Commissars 2
Added 2020-09-18 14:33:32 +0000 UTCOne more scetch about commissar lady and commissar-cadet.
Let me know if there're mistakes in the text.
Comments
This might be my new favourite thing you've made
Outierin
2020-09-19 12:45:17 +0000 UTCnp, you do great work! :)
Chordat
2020-09-18 21:32:17 +0000 UTCOk, thanks
Flick
2020-09-18 19:55:57 +0000 UTCshorthand for "sergeant" is "sarge", not "serg". And "We're in place" would work better as "we're here" or "we made it". Other than that, it's good.
Chordat
2020-09-18 19:49:40 +0000 UTCShe took a good boy as pupil.
Paulus Domitius
2020-09-18 19:28:08 +0000 UTCHaaaa, i was so hoping she ask some warm in her bed ;). But it's so cute :)
Crowe-le-retour
2020-09-18 17:27:23 +0000 UTCNICE! What Service! SUCH LOYALTY! Just makes us want to praise the emperor!
PhilosoShy
2020-09-18 15:40:10 +0000 UTCХмммм прекольно))))))) *продолжаю ждать фемдом в специальном полевом укреплении фетишисткого назначения*
Knorrn
2020-09-18 14:55:09 +0000 UTCThat's how romances starts.
RoosterFish
2020-09-18 14:36:08 +0000 UTC
