Sneak Peek: Chapter 4 (revised)
Added 2024-04-03 09:00:41 +0000 UTCI'm calling this a "sneak peek" instead of a "p
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Ah, found them! Fixed Suddenly, and two Sanders. Also tweaks to end of chapter; extra scene incoming!
David Sanders
2024-04-04 12:02:32 +0000 UTCYou are right to be proud of it.... I remember reading this the first time around and being blown away by it. I did notice one Sanders that got through and I think that at the end of the second paragraph you use 'suddenly' when perhaps 'sudden' is the word...
Asklepios
2024-04-04 10:54:50 +0000 UTC
