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No, this school is only for DC) Thanks!

Flick

Does Korra and Asami go to the same school? I remember you did some schoolgirl stuff with them. Might be too late but: "Like if she's... poisoned" -> "As if she's... poisoned." "All you need is an impulse" - you could replace "impluse" with a synonym, but maybe better to say "All you need is a kick start!" -BM

Badgermushroom

Thanks! Corrected.

Flick

я-то не настаиваю. А что до "интересуется", то нынче все худфорумы таковы будто увлечение рисованием вообще в прошлом.)

DAHR

Да просто, по-моему, там народ не особо интересуется буржуйскими комиксами)

Flick

Киданул бы хотя бы на БОАшку кириллическую версию? Все веселуха. Не? п.с. Пролайкал, хотя в патреоне это хуй че значит.

DAHR

Nice comic! Acrobatics is about learning how to fall safely, and he definitely did that! Couple of minor fixes - panel 1 "...stop moping and..." and panel 2 "...need is an impulse!"

Andrew

Well that escalated quickly. From "I can't talk to her" to "Hands on boobs and face in cooch" as a form of 'Hello'

Smiling_Jack


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