Final Draft: Interlude (3/3)
Added 2023-12-24 07:39:36 +0000 UTCStruggling a bit to find free time to write ove
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Great read. It's really odd to read the completed full draft after reading various parts on their own. Sort of like Dr Frankenstein displaying his assorted parts before stitching them together to make the beautiful bride complete with the striking white streak. She's Alive! (and she's beautiful and more than a little sexy too.) Typo wise I could barely find any this time. A single part somewhere in there with two words joined together, a result of the 'formatting meets italics', but I failed to take note of it this time sorry. No real improvement notes for you either, the story holds together, flows well and brings us to a lovely multiple cliff hanger in which to hand the next chapter. Many congratulations on getting to the end of the interlude and you deserve a well earned break. Thank you so much for your efforts on keeping Constant alive and kicking... So looking forward to where it goes from here, but I'll just have be be patient for now.
Julia
2023-12-26 09:16:45 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas!
David Sanders
2023-12-24 19:56:41 +0000 UTCNice Christmas gift!
Carmons58
2023-12-24 16:36:59 +0000 UTC
