LiL's 1 Year Anniversary, and a Special Treat!
Added 2020-10-28 02:25:14 +0000 UTCOn 10/28/19 I released the first (very small) teaser of Lost in Laminate. Now, a year later, it is over 400,000 words and nearly completed. So what's next? Well, here is a special sneak peek...
Attached to this post you should find a teaser version of Laminate Calling, a potential successor to Lost in Laminate. Featuring incremental clothing tracking, perks, a male start, and all the benefits of my greater experience in Twine, try it out and get a taste of what's to come!
Comments
I love Lost in Laminate and it looks like Laminate Calling won't be any different. It looks great so far and I can't wait to see more interactions with the NPCs,
Jacob
2020-11-04 00:18:10 +0000 UTCjust played it loved what i saw please do make it
2020-11-01 03:24:41 +0000 UTCi ust want to say this new one is very good i like it a lot more ! please continue that way !
Alex Delmon
2020-10-30 22:03:03 +0000 UTCGreat feedback! I do very much intend to give it a dedicated scene when the player sticks it in their room.
GlossandGlamour
2020-10-29 04:51:33 +0000 UTCFixed! I had to launch this one without the normal bug-testing because it was secret. Gland you've enjoyed!
GlossandGlamour
2020-10-29 04:50:16 +0000 UTCFound an error message: I can't (go-to:) the passage 'indentured collar' because it doesn't exist.► I tried to use a macro, but its call wasn't written correctly.
Hazel
2020-10-29 02:23:51 +0000 UTCAnd it looks like this so the feed doesn't get too cluttered.
Hazel
2020-10-29 01:03:48 +0000 UTCLove what there is so far, you definitely took what was already really good in LiL and capitalized on that. Can't wait for more! Also there is a reply button under each comment here on patreon. Use that so that the person you're replying to gets a notification.
Hazel
2020-10-29 01:02:12 +0000 UTCFeedback: I think that what you have here is pretty decent. My major feedback piece is that you need to give the player more reason to give a shit about the box. It's meant to be a macguffin, but the player has no reason to be invested in it itself. Advice: Give the introduction of the box it's own segment. It should be fairly dramatic, and something likely to stick in the player's brain. Thus increasing their curiousity to it.
Blue Cabaret
2020-10-28 20:16:48 +0000 UTC
