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Goblin girl 1

Goblin-chan and some of hobgoblin-chan^^

Let me know about mistakes in the text.

Goblin girl 1

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It would be interesting to see what kind of adventure they would have to go on to get Hummies smart phone back.

The Silver Socialist

Ok, thanks

Flick

"Hummie" should say "That thing won't work for long without a charger" it would sound more natural that way.

The Silver Socialist

I wonder what's going to happen with that smartphone. I bet the goblins are going to have some gremlins reverse engineer it.

The Silver Socialist

Thanks!

Flick

She doesn't mind.

Flick

yes)

Flick

Suggestions, no coma before magical thing. "I thought you liked bondage, but you're just a theif" "Maybe we cannot make such clever mechanism as dwarfs do" "I'll take your gold too!" "Did Mr. Human decide to surprise and comfort the poor widow?" "or, did you run out money and decided to pay me with your body?" "I guess I can give you a discount" "What are those groans coming out of that dupe's room?"

Dr.S.Shenanigans

Was "hummie" going to cheat on Grash?

The Silver Socialist

Not going to point out the grammar, since, I assume, they have eclectic speech and accents.

Hobgoblin-Chan is a cutie, can we see more of her?

Outierin


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