some ecchi
Added 2016-05-13 16:44:23 +0000 UTC# 3
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No, this school is only for DC) Thanks!
Flick
2016-05-17 06:51:58 +0000 UTCDoes Korra and Asami go to the same school? I remember you did some schoolgirl stuff with them. Might be too late but: "Like if she's... poisoned" -> "As if she's... poisoned." "All you need is an impulse" - you could replace "impluse" with a synonym, but maybe better to say "All you need is a kick start!" -BM
Badgermushroom
2016-05-16 17:39:48 +0000 UTCThanks! Corrected.
Flick
2016-05-15 07:32:34 +0000 UTCя-то не настаиваю. А что до "интересуется", то нынче все худфорумы таковы будто увлечение рисованием вообще в прошлом.)
DAHR
2016-05-14 05:17:40 +0000 UTCДа просто, по-моему, там народ не особо интересуется буржуйскими комиксами)
Flick
2016-05-14 05:09:56 +0000 UTCКиданул бы хотя бы на БОАшку кириллическую версию? Все веселуха. Не? п.с. Пролайкал, хотя в патреоне это хуй че значит.
DAHR
2016-05-13 20:51:19 +0000 UTCNice comic! Acrobatics is about learning how to fall safely, and he definitely did that! Couple of minor fixes - panel 1 "...stop moping and..." and panel 2 "...need is an impulse!"
Andrew
2016-05-13 19:53:57 +0000 UTCWell that escalated quickly. From "I can't talk to her" to "Hands on boobs and face in cooch" as a form of 'Hello'
Smiling_Jack
2016-05-13 18:31:05 +0000 UTC
