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Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020

After many years, Minn-Erva has been able to capture and bind her old Star Force rival, Carol Danvers. The Kree sniper decides to enact some long time-coming revenge on the cocky heroine, in the form of some impending tickle torture.

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Okay, so, I did better than I thought.

I bunkered down and was able to finish the piece, and all the variants, in time for a release of today, rather than tomorrow. I'm glad I took the extra time though -- I kept finding little mistakes that I had made, or details that I forgot to add, or color in, so I was able to fix those and finally be happy with the resulting product.

This piece took a LONG TIME -- about twice the amount of time as any standard piece; it probably took me about as long as the Samus piece, except the devoted effort was into the Mind Fracker and Minn-Erva, as opposed to the more detailed background in the Samus piece. 

I get really antsy if I'm not accurate to costume design, so I pulled out my "The Art of Avengers Endgame" book, and referenced Carol's costume from the concept art; seriously, the amount of geometric lines and shapes in her costume all depend on each other in a very complex, interactive way, so I did a lot of erasing, and lots of sketching before I went in with the hard lineart to finalize. I could have made the whole process easier by just making up the finer details as I went along, but I feel that it shows -- sure, you would be able to tell that it's Captain Marvel, but I really want to translate that costume as accurately as possible.

Minn-Erva's costume, on the other hand, has a bit of creative liberty; since the only time we see her on film is when she's wearing her Star Force uniform, I figured I'd give her a stripped-down version of that here; the right pauldron, the left gauntlet, and the pants are the only pieces original to her uniform, whereas the top and right sleeve are just matching replacements. Besides, I wanted to give her a bit of a "dom" look, by showcasing her feminine figure a bit more, as opposed to Carol, who is in full costume.

The "Mind Fracker" is used in the Captain Marvel movie to extract Carol's memories -- once I saw that scene (why is she tied up barefoot?), I knew I had to draw something with it. Since I wanted her laying down, as opposed to being strung upside down like in the film, the one in this picture is modified; only the head pieces and the arm clamp are designed from the movie version, with the rest being 100% original. I decided to add a few lights to make it more visually interesting, while still allowing it to keep Carol as the more important visual factor. The little claw things at Carol's feet are currently doing some kind of scanning thing, I guess, but the idea is that they would be able to move in and actually tickle her.

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So, I'm very pleased with this piece overall, and I'm happy that no one complained it was delayed by 24 hours. You can find all of the variants attached: clean and dirty for bare, socked, and pantyhosed, a super-dirty version, and lineart.

Please let me know what you think in the comments below, and drop a like!



Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020 Carol's Dread / Minn-Erva's Revenge -- Patreon Exclusive January 2020

Comments

Thank you! Yeah, the barefoot aspect of this scene in the movie was so unnecessary, but I loved it. 🤣

Empirical Smut

This is awesome! I wish we had gotten such a scene in the movie! You really did great on this!

Wow, thanks so much -- I really appreciate you saying that! It means a lot to me. I really try to put extra effort into the Patreon Exclusives, since my patrons are being kind enough to essentially fund these pieces in the first place with their donations. For however long you plan to stay a Patron, I am super appreciative, and I hope you like the new content coming! :D

Empirical Smut

Thanks so much! I felt that I had to change it up for the smelly version to appeal to that audience. c;

Empirical Smut

Bah, I may need to do that version some day! Considering how much I love drawing the character, I probably will do it.

Empirical Smut

That's my favorite too. c:

Empirical Smut

Ok damn! This pic is so good, you captured their likeness perfectly, and bravo for having the patience and drive to go so detailed on the outfits. I've only just became a patreon (long time subscriber from DA though) and I can already tell from this pic alone (and the ton of fantastic variants) that I will not regret becoming a supporter. Please, keep you the amazing work and creating such good content.

fiamgoku

This is awesome, my dude! Love that the dialogue changes for the smelly versions! <3

Scrumblorm

I love the amazing artwork, the only shame is that she's not getting tickled.

DustyShelves

This is awesome. And the waiting was worth for <3 Love this. I mean: I love this double cause I am also a tickle fan and the smelly barfoot version is my favorite one <3

mily_wiedzma

The smelly ones are my faves!

Empirical Smut

Awesome set. I really love her stinky feet.

Killalot2k

Like a homing missile, I did. It was so strangely unnecessary in the film. XD

Empirical Smut

As soon as I saw that bit in the movie I knew you would zero in on that

LilBunno


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