Feed back poll for Milf x Neighbour scene
Added 2024-03-30 04:32:37 +0000 UTCwhat do you guys think about the dialogue
did you guys like the dialogue? or no? ( i changed the question, because english is not my first language and i might have worded the sentence poorly )
since this is my first attempt to make pose non-sequencing scene, i will need feedback on the dialogue ^^
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unfortunate but, its either auto-transition or manual button.. because in order to have transitioning story with camera, you will need to edit "timeline plugin" sequencing.
Mulyady
2024-03-31 13:38:04 +0000 UTCthen just make it an option to stop the auto transition. if the scene is built on a series of loops just have a transition timer that you can turn on or off. this entire scene could easily have been a 15 minute auto play scene with way more talking and the option to be hands off but im having to manually transition the story forward by pressing buttons laid out everywhere. It's a well built set of loops but its needs an automatic function.
mememan
2024-03-30 20:42:05 +0000 UTCOh I wouldn't worry about that. I mean txt bubbles are often used in a frozen facial expression or a scene where there's absolutely nothing going on, nor any animated action executed.
Dong
2024-03-30 19:21:16 +0000 UTCIf you mean to have the txt bubble display a few sec longer I agree. for some lines I was too focused to look at her tugging and face so I missed what he/she said in the txt bubbles. but if I forgot or missed it. it probabbly wasn't that relevant, important, or necessary.
Dong
2024-03-30 19:18:43 +0000 UTCFor instance if you made a twerk teasing sequence I like. I'll maybe ahegao her face up, or make her haggle or even sing a song but that's up to us and not required by you.
Dong
2024-03-30 19:14:45 +0000 UTCYou're an animator the best I've seen on hub. You're not a script writter or story teller so keep your scenes animations good and generic. WE'll write and play our own versions of story in our mind. focus on what you're good at. The body language is already golden and sold. Even if your models/characters were all be mute and it wouldn't bother me one bit. Whatever saves you time, Keying frames is already very time consuming as it is. Your shit is good already don't waste too much time reading,writting, declarating and putting bows on a package box. because many of us sure won't. (LAMO @ those [looks] or persons some authors put a whole personal biography and their life story on a fictional characters.)
Dong
2024-03-30 19:12:12 +0000 UTCsequenced? like 1123456778? But what if I like 4 more than the others and wish to see 4 repeat more loops before I bust a nut? You can't please everybody.
Dong
2024-03-30 18:57:33 +0000 UTCYour txts are fine, many know how to fix typo or put in their own txt anyways. But for now maybe explore and experiment different artistic styles see which fits better. Text bubbles are cartoony/anime. While substitles down below or dubs create a more immersive cinematic experience. I honestly don't care if you don't change anything at all. The animations and emotion details are the meat and bread here. We could edit and put our own bullshit txt n dubs.
Dong
2024-03-30 18:53:54 +0000 UTCthese scenes need to have an auto transition option.
mememan
2024-03-30 17:21:23 +0000 UTCbut i really appreciate your honesty xD, also i might have worded the poll poorly, i am not sure if the "yes" majority means people like my dialogue or not lol
Mulyady
2024-03-30 11:41:45 +0000 UTCi don't think there is a way to lengthen the speech bubble ^_^"
Mulyady
2024-03-30 11:40:59 +0000 UTCthe lines fade out after 2-3 sec ? keep on for 5-8 otherwise one needs to replay the part to see the text IF one does roam the camera around for example, like i tend to do, i like to appraciate the scens from all the angles :D As for the content, its ffine as is on lenght the amount of text and so on. This particaulr scen, yes its cliche, yes its cringy, but for you first dialog attmept it is good. Good job
Radoslav
2024-03-30 11:34:51 +0000 UTC"keep the text on longer" not sure what you mean by this
Mulyady
2024-03-30 11:00:37 +0000 UTCowh so.. do you want the text to be the same as it is, or minimal?
Mulyady
2024-03-30 11:00:12 +0000 UTCyeah keep the text on longer, aside from that some lines don't really fit the scene or like in intor last part the swittch is a bit abrupt Also typos, it shold be "IT" not "Them" you know where. Thats all for text itself, then there are scen mechanics - the palcement of contorls, not really well thought out unless you desigend it as POV scene. Still A ) please start making foldable menu's and simple "NEXT" button would be much better at least fro intro parts as those are only poses + text you switch between not animations, You can refer to "Andifang" scenes for example
Radoslav
2024-03-30 10:30:01 +0000 UTC
