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Captain Alatrish

and her mercs.

Let me know if there're mistakes in the text.

Captain Alatrish

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Happy to help

The Silver Socialist

Ok, thanks

Flick

I'd go to Donbas for either side if these were the recruiters

native English speakers don't put the word all in front of The Mod. It just hits the ear wrong. It would be much more authentic to say say "the mob'. If you REALLY need to drive home the point that she's referring to every single person in the mob you should say "no one in the mob would dare take a look in your direction" or "No mobster would dare look in your direction". The word mobster is used to refer to a singular individual in the mob.

The Silver Socialist

It should either be "digging up manure" or "shoveling manure" unless the manure is an obstacle between him and a place he's trying to travel to than it doesn't make sense for him to be shoveling "through" manure.

The Silver Socialist

OMG! It looks like this young guy is going to find himself in a real fairy tale very soon)

UNDRESS_ME

Look at this young man! His eyes widened, his face just froze, he seems to be already imagining all this.

NakedAlice

Here's hoping she gives him the ride of his life

FungusAmongUS

My boy is about to have the adventure of a lifetime

Steven Lallamant

I mean, that guy in the back looks happy enough.

LurkerGG

She knows how to win over people. :)

Brandon. A

I'm sure they have nothing but the best intentions for him

Eugenevy


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