[MGE] Chapter 94 – I Didn't Want This
Added 2026-01-21 07:00:08 +0000 UTCComments
Cee didn't know whether she had done what Liora did, even if it was necessary. had -> could have || would have
Gus N
2026-01-21 16:56:37 +0000 UTC"This thing didn't seem to have the same kind of willpower as the badger who had held the corruption at bay much more consistently." I was under the impression that this was written third person limited, with Cee's perspective in this case, so this made it sound like Cee was actually present during the fight with the badger, not sure if that was intentional or what.
Matthias
2026-01-21 09:33:27 +0000 UTCtypo patrol reporting in ;) "She deliberately landed near Morgona" - Morgana "the Pillar of Azure Helm would have a clear line of shot." i think the usual phrasing there would be either "line of sight" or "line of fire" - at least i havent heard usage of "line of shot" before "The blast that came from the was so strong," - them is missing its "m" thanks for your work and i concur with nutelya - SHINY! also that was a wonderful moment between morgana and liora - it really humanizes both of them a lot... morgana previously mostly showed her ruthless fighter side and this shows another side of her - an instinctual care for life (though some of that shimmered through when she decided to share the sharksteaks with what was obviously monsters) and it strongly displays the humanity inside the non-human form of liora no clue if ive said something along these lines before, but you are a great character writer =)
Sharien Radaik
2026-01-21 08:46:26 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Michael Zinkstein
2026-01-21 08:16:50 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Wensber
2026-01-21 07:22:09 +0000 UTCShiny detected?!
Nutelya
2026-01-21 07:02:03 +0000 UTC
