Are you about ready to cum when the video gets to that section?
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I think that's one of the parts you could work on, it lines up alright but, in my opinion, the bigger issue is that it's way too short. It just happens and then the video is instantly over. Celebrate it a bit more by setting more time for the countdowns, dragging out the climax itself and/or basking a bit in the afterglow.
I hope my feedback is helpful!
