“Cassie’s Frenzy Playground” Comic WIP (pages 19-21)
Added 2024-02-18 04:11:34 +0000 UTC
Comments
It'll be worked on, but scheduling and some changes will be made.
LuziA
2025-03-03 17:56:07 +0000 UTCI would for this comic series to be colored and more pages. Or is it just discontinued?
ItzCk03
2025-03-03 17:23:10 +0000 UTCThanks for your feedback. As you can see it’s basically a full conversation for the first page. They’ll be discussing something through the walkie talkie. As it isn’t shown in the sketch, it would definitely be shown on the final page. Same thing with Vanny’s face expression on page two as well as with page one of her on top of Gregory. Oh and she’s not on a wall but on a computer chair.
LuziA
2024-02-18 09:50:15 +0000 UTCThese drawings are pretty good, especially the last page but there are a few things that I would critique. The first page seems to have a random panel of Cassie getting plowed at the bottom which makes the transition to the next page out of place as Gregory somehow pinned Vanny from behind. Some giggle affects of Vanny's cheeks on the first page top left would also help to show her riding Gregory's dong instead of just sitting on it. The last critique is Vanny's weird face on the second page top that looks like her face is against a wall but the panel doesn't show any wall of any sorts.
Mike
2024-02-18 09:45:39 +0000 UTC
