[Alpha Draft] Toxic Attraction: Chapter 13
Added 2023-12-21 20:22:15 +0000 UTCHey all. This is a bit of a massive chapter, lo
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Well done Don, very good chapter. Fully committed again. I hope Dan has to listen to them fucking in his bed or better he wants to listen. I'm actually starting to like the idea of her falling for Lester.
Mrmanmr
2023-12-27 17:22:50 +0000 UTCI love that this seems to be a bit of foreshadowing for the eventuality of Sarah sliding the ring off and giving it back to Dan.
Andrew
2023-12-27 14:20:35 +0000 UTCWhat happens to Sarah’s ring ? « Lester’s hand found Sarah’s. He interlaced his fingers with hers and held them the to the bed, above her head. He felt her wedding ring pressing into his finger. He relaxed his grip on her and slide the ring off her finger. He put it on the pillow next to them and interlaced her fingers again. »
Proginor
2023-12-26 16:00:41 +0000 UTC
