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Runaway to the Stars: Rough Pages 20

Ah, nothing makes me more nervous than dialog heavy pages where the characters are just sitting around. This one covers a lot of new topics too-- I really try to write dialog for brevity and show rather than tell, which is part of why I draw these pages on paper smaller than they will appear in the book, because that way there literally isn't enough room to ramble.

Also, this is Idrisah and Gillie's married couple dynamic: 


Runaway to the Stars: Rough Pages 20

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This dialog does feel very natural, if that helps you feel better.

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Watching women's sports w ur wife is lesbian culture

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