise to deny Dan sex until his court hearing in order to bail him out. Of course, Sarah reluctantly agrees, and Lester becomes her exclusive lover. Just a thought, it brings Dan back into the story, Maybe Lester demands Dan wear a chastity device to prove his abstinence. A high tech version, controlled via an app, monitors location, erection attempts and lock schedule. Guest can be added as view only, an erection attempt log and chat option are available. Sarah can see how often Dan gets aroused, when and what time. Lester is the App Admin and is the only one who can release the lock, or maybe it's Sarah in control, could be fun.

Michael Haase

I don't have knowledge of the American criminal justice system. So it's hard to say. I suspect that Ned won't anchor a prosecution. I think Dan has a chance to persuade Sarah, but it's an uphill battle.

Darrow

I agree. I think it needs to impact trust. It's just too flagrant a lie.

Darrow

I found Jesse a disappointment. I guess because it was too obvious and too easy. Like a consolation prize or a participation trophy.

Darrow

Dan definitely needs a win.

Darrow

Chapter was alright overall, but it's beginning to feel repetitive. We need to swe some more progression. Sarah needs to start to fall harder and faster.

Dbop

So True.

Bones

This was a bald-faced lie from Lester. I wonder if this will at least in some minor/moderate way impact Sarah's trust of Lester. Perhaps as little as she won't believe that story again (that Dan is there) or a much as giving her some resistance to his charms.

Bones

Mark, you can’t go! Your comments (apart from this one) make me laugh too much. Your analysis(including this comment) are also always informed. We also need you to edit the chapters as the current editor is letting far too many mistakes past the cutting room floor. I counted at least 10 spelling mistakes that hadn’t been corrected from the CCC version. I agree with you about the hospital situation and, in fact, suggested an extra scene should be added at the beginning covering off Sarah’s new job role at the alpha stage, or, as you call it the CCC stage. However, I disagree that Lester has made a mistake. I think he will find a way to have Dan kept in jail for a decent period. I am wondering about the “dark drink”. Could this be an illegal substance that a blood test would reveal? Would it entail a lengthy jail term? I believe you are an American so perhaps will know more about their legal system than I do. The only objection I can think of to my theory is it would involve hotel staff collusion.

Royston smith

So I enjoyed this chapter and there are some key changes that IMO add the emotional aspects of the story. There now seems a slightly more clearer pathway to the impregnatation of Sarah. Potentially a few things would be good in the next few chapters. 1. Perhaps this threesome scene is revisited and Sarah is tricked into thinking Dan is actually Jesse and then through Lesters manipulation allows Lester to cum in her but not Dan. 2. Sarah willingly and without prompting admits to loving Lester. 3. Sarah works the family situation to spend more time with Lester. 4. Dan installs the cameras but DOES NOT tell Sarah and observes her pillow talk without prompting. I do think given Dan has ended up in jail he needs a win of some description just to balance things.

Bob James

Excellent analysis Gee, with just one flaw. When she comes down to earth will she not wonder how come Jesse was there? If Dan gets out of jail sooner than later, will his theories not seem more plausible once she knows Lester has lied about knowing Jesse?

Royston smith

Definitely not my favorite chapter, but they aren't all going to be golden. I probably would've liked it at least a little more if either someone less obvious of a choice than Jesse had fucked Sarah, or if she had pushed him off, particularly after saying he loved her. She could even punctuate it by saying she only loves Lester, perhaps still thinking Dan could hear her, or with plans to tell him later to get him riled up and horny.

Allan Harrison

So, as I am not overly familiar with the American system of justice (perry Mason not withstanding) can one of you fill me in with the likely outcome of Dan’s arrest(for such I think it was). Could charges be pressed by Ned for instance for “threatening behaviour” which might lead to a jail term? Only Lester’s plan to frame Dan would be seen to fail if Dan is allowed out within the next few days in my opinion. If he gets the chance to talk to Sarah and explain his theory about Lester, she surely will see that Lester has been economical with the truth. His achilles heel is Jesse. Even she is going to wonder how they know each other. And her mind must surely drift back to the dance club..

Royston smith

Agreed Darrow. I have been waiting for the 2 cock scenario for months now and love it that it finally arrived. I think Don has done a great job in plotting the trajectory of her desires. Lester saw what her weaknesses were and has exploited them par excellence. Long may it continue. Naysayers be damned.

Royston smith

I like that Dan is finally figuring things out, although he's done it in the most half assed way possible. Dan is figuring out that Lester has been surveilling him, because he finally got the idea to surveil Lester. This all comes about because he starts thinking of spying on his wife and Lester, literally gloating over having cameras in his own bedroom and so forth... resulting in the light bulb moment: 'Wait, if I'm going to do it to him... maybe he's already doing it to me?' And then comes the train of thought, the realization, the various obvious clues that Dan never picked up on, the realization of how easily he would have been compromised, including all of his passwords. He still hasn't guessed half of it, including that Lester has cameras all over. And he's moved clumsily enough with his confrontations with Jesse and Lester, that Lester's figured out that it's only a matter of time before he puts the pieces together. Dan's dumb enough that he may immediately change all his passwords, which would surely tip Lester off. And allow Lester to play innocent, while digging his game deeper. And while Dan may have ordered surveillance cameras, did he order them from the Apartment? Did he order them from his credit card? Lester may be able to access those records. Even if he was half-smart about it, there's still a chance Lester would spot the cameras. He uses them himself, he knows where to look and what to look for. Even assuming he doesn't, would he care all that much? He doesn't care about his own reputation. So if Dan has him fucking on video, so what? On the other hand, Sarah will care massively that Dan is spying on her. That kind of thing is 'break the marriage' material. Doesn't matter that she might have been breaking the rules having Lester in her bed without Dan's say so. Dan setting up cameras without letting her know is marital suicide, there's no coming back from that. Hell, even letting her know would be dicey and difficult to navigate. *** Some random observations - Sarah didn't tell Dan everything that went on in the parking lot. She's keeping secrets from him. Trust is breaking down. Equally, there's friction with Dan, he accuses her of doing the Parking Lot without permission. That's Dan's resentment surfacing. But it's also unfair from Sarah's perspective - he had his chance. Once it started, it started, no calling time out in the middle. *** Extremely easy for Jesse and Lester to come up with a plausible explanation. The story: Lester didn't know who Jesse was, but Jesse knew who Lester was. Jesse did pretend to be Dan and send Sarah to fuck Lester after all. BUT more importantly, Jesse knows exactly who Sarah is, he lusted after her while working with Dan, looked at the dirty pictures she sent Dan, dry humped her while sleeping, etc. So when he saw her on the Dance floor at the club, he decided to take his chance, and it was going so well until Dan made a scene. That's when Lester saw Jesse for the first time. Later, they ran across each other, Lester noticed Jesse and asked what that was all about. Jesse figured out who Lester was, and they talked. That was part of how Jesse knew so much about Dan's cuckolding (although he already knew the beginning of it). Jesse called up Lester to brag about having Sarah to himself in Minneapolis. It's exactly the sort of shit that Dan believes Jesse would do. Lester admits to being jealous, and believing Sarah was fucking Jesse. See? Completely airtight. Plausible, covers all of the facts known to Dan and Sarah. Lester won't crack. Jesse might possibly crack, with enough pressure. But Lester's probably got him coached, and he's got a lot of leverage, good and bad, including Sarah's pussy. Even if Dan doesn't believe, he's got nothing to work with. *** The best thing Dan's got, is the awareness of two hacks - Sarah's hospital and Jesse's company. But he'll have trouble making anything of it. Lester's apparently unconnected to both hacks. In one he rides to the rescue... and it's actually Sarah that pulls him in. I'm not sure that Dan realizes it. But if he puts it to Sarah, she'll say, she knows, that the only reason Lester is involved in any fashion is her. He's innocent. On the surface, he's not involved in Jesse's hack at all. The only connection is that Lester knew Jesse, and he knew Dan worked for Jesse presumably (Jesse would have bragged), and he knew about Minneapolis. That might be good enough for Dan, but to Sarah it will be crazy talk. Of course, it's definitely paranoid. But if the Lincoln Group security guys look up Dan and he tells them... well, they're occupationally paranoid. And if they lean on Jesse, he might crack. But for the rest of it, Dan will come across crazy and misinformed, especially to Sarah. *** Lester realizing that Dan is figuring things out surprised me. Obviously, Jesse's panic and blabbing is a big red flag. But what's interesting is the way Lester seems to smoothly pivot to next level stuff. He's made enough stupid mistakes (and mostly been lucky) and is narcissistic enough that his lack of respect for Dan might have lead him to yet another mistake, underestimating Dan's waking up to him. But no, he realizes Dan is on the verge of figuring out his stunts, will inevitably figure them out, and is calmly proceeding to next level. *** I wonder what Sarah's aftermath is going to be? Dan will have admitted or demonstrated that he's drunk, violent and jealous. Not a good look for Dan in Sarah's eyes. She's already keeping secrets from him. He's already failed and frustrated her. And she now definitely prefers Lester as a sex partner. I think this inevitably lessens her regard. It may make her more skeptical of Dan's new claims. Dan has a knack for mishandling this kind of thing. He'll come across as paranoid and hateful and maybe abusive. But I can't see her not having empathy for what Dan went through, heartbreak for his getting arrested and in jail, for his suffering. It's going to tear at her heartstrings. And because of that, she'll have some deep guilt over what happened and the way it happened, particularly the night of great wild satisfying sex over and over, while he suffers. Of course, she'll have loved the sex, won't want to feel guilty about that. She had no idea it was Jesse until it was well along, and she had no idea whatsoever Dan was in trouble. Why should she feel guilty about things out of her control? She may get suspicious of Lester though, and the way he played it. He clearly, obviously excluded Dan and lied to her about it. Dan may have gotten drunk and made a scene in front of the wrong room, but he was entitled to be in there. And Lester knew how Dan would react to Jesse. So maybe there is something to Dan's ravings after all? Sarah's feelings are definitely going to be complicated.

Darrow

Dan's in jail for the night? Was it a Friday night? If he's in for public intoxication, he'll be released without charges the next day when he sobers up. But if he's actually arrested that's different. If he's arrested, then there are charges, if there are charges, he can't be released until he sees the Magistrate. The Magistrate doesn't sit on Saturday or Sunday, so Dan might not get released until Monday morning. Hopefully that doesn't happen. But it could be very convenient. Maybe convenient enough to pay little bribe in the right place, to the right person....

Darrow

Actually, Dan may be in a lot of trouble with his new friends in DC. The last thing an alphabet agency wants are unreliable people with criminal records who have an alcohol problem. Getting seriously drunk in public and causing a disturbance is likely to be something they dislike and don't want to be connected to. Having an arrest record, even more disliked. Dan's little outburst and temper tantrum may well have destroyed or damaged his side business.

Darrow

Ahh! So true. He must be across the hall with peep hole view

Gee

Dan has finally woken up. He plans to fill Sarah in but when she sees the message she will go straight away to bail him the next morning with Lester. Dan is livid and becomes aggressive towards Lester but Sarah tells him to stop overreacting, it was an honest mistake. Dan sees she is still wearing the ring and decides he can’t trust Sarah with his new theories. He has to let her fall further into debauchery while he seeks some favours from his new friends in DC to bring Lester down and eliminate him permanently. But will it be too late to stop her from being bred.

Mel

Sarah started the hotel room scene blind folded, told that Dan was Present in the cuck chair and another stranger was also present. Before leaving the apartment, Sarah asked Dan if he wanted her to be a good or bad girl. “Bad” was Dan’s answer. Now Sarah is on the verge of an intense orgasm from Jesse, with Lester provoking her orgasm with the right weighted dirty talk, who can blame Sarah for finishing her orgasm with Jesse and witnessed by Lester.

Gee

Would be a good way to shut down Jesse down and his desperate pursuit of Sarah if she says those three words to Lester. It broke Dan

Charlie_Chuckles

Do you think the DA will charge Dan with disturbing the peace?

Charlie_Chuckles

I’m sure Lester will do a lot over the weekend to make Sarah submit to him but a quick clarification in your statement. Correct Ned is on the third floor but he is not in room 326. Lester even said later he felt sorry for whoever was in that room but ultimately didn’t care.

Charlie_Chuckles

Remember in chapter 23, Lester told Dan and Sarah he had plans for the following night. Hence Lester insisted on the date that afternoon they walked in the Chicago apartment door. Bare with me here! Lester had the set up on separating Dan and Sarah from the start. Ned in an apartment across from 326. The photo of Jesse outside that (326) apartment door. Now Jesse and Lester are going to town on Sarah’s mind & body. On a different floor and room within the hotel. Between Ned and Lester, they have Dan being taken into custody by police, for being intoxicated and creating a disturbance. The police have collected Dan and put him away for at least the night and possibly longer. What if Lester’s busy plans for the following night always included Sarah!!! With Dan out of the way, uncontactable, Lester only need fabricate a cuck tale, that Dan is giving the happy couple space to celebrate their engagement. Lester has devious plans to introduce Sarah to all sorts of sexual depravity, that will leave her forever changed as a woman. She will never be satisfied with just being Dan’s wife, mother to his daughters or the vanilla sex they use to share

Gee

Personally, I really like Sarah as a cock hungry slut. Nothing wrong with that.

Darrow

How long will Dan stew in jail waiting for Sarah. I hope Lester has Sarah kick Jesse out by making fun of him like she did with Dan to turn him off from her. He is getting too attached. Lester and Sarah didn’t have a proper engagement celebration but Don you gotta reintroduce some pillow talk between these two. It can’t only be about the sex. . I’m sure the weekend will be enough time for Lester to change the narrative about Dan to her. Dan will face a lot of obstacles in his pursuit of his wife. First he is in trouble with the law. It might be a public intoxication only but what if the DA tacks on disturbing the peace. Now Dan will be stuck in Chicago until court, have additional expenses like bail, legal fees and community service and the potential of losing his government contract gigs. Next Dan and Sarah will have a heated conversation about Lester, Jesse and her whereabouts. Dan will give an ultimatum that Sarah ignores. On the topic of Lester. He is cunning. He still has an ace up his sleeve he hasn’t used. I’m sure Ned being there in the hotel and his conversations with Jesse, Lester is prepared for the Lincoln Group retaliation and will twist it to his advantage by using the hospital or Dan’s businesses as cover. In the end Lester could go away with Sarah to a non extradition country to live out their sex fantasies and torment Dan by emailing him the videos

Charlie_Chuckles

I'd go with LB on that. Dan's not the brightest guy. He feels superior to and contemptuous of Lester, and can't let that go. Except when he's in cuck mode. This is the first time he's 'respecting' Lester as a threat and rival. That said, my god, but Dan is deeply stupid. He's impulsive and erratic. He had two opportunities to interrogate Jesse and Lester, and blew them both by acting prematurely. He has no strategic thinking, no tactical thinking, he just sort of blunders around. He just gets handed drinks on the house... and drinks? He allows himself to get drunk over and over, despite being a lightweight with liquor. He's overdue for epiphany. Maybe the alcohol dulled his smart-stupids to let him actually think clearly.

Darrow

It doesn't matter what dan knows. Don isn't focused on a realistic arc or story. If he was, this wouldn't have gone on for over 2 years. I am here to laugh, because it's amazing how many people are actually invested in hilarity.

Elfy

I guarantee the author of this post had a fucked up teenage years

Elfy

Agree with much but last part of chapter …it is written to show us that Dan is figuring out what Lester has been doing as he is thinking as he sits in jail …..does Jessie become the new toy for the couple? Their need for this will not go away but the dynamic may change with Lester being too careles…it would be a wonderful change I think as Dan and Jessie become successful business partners and she now needs Jessie and what ever big cock he brings her….and Dan ? Well nothing changes for him

None

The plot hasn't moved in months. Don's entire plan has been to be to set a specific scene which demonstrates Sarah's further fall. He frames every chapter around a specific scene. Character development doesn't matter. Plot arc doesn't matter.

Elfy

Honestly the sex is becoming tiresome. The story needs a reset or change in direction to keep the tension. Dan getting the “goods” on Lester is a start so hopefully the next chapter will keep that momentum.

Vinny

Maybe so his day after confrontation can be cut down as drunk falsities? Maybe Jesse's text is gone, and Sarahs text doctored to say the real room number, with a guilty Sarah lying to dan.

Jörgen Tännfäldt

I find Sarah's character less and less interesting. She's become far too easy a woman to fuck and make come. If I were Lester, I'd start to tire of her, but I suppose for him the ultimate goal of all this isn't to make Sarah love him, but to humiliate Dan.

Pascal

Disagree. We had Lester being frustrated by the changed locks when trying to replace Sarah’s birth control pills. Although modern contraceptives come in blister packs not bottles. Sarah confirmed she was taking them. Dan’s realisation about Lester’s ability to track his online correspondence should put him and his new cameras on a path to foiling some of Lester’s plans. Jesse’s involvement and Sarah’s inability to say anything other than “fuck me harder” or “fill me up” even after she realises Dan isn’t there puts her on a collision course with the reality of her descent in slutdom. The two week break, the ‘proposal’ all designed to heighten her sexual desperation that was already evident to Dan when she walked into the apartment. It’s going to be a lot harder for them to pretend to play happy family after this. Who knows how long this series will go on for. My guesses, Lester still has goals to achieve. Sarah’s pregnancy, her anal virginity & playing house with her. He’s made his job harder now by pushing Dan so far but he will no doubt get his way. He won’t end up with the girl though. His hacking will come back to bite him just when he thinks he’s finally won. Then Dan and Sarah are left to pick up the pieces. Not that Sarah will ever be able to go back to her pre Lester self. The baby in her womb and the desire for strange cock will not let her.

LB

Well I have been in Dans situation and I have to admit that being in the drunk tank does give you pause for self-reflection. Hopefully also in regards to being a stupid cuck.

Vinny

"So you actually fucked Jesse?" "I did Dan." "How did that happen?" "Lester blindfolded me, and I was so turned on, he told me you were watching." "So you didn't know?" "Not at first, but the blindfold came off before we finished and I recognized Jesse." "And he wouldn't stop when you recognized him?" "No, by then it was to late, we couldn't stop." "What do you mean "To Late" "I needed it baby, Jesse has a nice cock, it was to good to stop." "A nice cock?" "Yeah, it's pretty big, maybe just a little bigger than yours, but he's got the perfect curve and it hits my G spot perfectly, I needed to cum." "And...?" "Ohhh, that curve baby was irresistible, he made cum." "You didn't realize I wasn't there?" "Sorry babe, not till we were thru, it was an intense orgasm." "So, now you have Jesse too?" "Only if Lester lets me, but his curve fits perfectly so I hope so."

Michael Haase

Perhaps the alcohol dulled his conflicted cuck urges??

LB

A marked improvement over the Alpha. Well done.

Volkfly

I agree, the story went nowhere. Even the teases directed toward Dan DeKuck were lame. How to reestablish the basic three way dynamic will become more difficult as Sarah becomes nothing more than a cock hungry slut. So, Jesse finally fucks Sarah and she likes it, he fucks her better than Dan....Maybe Sarah and Jesse go somewhere, hard to see with Lester around.

Michael Haase

Liked this one slightly over the Alpha - a few more tidbits added for clarification. The ending was expanded giving Dan more insights into the whole situation. I just curious as to why he picked a state of inebriation to give Dan his moment of clarity. As he starts to review in his mind all of the coincidences regarding the events from the recent past, it becomes even more apparent as to how blind Dan has been this whole time.

Vinny

This chapter moved the plot not one inch and made no sense. Lester and Sarah were in Middleton working at the same place and neither of them made a move toward the other. No mention made of Sarah working for Lester. Sarah and Dan talk like everything is fine. Lester is more interested in whoring Sarah out than taking her himself. And he gets Dan thrown in jail, which takes him out of the picture for a night. But Sarah will take Dan's side when he tells her what happened. Lester's made mistakes before, but they were done out of lust for Sarah. This was just a stupid overreach on his part. I fear the author has decided to jerk us around for as long as he can. One more chapter and I'm gone.

Mark Albright

Sarah likes the curve of his dick.

Michael Haase

I would have liked to hear those three little words from Sarah again this chapter, but I guess it would have messed with the new dynamic between Jesse and Sarah. Hopefully next chapter.

LH_reads

Dan really is so thick.

Darrow

Was waiting for Jessie… so hot and intense and i hope there is more about the all nighter to start next chapter… this was incredible

None

Wow! "One went up and talked to the valet, but the other disappeared back inside the hospital." Surely that was supposed to be 'hotel', not 'hospital'. "Sarah flexed the muscles in her busy" typo

LH_reads

Only thing missing is the attachment showing Sarah’s dress.

J Lewis

Wow. Intense

Bob James

Yessss when you refresh and a story pops up lol

Chris N