The Kingswood Amelioration - Chapter 18
Added 2025-11-14 17:00:02 +0000 UTCComments
Finally catching up on the story - most of the comments I would make have already been made. I loved seeing Avery and Milo finally confess their feelings to each other. For me, that was the highlight of the chapter. Danny gets hero vote for this chapter for being such an amazing mentor to Avery.
Rich
2025-11-27 00:27:47 +0000 UTCDanny and Avery is a tough one. Danny wants to help so much but he has been burned in the past by helping too much, and with someone he feels so protective of like Avery, it's even harder to know when he needs to do more. Obviously Neil's secret with Danny is out now, let's see where that leads - spoiler alert, it's almost certainly not where you expect! Tyler and David is an interesting storyline to develop. Sometimes it's like David's in their own little world away from the others, but that can be the price of secrecy. Locky's return was a fun surprise and an inventive way of revisiting non-verbal communication for Nicky and Gray. More developments coming on their storyline really soon! Studying for exams is definitely something they should be doing. I know often the actual school part of Kingswood gets forgotten amongst the drama and angst, but they will soon get a stark reminder of what they're actually meant to be at school for!
Matthew Smith
2025-11-23 10:54:28 +0000 UTCAdopt Avery? I don't think Avery's situation was that bad. Maybe he thought he was a replacement of Daniel, but his parents didn't (at least not intentionally) think so. I think Avery just needed a good talk with his parents, like Mikey. Mark? Maybe more plausible, since Mark's situation is worse than Avery IMO, though I think it would be more reasonable if it's Me. Rudd adopting him, not Blane and Levi.
Johnny Kape
2025-11-15 23:10:06 +0000 UTCI have speculated on what career Danny might pursue after his Kingswood education, and wondered whether being a teacher at Kingswood might be a possibility. He certainly has strong leadership qualities, and (heh!) enjoys collegial relations with the current faculty members. I could even see him becoming headmaster of Kingswood some day. Prior to that I could see him being a games coach or something similar. Where Chris would fit into all of this I have not taken time to consider, but he could take on a role in the drama or music programs, while probably teaching English composition. Of course everyone is mystified about what Mr. Cunningham's secret is compared to Neil's secret. I had not realized that Avery and Milo were still hesitant to make their respective feelings known to each other -- I guess I was just expecting nature to take its course off stage. Given my misunderstanding, I'm grateful that Danny took the bull by the horns and got them to reveal their true feelings to each other. I still hold out hope that Levi's mysterious absences have something to do with Avery and his parents. But the theory of adoption/surrogacy arrangements in plausible. Hoping that Gray's brainwave will bear fruit. If Nicky reveals what happened with Mr. Stone, Gray will need to confront his father and stand up for his own decisions. ADDED THOUGHT: Wouldn't it be wild if Blane and Levi were taking steps to adopt Avery, to get him away from his home situation? (Mark could use something like that as well.)
Rutabaga
2025-11-15 16:25:09 +0000 UTCThat stuff with Avery is heavy. With him having that kind of dreams, it sounds like he's traumatised by the situation. For his sake, I hope Danny tells him what he knows before Christmas, even if he can't get ahold of Levi before then. Avery being with his parents would only make it worse for his mental health, maybe knowing can help a bit. I'm now worried about the secret Danny agreed for Neil to share with him. What Mr. Cunningham mentioned is a Kingswood secret, so there's some protection there. But now that we know Neil's secret is separate, I'm looking with different eyes at his request for absolutely secrecy, even to his friends. It sounds like the teachers involved would get in trouble if it's found out, which makes me worry about what it could do to Danny. Since the summer, David has been wanting to stop the voyeurism, but they haven't had the strength to do it. But now it has been affecting their relationship with Tyler and I wonder if that will eventually provide David with some extra inner strength to pull the plug. I don't mean affecting in terms of Tyler getting upset, I mean that the voyeurism is the center of David's horniness, when they'd want that to be their boyfriend. The return of Locky, holy shit! I did not see that coming, but it was a very good idea from Gray. Who, of course, immediately started second guessing himself because he's Gray. Nicky going pretty much means Mr. Stone has to be behind the breakup, although that already seemed very likely. But Nicky is not the kind to respect authority just because, so Mr. Stone probably has something he was able to threaten Nicky with if he didn't go through with it. I don't know what that could be. Thank you, Danny, for giving Avery and Milo that push. It was nice to see Josh act like his normal self, that's progress. David is right about their's friends need to take studying more seriously on the GCSE year, but arguing it is a lost cause until they get closer to the exams. Danny licking cum off of the floor, eww, and I don't mean because of the cum.
Davide
2025-11-15 15:19:02 +0000 UTCWow! Lots of feels this week.
Notmy Realname
2025-11-15 12:20:15 +0000 UTCI really hope that Nicky is able and willing to speak with Locky. When he cannot tell Gray about the break up reason perhaps he can tell it to Locky
Mr Luigi
2025-11-15 07:50:44 +0000 UTCNow Avery and Milo are finally together, so cute in the middle of the night 😍🥰
Mr Luigi
2025-11-15 07:42:24 +0000 UTCSome sweet scenes in this chapter... Milo&Avery, checked. David and Tyler, checked (David, stop struggling and give up those recordings!) Nice to see Josh not mad in this chapter, and very nice to see Nicky going there in the end, though it was more clear that Mr. Stone had done something to cause Nicky's breakup with Gray.
Johnny Kape
2025-11-15 03:54:22 +0000 UTCThat, and I vote for " I love hating movies more than I love loving movies!" too.
Johnny Kape
2025-11-15 03:48:05 +0000 UTCThe best quote for this chapter....."It was like Schrodinger’s Dick!"
rpcvrn
2025-11-15 01:40:30 +0000 UTCWhat if they're looking into adoption or surrogacy?
Shannon1493
2025-11-14 22:40:33 +0000 UTCI'm worried about Blane. Last chapter, he cancelled his meeting with Chris, saying he had something important. This time, he added Blane is always busy when he wants to hang out and Levi is never around, either. And Mr. Cunningham told Danny Levi was away that evening because of an appointment. He did also say everything is good, but I don't know whether to trust that. I worry it could be a medical appointment for Blane, with Levi there to support him, because of something serious. I'll comment on the rest of the chapter later.
Davide
2025-11-14 18:16:03 +0000 UTC
