Runaway to the Stars: Rough Pages 24
Added 2021-07-21 05:35:00 +0000 UTCHaha... anybody getting deju vu....
Also, wow, I'm late again, redrawing this Bip introduction scene for the third time is shaping up to be way more frustrating than I anticipated. I've spent so much time here already that it's triggering my perfectionism.
The Idrisah nervous spiral page has a bit more of a serious tone this time around, since in this version we've already gotten to see her be silly and it's a better time to establish her anxious personality (and get in a cute wifes moment). I hope it comes off more as "she is overly nervous about many things" and not that she's weirdly over-invested in Talita? ...Just like her, I'm overthinking things.
Comments
That's good to hear! Thank you!
Jay Eaton
2021-07-21 16:31:43 +0000 UTCIdrisah’s anxious personality does come through clearly, especially since Gillie interrupts her spiral with a smooch, which to me implies these spirals happen regularly.
Lopoddity
2021-07-21 14:16:49 +0000 UTC💖
Simone Spinozzi
2021-07-21 09:05:59 +0000 UTCYay it’s so great seeing the scene set in a broader context! Also love love the lighting for this.
pinglederry
2021-07-21 07:37:39 +0000 UTC
