QUESTION
Added 2018-10-02 16:51:27 +0000 UTCHere's wip of the script for the upcoming comic
1 Jud calls him “Can you help with testing new anti-pred weapon”
2 He says yes
3 He comes in the room but it’s dark
4 Jud flicks the lights on
5 Sprays him with the thing
6 He srinks.
7 He srinks.
8 He srinks.
9 Looks at dat big jud
10 Confused nicks face
11 Devilish judy’s face
1 She pins him under her paw
2 Nick starts hugging her paw
3 She pins him half way
4 Reaches down to pick him up
5 Jud stares at him while he's dangling
6 Dangling nick above her maw
7 Drop
8 Nick in her maw
9 Closer to the throat
10 Swallow
11 Belle
So, do you wanna see setup for the main event or wanna see more on the second page?
It's more question for the future comics coz i can do more vore stuffs instead of setting up of the main event or you wanna see that setup
Comments
Ooo, thanks, very interesting answer! You right about getting shrunk thing, i was a bit too obsessed with explaining why character is small when thinkin of comic ideas.
Forshu
2018-10-02 20:06:36 +0000 UTCOhhhhh tough choice. Sometimes the setup is very good to have as it adds more detail to what's happening but just getting to the point and getting more vore is good too. I think I like the setup. You do various 1 pic vore pieces that are already great and I've absolutely loved the few comics you've done already because of the high detail. The setup also adds to the anticipation and allows you to break up the vore with some different things, like paws on this comic. Sure, vore is the best, but trying out new scenarios beforehand & having her playing 1st is very cute & devilish which makes the vore scenes on page 2 even more exciting! So in short I vote for keeping the setups for comics but may be nice to sometimes add a comic with more vore and mouth play (like suckng Nick or a mouse like a sweet in her mouth for the whole day or something). =) Edit: I forgot to mention, regarding shrunk characters, I think it's fine not having to set up why they are shrunk. Thinking of different ways will be annoying for you so just starting with shrunk characters as already shrunk is fine. That way you can focus more on the play and lead up to the vore, etc =D
Watts
2018-10-02 17:22:17 +0000 UTC
