Wardancer's dance
Added 2018-02-07 15:49:29 +0000 UTCHandgunner-chan and Militia-chan captured our wardancer. Previous pict>>
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Flick
2018-02-20 04:27:36 +0000 UTCSo they're reincarnations of the first born-chans?
The Silver Socialist
2018-02-19 22:46:01 +0000 UTCFair enough, whatever works for you. :) -BM
Badgermushroom
2018-02-08 14:13:30 +0000 UTCDifferently. This time I left some space to add some text later.
Flick
2018-02-08 13:27:27 +0000 UTCDo you add the word balloons at the end, or sketch them in earlier? Because if you can add them already at the sketch stage maybe you can avoid the 'no space' problem. (Otherwise your lettering is great - clear font, consistent placement of text within balloon, no overlong or crossed tails, sans-serif "i"s used appropriately. All good!) -BM
Badgermushroom
2018-02-08 13:06:20 +0000 UTCthere was their Vostroyan reincarnation) <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/vostroyan-chans-15736632">https://www.patreon.com/posts/vostroyan-chans-15736632</a>
Flick
2018-02-08 11:00:20 +0000 UTCThanks. Well, maybe. But formally, I try to keep the order of the bubbles (from left to right, from top to bottom). Unfortunately there is not enough space to place them properly(
Flick
2018-02-08 10:52:20 +0000 UTCHmm, actually I would have moved 4. ("I can dance") to the right a bit more, make it more obvious that 3 comes after 2. Well anyway. -BM
Badgermushroom
2018-02-08 08:20:08 +0000 UTCLovely work as always Flick, nice to see you having fun with these characters. Am I the only one that got confused by the word balloon order in the first panel? I read it like this: <a href="https://i.imgur.com/FoAaNlp.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.imgur.com/FoAaNlp.jpg</a> Playing around with the balloons I got a more 'natural' feeling order (i.e. left to right and top to bottom) like this: <a href="https://i.imgur.com/4hw8qBo.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.imgur.com/4hw8qBo.jpg</a> I know I'm overthinking this but I read comics so that goes with the territory. ;) -BM
Badgermushroom
2018-02-08 08:18:14 +0000 UTCI like these 2 new girl characters, particularly the red head with the freckles.
The Silver Socialist
2018-02-08 00:59:59 +0000 UTCYup. Part two, please? Pretty please?
2018-02-07 21:59:38 +0000 UTCHope to see a part 2 of this those girls are hot
Michael Lopez
2018-02-07 16:26:52 +0000 UTC
