JBL S2 E1 Bonus Story | Louis doesn't make Jay wait

Everyone is over the age of 18

Read the storyline "We All Have to Move On, Right?" first, because this is just smut. Enjoy!

From Jay’s POV:

His lips are soft on mine as he kisses me gently. His hand on the back of my head pulls me in closer into him and I give in, putting my hands on his chest and shoulders.

Fuck he’s ripped. I can even feel his traps when I run my hands down his neck and back, and his whole body feels like it is barely being contained in this tight shirt. 

I slip my tongue into his mouth, and he sucks at it gently, making me moan out and my cock wake up. His other hand goes to my waist and pulls him yet closer into him, until my chest is touching his. 

“You taste so good” He whispers before sucking on my bottom lip again. His hand grabs my butt cheek, amping up my desire for him. My hands frantically go down his shirt, grabbing at his defined chest and abs until I get down to his couch. Just passing my hand briefly in front of his tight pants, I can feel that he’s getting hard too. 

Louis breaks up our kiss briefly and quickly steals a look around the parking lot. Seeing that there’s no one around, he unbuttons his pants and pulls down the fly. Looking around one more time, he turns his head back to me and smiles, before grabbing my right hand and putting it where his fly is open. I pull at the waistband of his briefs with one hand, and with the other, I shove my hand down into his hot crotch. 

Feeling around his trimmed bush, I grab the base of his cock and give it a couple squeezes and pull it so the head faces upwards. In its new position, his cock grows rapidly in my grip, and Louis kisses me more passionately as I squeeze the base again. 

“I’ve been thinking about last night all day” He says into my mouth “You feel so amazing to be in…” His left hand grabs my ass hard and I moan into him. 

Distant laughter and chatting makes us stop making out, and I look past him to see a bunch of people come out of the bowling alley. Louis stays still, with his back facing the building. I step back a bit and straighten out my jacket while looking down at my feet. 

“Look Jay” I look up at Louis’ face and he looks down at his crotch with his lower lip jutting out. I look down and the tip of his hard cock popping out over his brief’s waistband. I giggle at the sight, and Louis laughs too as the group of people wander further away to their car. 

"Let’s get in?” He nods towards the car and I nod back. Louis forces his pants back closed over his giant dick with a grimace of discomfort and backs up, opening the door for me again. I get in and he closes the door gently. 

My cock aches in my pants as my cheeks warm up from being out in the cold air. I am too turned on at the moment to think clearly, and as soon as Louis gets in the car, I launch myself at him again. He kisses me a couple more times before pulling back. 

“Hold on… let’s go back to my place first”

I can’t wait that long. 

I’ve also been thinking about last night a lot. About how his long shaft pierced through me until I felt it in the core of my body. About how he fucked me while I was on top of him and my cock slide on his abs until I exploded all over them. 

About how I jammed his cock back into my ass just as he was about to cum and the way he writhed at that sensation of breeding me.

I tug at his elbow as he ignites the car, giving a little whine. He looks over and makes direct eye contact at him, and I stare into his brown eyes. 

“It’s just 10 minutes away Jay” 

I shake my head at him, and continue to stare into his eyes, mentally trying to tell him how much I need it right now. I pull on his elbow again with a little insistence. 

He stares at me for a couple more seconds before saying “Okay”. He drives us to the far corner of the parking lot, where there are no other cars parked. Louis turns off the ignition and I get out of the car quickly, opening the backseat door and sliding inside. 

Louis walks around the car to the car door I left open, and finds me already unbuttoning my pants. 

“Jesus, Jay” He looks around the parking lot again nervously. “Are you sure?” 

I’m already in the process of sliding my pants down awkwardly in the tight space. Louis chuckles and takes off my shoes for me, placing them on the car mat. He grabs my pants by the ankles and helps me slide them off. My briefs come off just as fast.

"How am I supposed to…” Louis looks around the parking lot again. “…ah fuck it…” He quickly unbuttons his pants, pulling down his pants and briefs in one go. He awkwardly hops on the parking lot concrete as he kicks off his shoes and pulls off his pants. His semi hard cock flops around in the dim parking lot light as he struggles. making me giggle while watching him. 

He’s so cute. 

When he finally succeeds, he throws his shoes and pants on the car mat next to my shoes and comes in, closing the door behind him. He’s much too large for this tight space, and the small space makes him look humongous.

I back up as much as I can, bending my neck when I push against the car door handle and opening my legs for him. He pushes my right leg up and places his leg on the car floor, pushing me even more into my side of the car until he finds a decent angle.

“Oh my god this is impossible” He chuckles as he bangs his head on the roof of the car. I giggle again and pull at the neck of his nice shirt. He comes down and kisses me, and for a moment, our bodies fit perfectly in this space. 

“We have to be fast” He says in between his kisses. I nod while looking closely at his face. He spits into his hand in front of me, and then his hand disappears underneath us. “Is this going to be ok?” 

“I’m a big boy” I reassure him while looking down. Now that the car light has turned off, there’s no way I can see what’s happening. 

But I feel his dick head at my hole

I close my eyes and relax, thinking about how good it will feel once he’s inside me. 

“Oh!” His dickhead penetrates me and he leans his forehead on mine. He moves in and out a bit, enticing my entrance to relax for him. 

“MMmmMMM” I whine out again, remembering again how long he really is. “Oh my god…” I struggle. 

“You ok? Should we stop?” 

NO!

“More spit I think…” With that, his cock disappears from my system, and Louis spits on his hand again, looking downwards while he rubs it onto himself. His well coiffed hair is coming apart and tickles my face as he moves his head. 

“OHhhhh” His wet cock enters me again, this time going much smoother in. “OhhhhhHHH” I grip onto his body while he pierces through me. OhhhHh jesus he’s big.

“Oh fuck….” He sighs as he slides into me. He pauses about half way and sucks on my lower lips. 

“No…. more… all the way…” I groan out and he slides himself deeper…

and deeper…

…and deeper…

…and deeper..

“OhhhhhHHh” We moan out at simultaneously as he plugs me up balls deep. My body sends me alarm signs at how deep he’s penetrating me, and I whine with every minuscule movement he makes. I grip at his neck as he replants his foot, which pushes me further in the car door. 

“You ok?” He asks again, looking at my awkward position

“Just …fuck… me” I strain out with my neck bent from being pressed up tightly.

Louis takes himself half out of me and thrusts back forcefully, making me moan out loudly both in pleasure and pain. I spread my legs wider, putting my left foot through the middle of the empty space between the front two seats and hooking my leg into the empty passenger seat. 

“Fuck that’s hot” Louis clenches his jaw and begins to fuck me at a steady rhythm, making me moan loudly in repetition in the enclosed space. 

“We have to be fast” Louis reminds me in grunts as he fucks harder. 

“Then breed me already!” I groan out, grabbing my rock solid cock and losing myself at his impacts. My head knocks repeatedly into the car door, making me feel lightheaded with his long shaft piercing impossibly deep into me. 

“Alright…” Louis places his hand above my head, curling his fingers into the window sill. 

“Ah!” His pumps get rougher. More determined. 

“Ah!..Ah!…Ah!” I grunt out in pleasure at his rhythmic pushes into me. FINALLY. Now he gets what I’m craving. He pounds at my hole, for the sole purpose of releasing his seed into me. 

Just what I fucking need

“I’m close..” He grunts out with a tight jaw. The inside of the car is heating up with our breaths and even in the dim light I can see the dark wet spots of his pit stains through the dark blue shirt. 

“Breed me Louis…” I shout out, and I watch him swallow his breath when I say his name. “I want it Louis…Give it to me Louis…”

“Oh fuck I’m cumming..”

"Give it to me Louis” I cry out, jerking myself furiously. I can’t let myself go yet. 

Not yet

"Ah…AHh..A…AHHH” His pumps get erratically fast, pushing me painfully into the car door. 

But I don’t care

I 

don’t

FUCKING

CARE!

He collapses onto me with his sweaty hot body, breathing heavily and still grinding deep inside me. I rub his back with both hands, letting go of my needy cock as he finishes unloading into me. 

With a groan, he gets back up, hitting his head on the roof to the car again.

“God damn it” He grimaces and rubs his head. He spits into his hand again and this time grips my rock hard cock.

“OH!” I shout out. From this angle, he looks like a muscle god, lit up by the dim light outside. I follow his beautifully sculpted arms from the clothed shoulder to his elbow to his strong hand that’s on my cock.

“Ohhh fuck..” He says as I explode while on my back, thrashing so much in the tight space that his softening cock slips out of my hole. He strokes me through my orgasm as I writhe and pant and shout in the car, cumming freely into the air.

“That’s hot” He grins down at me as I calm down. I look up at him sheepishly, embarrassed with how loud I was. 

“Look” He points at the window on top of me. I look up but can’t see much from my stuck position. Louis reaches out with a hand and scoops with his fingers, showing me my cum. 

"Sorry” I say, feeling around the back of my car with my hand. Everything is wet. 

"Don't be” He shrugs.