Heart of Gold - Page 11
Added 2023-10-20 00:38:05 +0000 UTCOof... Got the flu shot yesterday and I thought I got lucky and avoided side effects, but turns out I woke up today feeling super dizzy and aching all over. 🙃 I hope these will go away before I leave.
Yeah, yeah, I know this page is dialogue-heavy. I promise we'll get more smut soon enough.
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Hahaha quite literally, his version of "letting his hair down" is tying it up.
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-25 05:44:32 +0000 UTCAlek tying up his hair and wearing very tame and smoothing clothing change my perspective of him. Kind of weird . When a girl tie her hair it's always "go" time. In his case it s feel feel like the opposite.
welan
2023-10-25 01:20:49 +0000 UTCI wonder 🤔 ¿Porqué no los dos?
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-22 00:39:21 +0000 UTCCabaret Bara: filling your narrative needs (and any orifices) since 2017
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-22 00:38:35 +0000 UTCUghh, flu shots suckk! But I wonder… whose ideals will be proven right? Finn’s hope? Or Alek’s pragmatism?
Hayden Hayes
2023-10-20 22:24:34 +0000 UTCOh fuck yeah, give me that hot juicy interaction, let me choke on that drama, fill my lore hole !
Félix, from Paris
2023-10-20 21:04:29 +0000 UTCHopefully no one dies 🤞
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 19:40:55 +0000 UTCThe chapter of high stakes!
Griffin Barrows
2023-10-20 15:01:30 +0000 UTCHere, have some popcorn. It's tastier.
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:09:52 +0000 UTCFunny you should ask 👀
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:09:34 +0000 UTCI've decided to rework it in more of a "show don't tell" way. Hopefully it still comes through.
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:09:09 +0000 UTCThey were clearly both in debate club in high school.
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:08:13 +0000 UTCIs it weird that the sillier the characters look, the more serious I make them? 💀
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:07:14 +0000 UTCThank you! I was a bit worried this would come off a bit boring since it's just the two of them talking at each other. And good luck for the shot, hope it goes smoothly.
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:06:39 +0000 UTCThank you, that's so sweet of you to say 🥰
Cabaret Bara
2023-10-20 03:05:46 +0000 UTC*sits and bites nails*
RedRoo
2023-10-20 03:03:58 +0000 UTCCheri really is the epitome of hope, and even is willing to take the brunt of criticism, because he can take it! I wonder what kind of tongue-lashing Finn is getting from King though. Eeps!
jason.lauchlan
2023-10-20 01:36:11 +0000 UTCOK nice little rewrite there but I hope Chéri’s bit about Finn’s feelings comes through later.
Allan Meyer
2023-10-20 01:00:53 +0000 UTCEven with Alek’s harsh words, Chéri is UNFUCKWITHABLE!
Adam Lunter
2023-10-20 00:51:44 +0000 UTCAlek laying some tough words at the Care Bear floating around his face.
Shakam
2023-10-20 00:45:10 +0000 UTCIs it weird I love getting this thoughtful dialogue with characters who are deeply intimate with their reality. I love Finn, but he's still learning the weight of the responsibility he's taken on. Alek is overly aware of it. Thank you so much for the fantastic update and I hope you start feeling better soon (my flu shot is tomorrow so 🤞)
SpicyRamen
2023-10-20 00:42:40 +0000 UTCThe writing is unMATCHED
Eddie C.
2023-10-20 00:41:05 +0000 UTC
