Passiontail Isle 01 - Page 17

I love this page layout, especially the cut away internal at the bottom

Caniquine

It's mist! She's been doing it occasionally the whole comic.

InsomniacOvrLrd

what's up with her smoking trachea ??

ben 999

Kinda hoping he goes into the other hole

N1GHTFURY

It does sound pretty fun~ I'll keep it in mind down the road

InsomniacOvrLrd

I mean the only angle on character-in-character stuff i'm interested in portraying is a fun, strange sex act. It's one of a bunch of ways for wildly different characters to still make it work, and it doesn't hurt that there are a lot of really interesting, unusual locales to show it off in~ I'm glad you like it!

InsomniacOvrLrd

I think it really speaks to your abilities as a visual storyteller when you're able to take something as predacious as mawplay and consistently make it feel like an intimate interaction that's not forced or out of place. Truly spectacular.

Alpheus

Lol can totally see Pelagice thinking something like Pelagice: "You know, for a little guy, he's really good at turning me on~" Pockoon: Ooh!~ You really like this hm?~ Pelagice: *realizes she used telepathy* "I-I er... umm..." >//<; lol some fun interaction X3

Viro Veteruscy

She really lucked out in the anatomy / ability department. Most creatures designed to inhabit the ocean don't get such a good deal on land!

InsomniacOvrLrd

Lucky her, having both physical AND psychic appendages with which to attend herself these days.

Commander672

Thank you very much! I'm really happy with that panel, and internals are always the best part, imo. Glad to be working on a subject that needs so many of them <3

InsomniacOvrLrd

Thanks! Personally i can't wait for the panel where she pops him into it with one of her fingers, but there are a a few other quivering, slimy cavities he ought to explore! Not sure what i'lll get to first, honestly. And i figure she's worked up and breathing a bit of fog, and i wanted to really hammer in the trachea / soft palate / esophagus layout, for the scene coming up. seemed like a good way to do everything at once!

InsomniacOvrLrd

It really has been too long since there was someone in that thing~

InsomniacOvrLrd

Bro I love how tight you made her cloaca look. But that 3/4th X-ray panel is so hot and well done! I absolutely love the airy mist effect you gave for her larynx!

Scarletmenace

This is fantastic! I love the internal, but I also really love that shot of her cloaca.

NimbleLatios

really glad you like it, shik! I'm a sucker for internals, and the sort of diagramatic view here will help a lot with understanding what exactly is going on in the last scene~ And yeah! the hand flippers really do come in handy

InsomniacOvrLrd

Thank you! She's ice/magic, which explains the telepathy/telekinesis and the fog breath. And yeah, presumably she slips up occasionally. I'm not exactly sure how the telepathy works, though. I'll have to ask!

InsomniacOvrLrd

god damn, those effects on the internal slay me and really sells the feeling in the picture <3 having big hands is such a good help for her too :D

Shikka

Nice internal shot, I like the detail in the back that shows she may be able to use an elemental attack (which she's likely able to since she's based on Lapras). Also wonder if there are moments when she gets her telepathy and actual thoughts mixed up and says something through telepathy instead X3

Viro Veteruscy

holy fuck the way those last 2 panels transition, that's insanely good and hot<333 and all the steamy stuff looks so natural, idk how you did it but you really captured what it should look like, amazing stuff as always~

Gum-k

I'm glad you like it, because we're getting a MUCH closer look pretty soon~

InsomniacOvrLrd

That last panel, oh my heavens. It's just... It's fucking fantastic. I don't know how give better praise than this.

Jonathan Cardoso Mota

Your welcome ^w^ you do a great job with your pics~ And that means 11 more Pages to watch and be excited for! &gt;w&lt;

JayMihay

it's 28 (29 if you count the cover page)~ I'm glad you're having a good time with it! i'm really happy that the reception to this content has been so positive.

InsomniacOvrLrd

I already said how much i love this comic but i can´t say it enough /)OwO(\ Is there any idea what number of Pages the final comic will have?~

JayMihay

Thanks man~!

InsomniacOvrLrd

surely there's some way it could be better, but i'm pretty content with how this came out

InsomniacOvrLrd

I'm into it lol. Thank you!

InsomniacOvrLrd

They're my favorite part~! Thank you, i'm glad you're enjoying it.

InsomniacOvrLrd

So unfortunately the only way to truly sell this kind of situation is with animation, and audio. I do my best to render it in stills, but there's only so far the sfx can carry things. I would love to spend some time on an animation, but it would definitely take up Comic Time, so i'm not sure if people would be down. Maybe between main comics?

InsomniacOvrLrd

No, me first lol. but then, maybe!

InsomniacOvrLrd

I really like how it came out, thank you!

InsomniacOvrLrd

Really nice composition, indeed ! ✨

tohjoma

9000/10 could not turn out better.

Suirodnemsa

Yo panel 3/4 are rad as fuck man!

Unshao

Gosh, your internal shots are gorgeous. Keep it up!

Kuroodo'd

Fantastic work as always! I love the little details you made to the internal anatomy, such as the breath and heartbeats, very nice touch to give that living feel. Very much looking forward to the next couple pages, keep it up and I hope you have been doing well all around!

Rider

Get me in there next! XD

Nividust

The xray transition is an amazing touch!!!