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Added 2018-07-06 14:34:13 +0000 UTCAngry videogame daemonette of Slaanesh.
Let me know about mistakes in the text.
Comments
I think you may want to consider having your character say "I fucked your mom" instead of "I fuck your mom!
The Silver Socialist
2018-07-08 07:46:43 +0000 UTCI think you should say "My Monitor! That's the third one this week!"
The Silver Socialist
2018-07-08 07:44:31 +0000 UTCAh, girlfriends
Esper
2018-07-07 18:29:51 +0000 UTCЯ к сожалению, не играл в доту, поэтому решил не шутить про рак на миде, не шаря в сабже)
Flick
2018-07-07 05:17:41 +0000 UTCThanks
Flick
2018-07-07 05:16:09 +0000 UTCThanks!
Flick
2018-07-07 05:16:01 +0000 UTCThanks! Yeah, my English's worst. Could you say where the odd choices and how to fix them?
Flick
2018-07-07 05:15:38 +0000 UTC"third on the week" i think you meant "Third one this week" or "That's the third one this week" but i like the drawing. their are quite a few odd choices in your dialog that betray the fact English is not your first language. you're doing a good job, its just not typical to phrase things like that. no hate, love your art.
2018-07-07 01:25:08 +0000 UTCThat is adorable. XD
Animeplayer
2018-07-06 17:51:56 +0000 UTCРачина! гыгы.
DAHR
2018-07-06 17:16:03 +0000 UTCHeh nice...minor suggestion but "third one this week"
Dr.S.Shenanigans
2018-07-06 14:53:13 +0000 UTCThe simple answer is she needs to pray to Slaanesh for tentacles. They are the multipurpose tool for all situations.
Malhavoc
2018-07-06 14:52:49 +0000 UTC
