Dimetrius 63?!
Added 2023-05-08 10:59:07 +0000 UTCLet me know if there're mistakes in the text.
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it's a callidus assassin XD (BEST Assassins! XD)
PhilosoShy
2023-05-14 23:07:46 +0000 UTCok, thanks
Flick
2023-05-11 09:17:04 +0000 UTCIt makes me feel presumptuous to dare to suggest anything about the comic, but it specifically asks in the tagline so I actually have a text suggestion for panel one. "Didn't Dimetrius come into his cell five minutes ago?" is a logically not incorrect sentence, but it's so formal my brain is finding it confusing and just shrugging and going to the next panel. I could pretend it's High Gothic though! The confusion comes from two sources- the third person reference to Dimetrius (I forgot that's this character's name since I'm still kinda new to the comic) and "come into" instead of "go". Third person use of someone's name as a respectful distancer when you're talking directly to them, making it basically a 2nd person situation, is very rare in English. It's more natural to still use "you", but then add "sir" or "m'lord" at the end to create that distance. Oh! Or 3rd person replacement of the name with "m'lord" also flows naturally. And the phrase "come into his cell" is a little awkward, my instincts are expecting variations of "go" in this case, rather than come. Proposed counter-suggestions: "Um, didn't you just go in there a few minutes ago, sir?" or perhaps "Uh, didn't m'lord just enter his room?" I hope these explanations help!
Shane Wegner
2023-05-11 06:50:01 +0000 UTCWell. looks like he's going to explore his female version))) Great...I hope he'll be ok after this 😊😊
UNDRESS_ME
2023-05-08 18:05:06 +0000 UTCCallidus assassin?!
Duran
2023-05-08 18:03:50 +0000 UTCHooo yeah! Finelly, Callidus Assassin!!
Crowe-le-retour
2023-05-08 15:53:10 +0000 UTCI was wondering when we would get a follow up to Slanneshi Dimetrius. :)
Brandon. A
2023-05-08 13:53:12 +0000 UTCPolymorphine is a hell of a drug, kids! ;)
Chordat
2023-05-08 13:21:45 +0000 UTCEither a Callidus, or some sort of Tzeentch Daemon. Probably a Callidus though.
Malhavoc
2023-05-08 13:18:14 +0000 UTCCallidus assassin? ;)
Clem Barbarossa
2023-05-08 11:05:02 +0000 UTC
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