Toxic Attraction: Chapter 11
Added 2023-10-31 19:40:42 +0000 UTCHappy Halloween everyone, I really enjoyed writ
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I can't believe dan even questioned wether Sarah realized the signal she was sending in saying "I do" to lester.... she has never said I do before right? In her wedding dress even.
Jörgen Tännfäldt
2024-02-05 00:24:02 +0000 UTCI'm happy with where things are going overall, with Dan's continuing emasculation and Sarah's growing addiction, and love the story. I do think the sex scene in the car this time was a bit perfunctory. Compare this scene (as well as the scene in Ch. 10 when Dan was peeping from the other room) to Sarah's first (two) times having sex with Lester or even the blowjob/time of the month scene where Dan was sitting in the living room with them and it feels like there wasn't quite as much going on in these newer scenes. Not just physically, but also psychologically (very little internal dialogue from Sarah mid-act, and the actual sex act is far less detailed). Love the story, regardless. One of my favorites ever, and the perfect cuckold story for people who don't necessarily like cuckold stories, with its focus on the slow corruption of Sarah and Lester's continued plotting.
Chris
2023-11-30 07:32:30 +0000 UTC
