[Insider] Toxic Attraction: Chapter 15 Alpha Draft
Added 2024-02-26 20:15:33 +0000 UTCWhew. This chapter took quite a bit out of me.
Comments
Great chapter, would of have liked Jess to have Sarah on the verge coming with his hand down the front of her pants when they were interrupted,
lee
2024-02-29 03:09:52 +0000 UTCYeah, so this was waaaaay better than the last chapter. A couple of things I'd like to see. 1.) Expand on Lester and Sarah in the shower before Dan interrupts and 2.) It would be much hotter if Sarah and Cash actually have some contact. I think a blowjob would be too much, but she already made out with the another guy, so perhaps she strokes his cock through the fence before he cums all over her. Otherwise, I enjoyed this chapter immensely.
Jay Smith
2024-02-28 14:03:04 +0000 UTCTotally agree. I also feel that Sarah would be more annoyed by Dan stopping Lester than she is currently. Much like taking away alcohol or cocaine from an addict, I think she would be more irritated at Dan - maybe she taunts him to fuck her right then but he can’t get it up (because he just had a hands free cuck orgasm watching her get creampied) I also think she should make more out of Dan being thrown out of the club - she would most likely be super embarrassed at Dan’s actions (like most women would be) .
Robert Smith
2024-02-28 14:01:34 +0000 UTCA further expansion of the shower scene. Her surprise he is hard already. A slow senous fuck, part of which is witness bt Dan
John Lewis
2024-02-28 10:27:06 +0000 UTC
