How was it?
Added 2017-11-04 03:26:09 +0000 UTCI don't know how many of you have read it, but I really hope it was enjoyable! I know you have been watching this whole thing culminate over time!
I get kind of torn between doing it on patreon and trying to do it on Gumroad. If I do it on Gumroad in like one shot I get more of a bang factor, but here on Patreon it's a really slow unravel.
Anyways, please let me know ! I need your support and well wishing!
I have almost all the pages for january done, and regardless I will finish this book!
Comments
Laleh is quickly climbing the ranks of my favorites, but even if she somehow miraculously passed GG in awesomeness, still TeamGG all the way. <3
Shawn
2017-11-06 06:11:53 +0000 UTCI loved this last arc. You tied in the backstory of Izan and Grad very nicely, and the art throughout was amazing as always. The cascade of events for the night out was Anime Romantic Comedy level of silly, but I like silly. Though it does lift the tone from a more serious slice of life towards a romantic comedy. Curious as to whether that will continue or what direction you'll go. 5c from Girl7 leaned more on the action/mystery side, and I've been expecting it to twist that direction for a while now. :p I've also loved every single character you've introduced so far! Though still don't know if Laura is a genuine lady and it was truly a comedic cascade or if she's a conniving capital B... think Arc 4 will answer that. ;) I have not gone through the comic looking for grammatical errors, but did come across a more obvious one on page 77 when Grad is looking at his dirty hand. "And here I thought I was done work for the week." should be "And here I thought I was done with work for the week."
Shawn
2017-11-06 06:10:13 +0000 UTCFinally got round to having a re-read of the whole arc and on to the new pages :) Nice wrap up to the section! The pacing of the cuts to Laleh made a lot more sense when reading the whole thing too. There are some really cool bits in this arc, I think mostly all the little tangents to the main story - the thread of the night out is a kinda far-fetched comedy of errors, and then with that as a vehicle we get the insights into Grad and Izan's past, and my favourite scene where GG and Jess are talking :) Second favourite scene is where Laleh is letting her hair down and talking to herself. Good job she's not in the running and I can still remain firmly #TeamGG ;)
Ed Jacob-Moffatt
2017-11-05 23:28:44 +0000 UTC
