Constant in All Other Things 3, Chapter 02
Added 2024-05-12 19:24:41 +0000 UTCWith the decision to shift Julia's story to cha
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Thank you! Frightening to think how long ago it was that I wrote that scene. But that's pretty much it for Book 1 - a little kissing or petting here and there, but nothing that explicit beyond that scene. A few short flashbacks, maybe. Book 2 ramps it up a bit, but again its mostly just kissing until the Clinic, and then the stuff with Dan and Chad; also the memory of Julia and Tom. But in Book 3, in two chapters, we've had Jonas, Mr Connor and Julia... while I think it's valid, plot-wise in terms of establishing new milestones, I do worry it's a little over the top...
David Sanders
2024-05-20 11:24:42 +0000 UTCBook 1 had chapter 5, which is one of the best TG 'sex' scenes in history in my humble... The back and forth between David mode and Cindy mode is really well done in this chapter, both with Michael and Julia.
Asklepios
2024-05-20 10:32:53 +0000 UTCThank you! I'm fairly pleased with how this one turned out. Though I worry I'm skewing a little too heavily towards the smutty side of the story. Considering the first book barely had any sex in it at all, the end of book 2 and start of book 3 has definitely upped the age rating.
David Sanders
2024-05-14 05:18:17 +0000 UTCThank you for the kind words! I worry that releasing bits in fragments sort of ruins the story for people - glad there's still an impact when it comes together as a whole. As for the wait - I'll write as quickly as I can (and work allows)! I'm looking forward to writing out the next part, so I'm quite keen to get there, too.
David Sanders
2024-05-14 05:16:54 +0000 UTCIt's really good - some of your best.
Asklepios
2024-05-13 18:06:00 +0000 UTCRead it through once so far. Great stuff once again. It's always a treat when you stitch the composite parts you have shared into a whole chapter (or part thereof ). Some of what seem like discordant notes in individual scenes become tuneful in their right position. Like the final confrontation in this part that seemed jarring on its own, but has a natural eruption in it's proper context. It's a cathartic ripping off the bandage moment for David (because in that last scene it's David that's the loudest, not Cindy.) with the recriminations and anger. The persona of Cindy felt almost discarded for the time being. Very raw, even though at the back of my mind I do know that David is trying to achieve something I'm still not privy to. Can't wait for the next part. Well OK, I will wait because I have to and because that's the way time works. But it will be a minor discomfort, rest assured.
Julia
2024-05-13 07:22:44 +0000 UTC
