Script idea with Lisa Simpsons

SCRIP: THE SIMPSONS                                            Created by FUCKTOONTV

Title: The adventure begins ( I think I have to create a better title, but this is it for now. )

Charaters

Lisa Simpson

Professor Frink

Reference Girl Scout Uniform

Initial idea:

Professor Frink is in his laboratory in the basement of his house, he just created a new invention (a weapon laser) but he doesn't know what it is for.

On your invention table is an apple

Detail: your laces are always loosening

Frink - Damn shoelaces, they are always coming loose, I need to invent something to prevent them from coming loose, I can trip at any moment and fall.

When Frink goes to test his leisure weapon on the apple he hears the bell, then Lisa Simpson in the doorway, wearing Girl Scout uniform selling cookies.

Frink is happy to see Lisa Simpson and invites her to be a witness to her new invention

Frink - Hi Lisa !! I am happy to see you there ... you arrived at a great time to witness my new invention.

Lisa S. - And what is it?

Frink - Well, I don't know yet, but come on, let's test it.

Lisa S. - Alright! But I need you to buy some cookies after that !!

Frink - OKAY !!

Back to the lab (detail on the laces loose) Frink and Lisa Simpson are in front of the table

Frink - Look at this Lisa !!

Lisa S. - Wow a leisure weapon! What are you going to do with that Professor? "

Frink aims to arm the apple and firing a lightning bolt (green, or blue) ZAP, the apple on the table begins to swing sideways and begins to deform, when suddenly it expands to be the size of a watermelon (or larger than that)

Lisa is amazed

Frink jumps for joy (shoelaces loose) and with the gun in his hand

Frink - Look little Lisa, what a wonderful thing ... you know what that means, first thing, world hunger will be extinguished and the second thing, I will win the Nobel Prize this year HA HA HA HA ...!

Lisa Simpson is very happy her eyes shine

Lisa S. - What a wonderful thing, Professor !!

Frink steps on his shoelaces loose and hits his chin on the floor (CRASH) his tongue sticks out and blood comes out of his nose

Lisa Simpson is scared in a little while, then looks around and steals the laser weapon that is lying on the floor

At home, in the bedroom, Lisa has her laser weapon on the bed, a big shadow of lisa laughing on the wall

Lisa S. - HA HA HA !! now i will be the big winner of the Nobel and will end hunger in the world BWA HA HA HA !!

Marge Simpson appears at the door of Lisa's room wearing a black dress glued to her body and her breasts protruding from her neckline

Marge S. - Lisa! Tonight your father and I are going out to dinner, what do you think of this dress?

Lisa's wide eyes looking into Marge's, highlighted in Marge's breasts popping out of the cleavage

Lisa S.- thought: what beautiful big tits, i want to have them for me

Marge S. - And then Lisa, what do you think of the dress

Lisa S. - Yes mom! he is very beautiful

Marge S. - Thanks Lisa! Bart is at Milhouse's house and Maggie is with her aunts ... weighs a pizza, the money is on the table.

Everyone left, only Lisa is home

Lisa imagines herself with Marge's breasts and school boys looking at her.

Zoom on the laser weapon on the bed

Zoom in on Lisa's faces with a sarcastic face

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For this comic, I want it to be between 6 pages (minimum) or 8 pages (maximum), a continuation story but all stories have their end closed, every edition is a new story (adventure) beginning, middle and end.

Can we tell a good story that way?