Slight change okay?
Added 2018-05-23 04:31:46 +0000 UTCOne thing i don't like is when people call the story, but it's hard not to do that if i put pages up in such long intervals. So to remedy that I will do this!:
Many scenes I can splits into 4's and 3's , so tomorrow i will post a bunch of pages!
If I feel the story would be better all in one shot, like a 10 page burst, then I will do that!
Thanks again guys! Tomorrow I will have more for you! I am getting used to the Ramadan schedule as its almost day 7 for me!
I am also on page 67, I only have 4 more pages and Arc 4 is done!
Comments
Once again you're here to calm the nerves haha.
Omar Dogan
2018-05-23 16:21:24 +0000 UTCOmar, unless you are just spewing random things, some people will be able to guess what happens next. A story is usually told because it has a purpose, an "arc" that leads to somewhere, and inevitably as the audience learns more information and get to know your characters, they'll be able to predict how they will react to situations and what the effects will be. This does not mean you are telling a bad story or have fallen into any tropes - it is simply human nature. There is a reason a "plot twist" is an often used device. Don't change your story to try and throw off those that predicted, as that becomes risky. Not only is that giving up the reins of your world to others, but it can break up the flow and have it become jilted as characters react in ways that don't make sense, cause contradictions, or any number of things when a story escapes a carefully crafted path. Personally I don't think you've fallen into any traps in your story. The world is yours, and I love all of your characters. I haven't backed 5C since day 1 of Patreon just because I think the art is pretty. ;)
Shawn
2018-05-23 08:19:09 +0000 UTCI'm 100% sure I mispelled manouver hahah, I was in a rush!
Omar Dogan
2018-05-23 04:32:44 +0000 UTC
