ADA Comic WIP 17
Added 2017-11-24 06:21:26 +0000 UTCSome people just sparkle.
They can't replace the sun, though, so eat your vitamins.
I am absolutely terrible at pacing dialogue from my scripts into panels. Always ending up adding tons or deleting full paragraphs. And sometimes the art in a panel requires different phrasing.
Have to admit it's kinda fun, though... But it's a creative process that takes a bit too long at times.
Comments
"Cheers for giving it your all....aye" Sorry the Canadian in me couldn't resist reading it that way lol. I know it's been out for a while but love the script and the characters can't wait for the comic
Gavrial
2017-12-22 20:23:53 +0000 UTCUNLIMITED SHINY MOE, WE MUST HARNESS IT FOR GOOD!
Mason Dunne
2017-11-25 11:40:05 +0000 UTCMaybe I'll share script snippets at some point? :3
Hushabye Valley
2017-11-25 04:47:26 +0000 UTCVitamins. :3 They live underground 24/7, so there's no sun for healthy living.
Hushabye Valley
2017-11-25 00:48:34 +0000 UTCAre they taking vitamins or taking antibiotics to work with alien artifacts?
2017-11-25 00:47:22 +0000 UTCPraise the sun
2017-11-24 16:25:07 +0000 UTCTheir faces are getting cuter and cuter aaaaaaa~
Fran Love
2017-11-24 16:16:06 +0000 UTCAh! She emits light and blinds people....now I HAVE to hire her~ XD but yeah, crafting dialog is just as much of an art imo, there's this natural birth, rhythm, and death to conversation that can be tricky especially when factoring in the voice of a character. I dunno what your scripts look like, or how much you add or cut, but the end result is great, so +10!! :3
Bianca
2017-11-24 16:09:43 +0000 UTCHaha
The happy spartan.
2017-11-24 07:44:33 +0000 UTCIf only I could be so grossly incandescent... (she's just too cute <3)
Inujimma
2017-11-24 06:39:31 +0000 UTCSo far, I think your dialogue is pretty good, though. Also, put Angel with her sparkling in the doctor's room. The shining light helps people get their energy in the morning. I am sure there will be an arrangement that could benefit all involved.
ArcBlue117
2017-11-24 06:36:24 +0000 UTCI loved it! :3
PlatyShroom
2017-11-24 06:22:16 +0000 UTC
