Toxic Attraction: Chapter 17
Added 2024-04-29 20:23:39 +0000 UTCHey everyone, I've been a little quiet putting
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Yeah Donsilver universe
Rajkumar
2024-08-14 06:32:29 +0000 UTCmore cash please, he needs a favor from sarah
whiterhino
2024-08-03 23:46:55 +0000 UTC5
Tom
2024-06-22 12:02:19 +0000 UTC8.5
Royston smith
2024-05-22 11:23:09 +0000 UTCAnyone who has read the Alpha draft of Chapter 18 prepared to give a score out of 10?
Gee
2024-05-21 22:47:12 +0000 UTCIn TA16 Don introduced us to Bill, and wife Amber, who I assume are from the incomplete series, Neighbor Chronicles. Bill can help Dan and perhaps Amber can help Sarah get a job at her hospital. Then there are all kinds of combinations that could occur. Lester with Amber who is as hot as Sarah and Jack with Sarah. Of course, the kids would have to spend a lot of time, perhaps weekends with the grandparents. We will see.
Richardcat
2024-05-19 03:10:34 +0000 UTCA couple of more observations: The car scene at the beginning is the first instant of sex details between Dan and Sarah since an earlier Middleton visit where they were discussing date night parameters. In other cases, they had chinese, went to bed, spent time in a hotel, etc with no sex details. In both cases, Sarah gave Dan a bj with no orgasm for her. It has awhile since they have had reclaiming sex. I believe the last time was after the first peephole scene. In the car scene Sarah tells Dan she likes Lester taking her to expensive restaurants, and she's enjoyed all of their dates. There have only been two restaurant scenes. Have there been other dates, not described, but alluded to?
TuwatchU
2024-05-04 14:56:34 +0000 UTCBut after hurricane Sarah lost her shit and destroyed her office because she didn’t get her way…. 🤬😖😫💥 … she gets the old AXE and is being escorted out of the hospital tomorrow morning with the ubiquitous “i just got fired” box clutched to her chest. The broken picture of her family poking out of the top, an excellent allegory to her life at that moment. As security pushes her through the automatic doors, Lester strolls passed her with sunglasses and a Hawaiian shirt on. Cue douchebag music and then confetti and streamers. Full on ticker tate parade with topless gogó dancers and bearded ladies hoisting Lester over their shoulders shouting “for he’s a jolly good fellow.” And handing him a ‘worlds greatest CEO mug’. Ok maybe i jumped the shark at the end there. Fuck sharks. They’re made to be jump. Just ask the fonze Or if shits gonna get weird Dan gets the ceo offer from some of Lester’s shenanigans. Or his whole linked in samurai training or whatever. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Or Jesse. Fuck Jesse tho. Not ceo material. If we want to keep the world small we use one of these characters.
M Neal Gibby
2024-05-04 01:51:38 +0000 UTCGreat and morbid chapter. I like that Sarah thinks less and less and she doesn't like the idea of using a condom with Lester. The other thing I liked is Sarah's reaction when she saw Lizzie's name, although she already had a reaction in the previous chapter by wanting her and Lester to be exclusive for hearing Lizzie's name, plus that time she treated the shaft Lester as HER cock. Seeing Sarah "jealous" or "angry" not wanting to share her boyfriend is a pleasure. I don't think Sarah loves Lester now or that she will ever love Lester, what she feels for him is a great attraction. Sarah could perhaps come to feel great affection for Lester and vice versa, what Sarah does "love" is Lester's huge cock and how he fucks her. If they get too romantically involved, everything will go to shit and everyone will be screwed. If Lester is smart and wants to earn more of Sarah's appreciation, maybe he can help her get back that promotion that she wasn't given and that Sarah deservedly earned. It will also be interesting to see what gift Sarah will give Lester for his birthday. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Arthas17
2024-05-02 10:36:53 +0000 UTCI'm 50/50 on the pregnancy angle at this point. It adds to the fiery sex scenes transitioning from voyeur, handjob, bj, condom sex, and then no condoms. A lot of stories on Lit are unprotected, but Don does a good job reminding us that Sarah isn't on any protection and Lester didn't have that vasectomy. In reality, Lester is the selfish person who doesn't want that responsibility of children (at least that's how I see his character). He's not father material and there's been no indicator of him about having any relationship with D&S kids. I know that Don is doing his best to keep the kids angle out of the main story though. However, Lester is an alpha like a male lion and the instinct is to procreate to keep the bloodline going. It's very easy to write that Lester could in fact be sterile without his knowledge, or maybe Sarah has a miscarriage due to previous medical conditions. Regardless, the sex is hot, the story is moving along, but the pregnancy angle is probably hot for some and an afterthought for others.
Dingdonger
2024-05-02 05:22:01 +0000 UTC
