Toxic Attraction Chapter 12
Added 2023-12-01 03:12:12 +0000 UTCHey folks - here comes a big ass chapter. I wen
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Love the chapter. Sarah is no longer compelled to call Dan. I would like to see more use of the peephole. For example, after the reclaiming sex, Dan says he can't wait until her next visit and get to watch. Sarah teases him about what he would like to watch. He tells her he wants to watch her with Lester. Sarah tells him he doesn't have to wait. Dan asks what she means, and she points to the peephole, and says, you "can watch us like before."
TuwatchU
2024-03-15 17:29:00 +0000 UTCNot out yet
Kyle Howard
2023-12-26 21:56:43 +0000 UTCIs chapter 13 out yet . If so how can I access it thanks in advance
Ozzy Ugo
2023-12-26 20:57:10 +0000 UTCNot sure I fully understand your drive down with her after she comes up to see Dan and Lester's Date night. Because think about this. Sarah made her call to Lester on a Monday, so that means for your plan to work the hospital would have to go through the entire week without their IT systems not working. I think it would make more sense that after Sarah calls Lester about the IT problem, Lester says I will drive right down if you agree to let me stay with you at you and Dan's house for the entire week.
Kyle Howard
2023-12-24 18:47:10 +0000 UTCI'm completely agree with you. It would be the best if S. learned to tease D. and be naughtier with all the love but also the lust possible.
Jap
2023-12-23 22:49:17 +0000 UTCIn Chapter 13, I wonder if Lester will tell Sarah he will fix the IT problem under the condition that she let him stay with her in Middleton. Lester could keep Sarah away from Dan for that week and take even stronger control of the situation.
Kyle Howard
2023-12-23 15:02:06 +0000 UTCNeed a stroke present for Xmas Don. Only 2 days left
realcuck
2023-12-23 13:44:35 +0000 UTCLove the story , the fact Lester slowly getting taking control of Sarah, brilliant, Lester upping her submissive and Voyeurism interests , I think Lester can’t wait to go bear back , is he waiting for Sarah to say “ to lose the condom” and feeling. Every ripple and vein Also when Sarah comes back from her date or next morning , there could be more dialogue between her and Dan , telling him all the details . But the story is still great 👍
Thomas matchett
2023-12-23 10:26:36 +0000 UTCThanks 🙏🏻 I hope so would like to see more dialogues between Sarah and dan about the different situations and loss of control for both them . And her convincing agreeing to allow more boundaries to be broken..
Migmig
2023-12-21 05:34:01 +0000 UTCI really appreciated your scenarios. I hope Don will follow some of them.... Especially the idea of a "actual girlfriend" - wife, the next step to "denying D. certain things", is a classic that I find very intriguing even if, with 2 children, it's a little thougher, but given D. risks being left without job... Great suggestions although I think L. Will exploit Dan's weaknesses much more than Sara's obvious lust, we'll see and hope Don follows you.... 😉👍
Jap
2023-12-19 22:10:26 +0000 UTCCertainly not going in the direction that I had thought it would go. I really felt that with Dan & Sarah's money problems and the fact that Lester was only too eager to help and Lester's computer and internet savy that he would steer them into internet porn for pay videos etc. with Sarah as the star and Lester providing the mega cock for the films.
AvidReader69
2023-12-19 17:59:53 +0000 UTCI don't think he is sharing her yet. I think he is just trying to get her more excited with more people around, to become his slut. He knows she has a voyeur kink of some kind, he is just now trying to figure out how to exploit that.
Razoid
2023-12-13 05:11:33 +0000 UTCAmazing story Slowly lester takes over . I’d like to see how deep he can get Sarah a Dan in the rabbit hole. To a point that she will become his actual girlfriend spending more and more time with her with Dan approval maybe in their home and bed . A whole weekend, a whole week and the weekend with her husband.. See how conflicted she is but can’t help herself to submit to his each request ( no condom , denying dan certain things, anal, her convincing dan to wear a condom, give oral after sex with lester ) while dan objecting but his desire takes over him. Pregnancy risk is huge turn on for Sarah and dan maybe dan discover that lester is not snipped and doesn’t tell her … they toy with that idea .. So many ways to go For me all the other characters are just backgrounds and just support the main storyline with little participation no more . For now Thanks don Excellent work
Migmig
2023-12-11 16:13:52 +0000 UTCI can only hope. Would love to see Lizzie come back, but not pair up with Dan.
Chris
2023-12-08 09:27:47 +0000 UTCI'm assuming Lester is going to meet Drew and be the vehicle for Drew to get his 'revenge' on her for showing him up/being more respected than him. I'm a bit confused by Lester though... in an earlier chapter he said he wanted Sarah all to himself, and now it looks like he's happy to share her around? Even interviewing people on their dick size?
Chris
2023-12-08 09:26:16 +0000 UTCInstead of just agreeing to help in order to get closer to Sarah, Lester should deny her, telling her he already has too much work on his plate. Desperate for his help, Sarah could "beg" to some degree and offer him a more intimate reward for his help.
Omdol
2023-12-07 18:01:10 +0000 UTCSince she is probably gonna ask Lester to help her hospital with the IT problem, and since Lester has probably set all of this up, here is a small idea:
Omdol
2023-12-07 17:59:19 +0000 UTCI liked the part where she started sending him texts, I personally like the slow build up to the story. Don I appreciated when you described what her lingerie was or what her outfit was. I have a request could you also mention her heels as they seem to get missed out? It would be great for us with a heels fetish! Also would love her to leave just her heels on for Lester some time
Jamie C
2023-12-07 09:25:12 +0000 UTCI think Lester will have a 3 some with Sarah and Lizzie . The next time Sarah will be putting her luggage in Lester's room and spend the night there . Dan's permission is longer required
Ozzy Ugo
2023-12-06 21:06:58 +0000 UTCStill a great chapter although not my favorite. Some touches of eroticism present in the previous chapters are missing even if the voyeur opens up new possibilities for S. . In that scene I especially appreciated when she called L. as "my man" but the phrase before to the voyeur; "..you can (only?) watch..", sent a shiver through me... even though I'm rooting for D. S. is finally becoming more naughty by playing with the symbolic phrase of this story for her hubby (until now) ; "I won't do anything you wouldn't approve it...", but actually taking some initiatives. In fact ,this means that she will be able to have carte blanche (?). The idea of blackmail in the hospital opens up many erotic scenarios (the idea of a previous comment about the possibility of seeing S.& L. in Dan's marital bed is fantastic..), but strangely I would be more intrigued if L. wasn't responsible for the software problem at the hospital. Maybe because it would make L.'s rescue more real and therefore more dangerous for her relative gratitude. Even the idea that "the fate" conspires against the love of the 2 heroes (S.& D. !!) is much more intriguing. It would hot also be hot to see S.& D. separated while she is in close contact with the "IT wizard ". Looking forward to reading new chapters soon, thanks again Don.
Jap
2023-12-05 16:38:50 +0000 UTCVery fantastic chapter.A lot of tension in different ways are opend up. I like this driven plot.
Jetter19
2023-12-05 13:04:02 +0000 UTCHopefully with the hospital IT problems and Lester coming to the rescue will open up the places Lester can take advantage of Sarah, like at the work place and Dan's & Sarah's home. With Dan in Chicago and on zoom calls back home seeing Lester taking more control of his wife and maybe Dan getting some phone sex from Sarah trying to keep him happy.
lee
2023-12-05 08:21:01 +0000 UTCThis chapter was good, but not my favorite. Glad to see Sarah enjoying her exhibitionist tendencies. Probably Lester infected the computer systems so he could get Sarah to do exactly what he wants as blackmail, like take him bareback in front of a bunch of his gaming buddies- maybe letting a stranger enjoy her pussy or mouth too! Or several guys!
Kim Kreme
2023-12-04 23:35:02 +0000 UTCNice chapter but I have to admit I was a little frustrated by the slow rhythm of Sarah corruption along the story As mentioned by a previous reader I was hoping some follow-up after Sarah and Lester last date either during the night or in the next morning and maybe new hot scenes in front of Dan. Can’t wait though to read about Lester coming to rescue Sarah’s hospital and simultaneously bedding her in her home..
King40
2023-12-04 20:56:46 +0000 UTCLiked this chapter, hoping at some point Lester and Sarah will arrive home and Dan is passed out or cant perform and she goes to Lester's room in the middle of the night on her in accord for some relief
Rober
2023-12-03 23:00:58 +0000 UTCNice new chapter. The scene in the car - awesome. I love the play with dominance and submissiveness. I also think it's very well done that the story opens up to other levels and probably far more characters and storylines appear. Great writing - very good work Don. And now I'm looking forward to Tainted conception. When is the next chapter coming out, Don? Greetings..... Gerd
Gerd Brunner
2023-12-03 20:16:54 +0000 UTCGood chapter although not one of my favorites. I’m guessing Lester was the one to infect the computers with the virus so he can fix it easily. Overall I’m really liking the series but I hope we are at or almost at the halfway mark this is good but I’d rather it end when it’s on top instead of going too long.
Nike-Victory
2023-12-03 06:19:36 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! I noticed that Lester likes to be called "daddy". While Sarah was uncomfortable with it at first I hope that Lester using it a second time with no pushback from her might be hinting at further corruption for Sarah; especially if it comes up the next time he, Dan and Sarah are together. Speaking of which, I hope Dan gets involved again. It's fun watching Lester flex the power he has over both of them and I can't wait to see more of it!
Hatch
2023-12-03 02:09:10 +0000 UTCI really like this chapter. Enjoyed the car scene with the voyeur very much. Also liked that Dan at least tried to make the alone time with Sarah a priority first. I am intrigued by all of the plot openings that are ongoing and it keeps me impatiently waiting for next chapter. Excellent work Don!
Mkm560
2023-12-02 17:21:18 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!
Leo
2023-12-02 13:49:09 +0000 UTCI liked this chapter, however it feels the pace has slowed, somewhat.
Pete
2023-12-02 13:18:08 +0000 UTCDon, could you increase the frequency of releases?
Mike
2023-12-02 12:53:04 +0000 UTCReally great chapter, though I admit to skimming some of the business stuff, as I'm really just not interested in the details of n interview. Ugh. Dying to see Sarah cross that bare line. I suppose it'll be another month, at the best. :/
RD
2023-12-01 22:19:30 +0000 UTCFor those who are not insiders, they aren't seeing the extra depth you added between the first cut and this one. I really appreciate that you openly listen to what people are saying, and then take actions that are within the scope of your intent.
robert
2023-12-01 18:33:36 +0000 UTCThis is no doubt in the top 3 best chapters!
Sly7G
2023-12-01 17:12:57 +0000 UTCI'm a little disappointed. I mean it's better than anything I write, but I think missing the details of morning after last date. And rather than more car sex, maybe one of the guy could have dared Sarah to model all the lingerie Lester bought her last trip..
Warren
2023-12-01 11:20:31 +0000 UTCIt feels like this is a fresh start and I love it.
Proginor
2023-12-01 10:23:25 +0000 UTCKinda predictable The guy in the park was nice. I am waiting for the first time Sarah gets used and doesn't tell Dan. Maybe her boss since he got a peek in the office. Maybe Jesse??
realcuck
2023-12-01 08:05:40 +0000 UTCNow Lester is going to save the day for Sarah’s company, get himself a cushy job offer and get to work her all day everyday
Ian Boylan
2023-12-01 04:55:58 +0000 UTCI owe several of you responses, I'm just a bit behind. Hoping to catch up on emails and DMs tomorrow.
DonSilver
2023-12-01 03:13:09 +0000 UTC
