Squirrel Girl p.2
Added 2016-09-14 13:07:23 +0000 UTCEvents occur after "the Unbeatable Squirrel girl" #1.
Let me know about mistakes in text.
Comments
Ok, thanks
Flick
2016-09-15 06:51:57 +0000 UTCThanks
Flick
2016-09-15 06:51:46 +0000 UTCPanel 3 should say roommate.
Spadiel
2016-09-15 05:23:12 +0000 UTCMaybe "You sent me on the hunt" instead of "You sent me to the hunt"
William Ambervein
2016-09-15 00:02:40 +0000 UTCThanks, fixed.
Flick
2016-09-14 14:19:04 +0000 UTCPanel 1: "Aha! Squirrel Girl! I knew it!" Panel 3.1: "But where is she?" (what you have is technically correct, but it's awkward phrasing) Panel 4.2: "Let me guess, you failed?" Panel 5: "Or maybe you're not such a great hunter?"
Orannis
2016-09-14 13:34:29 +0000 UTC
