Airsled: Rough Pages 10
Added 2018-11-05 01:39:43 +0000 UTCThings aren't perfect, but they're better than they were before.
And..... that's it! It's 10 pages below my estimate but like, the story's finished, so no point in making more. I'll actually be trying to keep it this length through the editing process, because multiples of four are very convenient for booklet printing.
Comments
aw, i'm so happy this ended so well. i'm glad for piawii getting a proper job, plus vrazii coming to have respect for them. i really, really enjoyed even just these rough sketches! you've built an incredible and intricate universe with you RTTS stories, and every time you build more onto it i can't even explain how happy i am. you mentioned booklets in your final word up there, so i'd just like to say that if or when you publish these in book form, if they're available for international shipping i would be overjoyed to purchase one for myself! i cherish diverse and unique sci-fi, and your comics are exactly that. <333
they_walks
2018-11-06 10:40:44 +0000 UTCVrazii is repairing the roof of a building using the the metal they purchased from the mainland. Since the rainy season is coming, it’s important that the housing on their island is ready to withstand storms. Some of the dialog establishing this point was a little wobbly, and hopefully the wrinkles will get ironed out in editing. If there’s anything else confusing or I misinterpreted your question let me know, since im currently editing and proofreading!
Jay Eaton
2018-11-05 09:47:05 +0000 UTCI am just a bit lost at the end. Maybe because I lack the cultural context, or missed something at the beginning? So, after they land, what exactly is happening and more importantly, why?
Aleks Haecky
2018-11-05 02:13:43 +0000 UTC
