Arc 4 completed!
Added 2018-07-10 21:53:36 +0000 UTCThank you for all of your support , we did it!
I am going to just quickly edit and clean up some mistakes and typos and then upload you guys the complete arc including these pages I posted just last week!
I have started Arc 5 and it is fully written and slated to be another 70 pages with a return of our favourite hood rat GG making centre stage.
I want your review of 5C!
Please use this post as a place to voice your like or comment on various aspects of the story thus far!
Comments
Really appreciate that!
Omar Dogan
2018-07-11 18:54:37 +0000 UTCYou miss someone more when she's gone. Now you guys will be treated with GG.
Omar Dogan
2018-07-11 18:54:26 +0000 UTCWhile I feel like there is still a lot of story to go, absolutely nothing feels out of place, such is the detail poured into the world building and characters backstory. Arc needed more GG, shes the best
Klonder
2018-07-11 00:31:41 +0000 UTCMan, this arc was goooood! Way to go Omar! Congrats on it's completion. It all ended very strong, with some incredibly satisfying points to leave us with. Now, the only bummer is waiting for more. I very much enjoyed the aspect of leaving Jess and GG (though they are among my favorites) scarce in this arc to really focus in on what was happening in the world and current time without having us get distracted by all the characters being active at once. This was able to give us a very strong case for liking Laleh and understanding her character, her wants, fears and overall goals. I for one love Laleh as a character and can't wait to see more of her, but the ending is a great cliffhanger to want to know what is going to happen back with these other characters that we already know about. I know you always say that you are no writer, but this IS writing and I very much enjoy it! It has focus, progression, pacing and (probably most importantly) clarity! As always, I will patiently wait for it's return and I will see you all the way to the end of the road! And I feel like mentioning this too, if you need any extra prayers moving forward, just let us know, Omar. Keep it Badman and follow the Law... Java Law.
Andrew Fleming
2018-07-10 23:51:37 +0000 UTC
