Squirrel Girl p.1
Added 2016-09-12 15:51:17 +0000 UTCSome patrons requested scetches with Squirrel Girl. But how about few scetch comic pages with kinda... a simple plot? Anyway, I've started.
As always, let me now about mistakes in text.
Comments
Thanks!
Flick
2016-09-13 12:24:38 +0000 UTCThanks!
Flick
2016-09-13 12:24:29 +0000 UTCDat body :)
Ayvuir Gaol
2016-09-13 03:08:55 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see where this goes. :3
Orannis
2016-09-13 02:16:29 +0000 UTCPart of me is thinking..."Welcome to another episode of Simple Plots" Do not know why. XD
Animeplayer
2016-09-12 18:29:45 +0000 UTC"I'm just read about you. In wiki." should be "I've read about you, on a wiki." "Whatever! I've come to Squirrel Girl." should be "Whatever! I've come for Squirrel Girl." "Don't lie me, lady. I were chasing her to this apartment!" should be "Don't lie to me, lady. I tracked her to this apartment!" "You're creep." should be "You're a creep." or what TheVerySeriousLewis suggested.
Zeus
2016-09-12 16:14:19 +0000 UTCI think "I was" would work better then "I were" also "You creep" instead of "You're creep." Also I'm so glad about this comic, the other Squirrel Girl stuff you did made me attracted to this character.
William Ambervein
2016-09-12 16:04:10 +0000 UTC
