Shaman's trial
Added 2017-10-12 13:28:41 +0000 UTCOrks again^^
Let me know about mistakes in text.
Comments
Thanks, I'll fix it
Flick
2017-10-17 07:38:15 +0000 UTCI'm enjoying this series. One note on the dialogue, though. After "Oh, Gruumshia, Mother of Orcs, it should be "Does this humie deserve to unite..." or "Is this humie deserving of uniting..."
Simiusmagnus
2017-10-17 05:58:53 +0000 UTCYeah, that would be right. And "Regarding the last point" sounds strangely formal, especially considering they're fucking. Just something like "Aren't you getting a little ahead of yourself?" would work well there.
Simiusmagnus
2017-10-17 05:54:36 +0000 UTCThanks!
Flick
2017-10-14 05:27:36 +0000 UTCI love These orcs :O
2017-10-13 23:20:08 +0000 UTCmay be. It supposed to be idiom means she is ahead of events with talk about offspring. But I'm not sure if it's right in english.
Flick
2017-10-13 05:23:18 +0000 UTCThanks!
Flick
2017-10-13 05:16:32 +0000 UTCDid you mean to "you are getting a little ahead of yourself"?
The Silver Socialist
2017-10-12 16:59:26 +0000 UTCSuperb art!
Brian
2017-10-12 15:58:03 +0000 UTCOrc GF cleared the Elf with him right?
That black guy
2017-10-12 13:39:08 +0000 UTC
