November feedback~
Added 2021-11-29 16:34:17 +0000 UTCHi it's Kyomu here (^･ω･^=)~
It's a rough month for me since i got sick abit for a week but everything are fine now. At this month i do learn some new technique and apply to the works, do it looks better ? I hope so. I ll try my best to improve more, you can count on me.
For this month there are no extra works since my commissions recently are private, i do want to show to my fans but i can't, sorry about that.
Back to the topic
I would like to hear you guys 's opinion about my works (things that you want to see, to see more and what i need to improve to become a better artist ...). You can answer this post or private message me, that would help alot.
If you are an japanese feel free to send me a feedback also, i ll try my best to understand via translator.
Thank you so much for the supports, hope to see you guys around next month. (^･ω･^)/
Comments
I think your work continues to improve with each illustration you release. There is very significant increase in quality since I first contacted you, and where you are at right now. It's honestly impressive. In regards to what I would like to see, personally, I still stick by my last statement. Wholesome/vanilla content in general. And if possible, Mayuri from Steins;Gate would be nice to see in your style. Lastly, in regards to what I would say you need to improve. Possibly perspective on certain poses. It may be a personal thing, but specifically on certain POV poses, like the cowgirl position from the males POV feels like it's a bit too close to the character. And I don't mean to say that it should be pulled all the way back to the male characters chest (though maybe you should test that sometime just to see), but I feel like there should be no problem getting the full character in the scene. All that aside, I would like to reiterate again, that you are a very talented artist. And I look forward to working with you, and watching you grow as an artist. Have a very nice day. P.S. You've also improved significantly with getting character proportions accurately. That was the one thing I brought up during the last Q&A I responded to, and I can confirm you've done well since. Great job!
Speedwagon
2021-11-29 18:12:54 +0000 UTC
